Black_Bird
Not Innocent
- Joined
- Oct 26, 2001
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The story can be found here: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=29034
While this story was short, and probably could have been fleshed out more with dialog and conflict - there is one thing I have to give this author props for... a very inventive theme. I would like to see this writer take this story and create a myth surrounding the Pit of Nine Sisters - possibly fleshing out the characters and improving on the original.
While this story was short, and probably could have been fleshed out more with dialog and conflict - there is one thing I have to give this author props for... a very inventive theme. I would like to see this writer take this story and create a myth surrounding the Pit of Nine Sisters - possibly fleshing out the characters and improving on the original.
