The Nazi Girls

goddess01

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Morning all,

Here's an idea I've been toying with for some time. I feel like it's just about refined enough in my mind now to be turned into something more than just an idea. I'm thinking this will be best done in the form of an online roleplay, hopefully with a long-term view. Though I realise there are other sections of the forum dedicated to such things, I hope that posting here will allow me to attract the more intelligent, educated minds among us....

The story centres on a group of teenage schoolgirls, most of whom are either socially awkward, quiet or shy. They are taken in by the lead character, a nasty, manipulative girl called Jenny, who uses them to form a "cult" of some description, using her new found followers for all manner of naughty activities. Their name, "The Nazi Girls", derives from the swastika tattoo that Jenny will insist all of her group are adorned with, once they reach the appropriate level of devotion.

As of this moment I have a few well rounded characters in mind. I'm looking for someone to take on one of these as a primary character, with the potential to dip in and out of the others as required. The successful applicant will be UK-resident (for time difference reasons), and willing to play via instant messenger. As mentioned above, I'm looking to make thing a long term arrangement. I'd be happy to hear from intelligent, articulate and creative girls or guys and am happy to hear associated ideas or other character suggestions. Equally willing to work a male character into this if that suits you better.
  • Jennifer "Jenny" White: A tall girl of solid build, Jenny is obnoxious, self centred and vain. Whilst she carries the aura of a "popular" girl, her abrasive nature saw her excluded from that group earlier on in school. Jenny is on the search for any lost, wandering souls she can draw into her web and use for her own purposes and enjoyment.
  • Joanna "Jo" Hamilton: Jenny's faithful best friend of the past few months, Jo has always found it difficult to integrate herself and as such was for some time something of a loner. She and Jenny fell into each other's lives 6 months ago, and Jo has grown to adore and idolise Jenny, doing anything she asks. Typical tasks so far include taking money from other students, selling drugs and buying her cigarettes, but I sense Jenny has grander plans for her first recruit.
  • Priya "Pri" Sharma: A polite, reserved British Indian girl from a respectable background, Priya can't help but take interest in Jenny and Jo. She longs for some excitement and has been wondering for some time whether this odd pair might be the ones to provide it - she certainly couldn't cut it with the popular girls.
In terms of story progression, I'm envisaging us starting by getting to know the girls and their relationships, then working in aspects of control and submission. The tasks Jenny asks her clique to perform will push their boundaries further, as they go from becoming friends to followers, then progressing into cult status.

I hope some of you find this an interesting idea - if so, please do get in touch via PM. I should say finally that I won't be responding to inquiries from those outside the UK, or from those who are looking to roleplay here on the forum.

Thanks for your time, and with best wishes,

Lucia
 
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this board is for story ideas. To me, it sounds as if you are more interested in role play.

Besides, I hate Nazis. So, I guess it should include something with humiliation.

You see, when I was in school, we had this guy who was a real Nazi (he always bragged how his grandfather fought in WW2.). He was a real racist and hated black people and people from foreign countries like Turkey. One day, this guy had a freak motorbike accident. He survived with massive injuries and was in hospital for some time. And the thing was: one of the nurses that had to take care of him was from Turkey, another one was black ... of course, he disliked it, but since he couldn't even pee alone, he dependent on this nurses.

As for the original story idea: maybe one of this girls chats on the internet with some guy. They don't swap photos at first, they only chat. After some time, the girl fells in love with this guy. But then, they decide to go on a blind date ... she is very surprised to see that her big love is black ...

Or what about a dark room. This girl has sex in a dark room. She loves it and tells the guy to meet her outside, in the light. But then, on the outside, she sees, that he is black. Or he wears a small necklace with a jewish star ...

A 3rd version could be: one of the Nazi girls terrorizes a black girl. This could include physical harm. The black girl seeks revenge. She knows this guy who is pretty ruthless. So they kidnap this Nazi girl. They held her captive for a few days. At first, they only want to torture (for example, she is forced to kiss the guy), but then, he starts to rape her. Finally, they let her go.

The Nazi girl is so embarrassed that she doesn't tell anyone about what happened. However, after some months, she notices some changes on her body ... her boobs and her belly get bigger ... this is when she realizes she is pregnant - with a black baby. And it is too late for an abortion ...
 
I hope some of you find this an interesting idea - if so, please do get in touch via PM. I should say finally that I won't be responding to inquiries from those outside the UK, or from those who are looking to roleplay here on the forum.

So, are you looking for an author to write (and submit) a story to Lit based on your idea here? Or are you looking for a PM/E-mail thing with someone in the UK?
 
Thanks very much for your interest and ideas - much appreciated!

I'm looking for someone to do a roleplay with, similar to the scenario above. The reason I am only looking for others in the UK is mainly because of time differences. I would prefer to roleplay via instant messenger (Yahoo! or Skype, for example) and in my experience, time differences make it very difficult to maintain regular online contact.

Happy to answer any other questions people have.

I should add that I do realise this section of the forum is for story ideas and as such I will remove the post if you would prefer it to be placed somewhere more appropriate. Unfortunately, the best that the "Sexual Roleplaying" section could give me is "Hi, so when can we f**k?". Not ideal, I'm sure you'll agree!
 
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