The mountain man and lady from the city (needing a person to help write the female)

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No longer looking for co-writer.. Not going to have the female role at all.

I was looking at some pics from a few years ago from when I was in Alaska. It got me thinking of doing a rp or story as a mountain man who lived his short but entire life out in the woods.

The plot/back story... there was 2 bothers who went to WWII. After the war one stayed in like New York city area, and the other moved "out west"and got lost. He found him self homesteading in Alaska. About 30 years later when he is his 50-60s. He met my mom and dad. When I was just a baby my mom taken a trip down to the lower states where she got killed. My dad would have abandoned are place to move in with the old man who I grew up calling grandpa. Its present day about 30 years later (depending if my writing partner wants me younger). Grandpa had died and left the cabin to one of his bothers grand kids (the female). It would be the first time she was really in the woods. I mean like 5-10 miles to the next family. About 30-40 minutes drive to the next small village, about a hour drive from any really city

How I see it starting is she drives up and sees buildings. One cabin looks like a home in sized. 2 or 3 bedroom basic layout, as the other is 1 room more shack (my home) She comes in thinking she will have the place to her self. She finds I am living there. I am 5'10 about 300 pounds. Solid built so I don't look that big other then a bit of a gut to give it away. I would have hair down to my shoulders that is kinda of wild (growing up with 3 guys we where not really trying to impress anyone) I would have seen females when I go into the city for my once or twice a year trip, but she will be the first I seen every day. When we meet I can see a bit of a confrontation from the woman about this is her land.. I would have a more relaxed humble view of no one owning the land. I can see she gets mad and may demand me to leave. I would counter fine in the morning I will be packed. I give 3-4 nights before bears and wolfs come calling. I would think a lady from the city would get scared knowing she cant shoot and being faced with the wild and deadly animals. Maybe this stranger wouldn't be bad idea to keep around.. I can see some allot of friction with the 2. As she would be more happy in a big mall and I am in my happy place. Middle of nowhere.

In time I can see her womanly charms taming this wild man. Maybe even her talking in him while he builds like a deck for her to tan on, and other odd jobs. As there views of each other grow. Sparks may start to fly into a full blown relationship later on.


If this story interests you. Please shoot me a pm if you want to do it in a story bace to be posted or as a role-play. I can send photos of the land area along with what I would look like. Should you want to co-write this. You can make the woman to fit you more better. My idea is more on the hardship from the land that he knows all to well and the city/wild points from from from her city life to his wild life.

To help get a feel for it, I would say Think of the old tv show Grizzly Adams https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y6lB0opgaCQ meets Jane from Tarzan & Jane.
 
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Good basis for a story, especially being a long-standing trope. Think "Beauty and the Beast."
 
I hope it will be good... If I can get a partner I know I am looking foreword to playing it out and see where it gose. In ether story or rp form.
 
Sounds like a fun story. One thought, dont make the female too helpless, give her a couple suprising skills (a marksman competitor, or amazing gardner, or fisherperson or something, something that blows mr mountain mans mind)
 
To be honest I havent really thought much about her role..I was going to let my co-writer make her fit them. I do see what your saying tho she should have some talents. I just dont know what a girly girl kind of personality would have out in the woods. Would she only stay to drive the mountain man off out of his home.

But yes If she did have some skills like gardening that would be something he could value. My self I would love to see her have some skills. Being from the city tho the question is what they would be...lol
 
Sounds like a fun story. One thought, dont make the female too helpless, give her a couple suprising skills (a marksman competitor, or amazing gardner, or fisherperson or something, something that blows mr mountain mans mind)

I think once she sees being sacred to touch anything and get her hands dirty, and drop the girly girl act. It would be good if she tries her hand at gardening and finds she really enjoys it.. She could also enjoy some eye candy as he cuts down more trees and splits them into planks to make a green house for her to work in..

With Jon seeing shes starting to pull her wait he may take notice more of her as a possible mate rather then a burden but needed land owner.

At the start with her being the girly type.. I can see her having a lot of internal conflict as the cabin wouldn't have power. So no cells/computer and anything like that. Bord-um may help win her over to working...

Anyways that's just some ideas. I would let my writing partner make her fit them. *shrugs* So to be honest I dont know what kind of woman he would be getting.. LOL
 
Update....still looking for help with the female role

I set there ages. Jon (the mountain man) will be 40. The woman will be 18. I will be starting this as a novel and will add a link odds are tomorrow.

I was looking at some pics from a few years ago from when I was in Alaska. It got me thinking of doing a rp or story as a mountain man who lived his short but entire life out in the woods.

The plot/back story... there was 2 bothers who went to WWII. After the war one stayed in like New York city area, and the other moved "out west"and got lost. He found him self homesteading in Alaska. About 30 years later when he is his 50-60s. He met my mom and dad. When I was just a baby my mom taken a trip down to the lower states where she got killed. My dad would have abandoned are place to move in with the old man who I grew up calling grandpa. Its present day about 30 years later (depending if my writing partner wants me younger). Grandpa had died and left the cabin to one of his bothers grand kids (the female). It would be the first time she was really in the woods. I mean like 5-10 miles to the next family. About 30-40 minutes drive to the next small village, about a hour drive from any really city

How I see it starting is she drives up and sees buildings. One cabin looks like a home in sized. 2 or 3 bedroom basic layout, as the other is 1 room more shack (my home) She comes in thinking she will have the place to her self. She finds I am living there. I am 5'10 about 300 pounds. Solid built so I don't look that big other then a bit of a gut to give it away. I would have hair down to my shoulders that is kinda of wild (growing up with 3 guys we where not really trying to impress anyone) I would have seen females when I go into the city for my once or twice a year trip, but she will be the first I seen every day. When we meet I can see a bit of a confrontation from the woman about this is her land.. I would have a more relaxed humble view of no one owning the land. I can see she gets mad and may demand me to leave. I would counter fine in the morning I will be packed. I give 3-4 nights before bears and wolfs come calling. I would think a lady from the city would get scared knowing she cant shoot and being faced with the wild and deadly animals. Maybe this stranger wouldn't be bad idea to keep around.. I can see some allot of friction with the 2. As she would be more happy in a big mall and I am in my happy place. Middle of nowhere.

In time I can see her womanly charms taming this wild man. Maybe even her talking in him while he builds like a deck for her to tan on, and other odd jobs. As there views of each other grow. Sparks may start to fly into a full blown relationship later on.


If this story interests you. Please shoot me a pm if you want to do it in a story bace to be posted or as a role-play. I can send photos of the land area along with what I would look like. Should you want to co-write this. You can make the woman to fit you more better. My idea is more on the hardship from the land that he knows all to well and the city/wild points from from from her city life to his wild life.

To help get a feel for it, I would say Think of the old tv show Grizzly Adams https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y6lB0opgaCQ meets Jane from Tarzan & Jane.
 
Still loking for co-writer.

Still need co-writer.. Wanting to do it by a few paragraphs at a time. Can be done by email or Pm.. Willing to do a tread for it and write the novel in book form from there.

Made my mind up. Going to do a novel. Got the story started.. With chapter 1 gramps life. Chapter 2 Jon being born and moving in with gramp. Then chapter 3 is Jons time.

stopped where the female comes into the story. I got her being 18ish somewhat sporty and girly girl. So theres room for her to grow tho she loves to hang out at the mall.

If no one wants to help write about her. I would be open to writting her out where she rejects the cabin/land and they find Jon gets it. Jon can spend time in the village or Juneua to find love. A new female my co-write can make her from scratch.

I started a link in the novels.. once it gets approved will add the link here. and will post the chapters.https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/2174971-The-mountain-man Shouldn't need a account to read...
 
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