The Mud

[BareBackRider2]

Hi all. Sorry just so excited coz my 3rd story has been posted and yay... i got a 'H' from the editors

Not at all where I was intending the story to go, but if you like "non human" stuff, please let me know what you think.

The only reason im doing a shameless plug and feedback request is coz, in just 1 day, it's hit the dreaded "page 2" on the NEW list so yeah... let me know.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=201214

 

[Typo Fu Master]

Enjoyable

I liked it. I'm not sure how mainstream non-human erotica is, but to me it was nicely original.

You have some minor punctuation errors, but not enough to really detract from the story.

I had mixed feelings about the ending, but that's mainly because I like erotic horror, and would have enjoyed a more sinister ending. Her pleasure in the face of her predicament and impending doom seemed slightly unnnatural.

Still, the subject kept me reading, and overall, it was nicely done.

 

[Munachi]

Great!

I quite liked it, and I liked the ending, as it was open, and not a happy end in the proper sense... I agree a bit more sinister would have been even better but that is a matter of taste...

What does an "H" from the editors mean?

 

[BareBackRider2]

thanks guys. glad u liked it. yeah even after 3 proof readings, i still spot the odd thing so meh.

i have 3 possible plots in mind for a chap2 so who knows.........

i only had 2 but last night as i was starting to sleep this new idea came and OMG.

maybe the idea doesn't come from me at all :O lol.

I'll see what happens when I start writing. If its anything like chapter 1, even I wont know how it's going to end.

 

[Guest]

What does an "H" from the editors mean?

The H comes from the story receiving more than 10 votes and an average score of 4.5 or above. It is from the readers, not the editors, and depending upon the votes it can disappear.

An E would indicate an Editor's Choice Story, and a W would indicate a contest winner.

 

[BareBackRider2]

LOL sorry guys even I didn't realise that. I knew it stood for "hot" as thats what it says when you mouse over it, so I always just assumed the editors put it there.

Guess im always too busy reading stories rather than info about the site

Sorry again.