The Perfect Orgasm

[Erlikkhan]

In writing porn I find the most difficult event to describe in words is the orgasm. I can come close for guys and make it up for the ladies based on reading how they describe it or having watched them when they reach that pinnacle. So here is the challenge for anyone who is game. In 50 words or less describe the perfect orgasm - male, female or both. I'll start.

Male - Every ounce of energy rushed to my groin. My balls shrunk. My cock swelled. A primal roar escaped from my throat. Hot cum exploded into my partner as swirling colors filled my brain and isolated my entire existence to that single moment of ecstacy.

Female - The pressure bulding in her tummy could no longer be contained. Her body stiffened. Her fingers dug into his flesh. An uncontrollable scream escaped from her throat just as her pussy exploded in a flood of cunt juice sending a surge of unbearable pleasure that ripped through her body.

 

[Guest]

"Ngggah!" I roared.

"Ngggah!" she gagged.

 

[Erlikkhan]

"Ngggah!" I roared.

"Ngggah!" she gagged.

Simple and to the point. Who needs words!

 

[Dar~]

Male: Pounding into her fiercly her felt his whole body tense as he found his release. An explosion of light fired behind his eyes and he gripped her ass tightly trying to remain standing. His knees were weak, but he kept thrusting his cock forcing his cum deep into her womb.

Female: Her heart raced faster as she felt her entire body clench tight. She felt wave after wave ofpleasure run through her. Her body arched and she grasped the bed trying desperately to maintain a connection to realiity while she was swept into euphoric paradise. Her breath caught and she saw stars.

 

[Wildcard Ky]

"Ngggah!" I roared.

"Ngggah!" she gagged.

BRAVO!!!

 

[BlackShanglan]

A thought, to which I will get by a tanger that I swear will eventually connect.

I am a great fan of Stephen King's earlier works. I find them quite terrifying at times - "It" and "The Shining" being some of the better examples - and very well written. Inevitably, however, they are dissapointing when brought to screen. Why? Because King, in my opinion, is at his very best when describing a horror so nebulous that it's nearly impossible to identify - like the brooding evil that rests in the old hotel in "The Shining," or the mysterious force beneath Derry in "It." When those threats are kept intangible, he is at his finest. When they are made too concrete - either in film or, as in "It," in writing at the end of the book, they always disappoint. The strength is in allowing the personal interpretations of the reader to permeate the text, and the imagination to do its work without fettering it too closely in words.

This I also think a better way to work toward the intense physical and emotional powerful that is orgasm as its best. Let it do its own work, and not tie it too tightly to specific physical sensations.

This is from "Letters from the Hesperus." It's a bit emotionally wrought for reasons that make sense in the text; it's also set in 1865, so the language runs rich. But it's a decent sense of what I'm aiming for. This is male/male:

"He took me in his mouth, so soft, so warm, so close about me – I shuddered and clung to him, and sobbed his name as through my body the adoration ran. Fierce. Aching. Ah, and ecstasy at once. I clung and kissed him through the pulse and wild thrill of my body."

And a female's experience from "Will" - character's first orgasm, and a bit startled/unknowing:

"He thrust deeper, harder, and more swiftly, until I could not but shudder under his touch, until I must cry out with the goodness of it, until his deep, hungry thrusting suddenly drew and gathered and burst, a pleasure that shot through me in a wild wave. "

Shanglan

 

[Guest]

"Ngggah!" she roared.

"Ngggah!" I gagged.

 

[Erlikkhan]

Female: Her heart raced faster as she felt her entire body clench tight. She felt wave after wave ofpleasure run through her. Her body arched and she grasped the bed trying desperately to maintain a connection to realiity while she was swept into euphoric paradise. Her breath caught and she saw stars.

You've proved my point. Men can't really describe a woman's orgasm. It always comes out sounding so mechanical.

 

[Erlikkhan]

"Ngggah!" she roared.

"Ngggah!" I gagged.

Is than a goat having an orgasm???

 

[Guest]

Is than a goat having an orgasm???

No. You.

 

[rgraham666]

I say we vote the word 'perfect' off the island.

 

[cantdog]

I don't recall the "pressure building". Did you make that up?

 

[impressive]

50 words is nowhere near enough to capture the bliss of a woman's orgasm. My orgasms take a few paragraphs.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Describing a perfect female orgasm is like trying to wade a river and step on the same piece of water twice. It just can't be done.

In the first place, every woman experiences something different.

In the second place, women experience individual orgasms differently.

Line me up with a big butch with a grudge and a big strap on, bend me over the sofa & fuck me to oblivion. Awesome orgasm.

Quite different from the orgasm that comes from long, soft, loving oral after dinner & a movie.

In scenario one I am likely to orgasm several times, with different levels of intensity and different sensation. While having any particular one, I am likely to say it's perfect, at least until the next one hits.

Simply descrbing the female orgasm is highly subjective and each author is prone to go with what she personally knows. Any description is likely to leave some women sying, "I never felt that way".

IMHO, the perfect orgasm, like the perfect lover, is a myth we aspire to, not something we can attain.

 

[yui]

Female orgasm from "Tokyo Rumba". A wee bit crude and far from perfect, but fifty words.

"I come. I fall. I tumble. My chest constricts, body seizes, and the elastic walls of my sex tighten, pulse and grab and tug at his thrusting cock. I moan and twist in his hands, coming, while he screws himself into my clenching hole in ever shorter more brutal slams..."

 

[impressive]

IMHO, the perfect orgasm, like the perfect lover, is a myth we aspire to, not something we can attain.

But it's sure as hell fun to try!

Colly's right, BTW -- each one is different and they're all good. I tend to wax poetic when writing orgasms.

 

[kendo1]

Just a thought
Men keep their eyes open-
Probably 80% visual ....that's why we like porn
Women tend to close their eyes
80% touch

Would she see stars?

 

[Dar~]

Just a thought
Men keep their eyes open-
Probably 80% visual ....that's why we like porn
Women tend to close their eyes
80% touch

Would she see stars?

Stars behind her eye lids. . are you female, I don't know but when I cum I get little flares of light, I also enjoy watching my husband, so who's to say. lets see yours b4 you bitch about others.

 

[BlackShanglan]

Line me up with a big butch with a grudge and a big strap on, bend me over the sofa & fuck me to oblivion.

I'm sure that there is more to this post, but for the life of me this is the only sentence I can find

Shanglan

 

[Colleen Thomas]

I'm sure that there is more to this post, but for the life of me this is the only sentence I can find

Shanglan

LOL,

 

[kendo1]

Not bitching,just asking

 

[Dar~]

Not bitching,just asking

Its all good, thought you were degrading me and my fantastic writing skills.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Earnest Hemingway believed that men were born with only so many orgasms in their body, and when they were used up, you were done.

I don't know about that, but I think that may be true about writing orgasms, so I'm not going to shoot my wad here. I'll save mine for stories.

That being said though, I find the orgasms I write now are emotional, not sensational. I'm not going to tell my readers what she was physically feeling, because that's really just not very sexy. The fact that she's feeling pins and needles or electric shocks doesn't do a thing for me. You might as well be describing her foot falling asleep.

I've come to the conclusion that what makes sex sexy is what it says about the emotions of the two people involved. Violent fucking is an expression of their hunger for each other; long and slow expresses love and tenderness. Oral is a kind of control and submission. In all these things, the acts are sexy because of what they say about the emotions of the people involved.

The orgasms I write these days have to do with total surrender to one's lover, because that's what happens in orgasm. You lose control of your body and your will. For those few moments your body goes into automatic and you belong entirely to your lover. You're not even yourself anymore: you're theirs. The way I look at it, it's about the most intimate thing that can happen between two people.

So when I write orgasms, I use a lot of visual and aural (not oral) because I want the reader to be there and perceive what's going on, but my subjective descriptions are full of surrender and abandonment and release; the obliteration of oneself and the fusion with the lover. I don't care about all that tingling and sparking and bubbling stuff. I want to know what happens to their souls.

 

[impressive]

Earnest Hemingway believed that men were born with only so many orgasms in their body, and when they were used up, you were done.

I don't know about that, but I think that may be true about writing orgasms, so I'm not going to shoot my wad here. I'll save mine for stories.

That being said though, I find the orgasms I write now are emotional, not sensational. I'm not going to tell my readers what she was physically feeling, because that's really just not very sexy. The fact that she's feeling pins and needles or electric shocks doesn't do a thing for me. You might as well be describing her foot falling asleep.

I've come to the conclusion that what makes sex sexy is what it says about the emotions of the two people involved. Violent fucking is an expression of their hunger for each other; long and slow expresses love and tenderness. Oral is a kind of control and submission. In all these things, the acts are sexy because of what they say about the emotions of the people involved.

The orgasms I write these days have to do with total surrender to one's lover, because that's what happens in orgasm. You lose control of your body and your will. For those few moments your body goes into automatic and you belong entirely to your lover. You're not even yourself anymore: you're theirs. The way I look at it, it's about the most intimate thing that can happen between two people.

So when I write orgasms, I use a lot of visual and aural (not oral) because I want the reader to be there and perceive what's going on, but my subjective descriptions are full of surrender and abandonment and release; the obliteration of oneself and the fusion with the lover. I don't care about all that tingling and sparking and bubbling stuff. I want to know what happens to their souls.

VERY well put, doc.

 

[kendo1]

There's not a bad bone in my body,
praise where praise is due