Mistress Jorja
The 8th Deadly Sin
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This thread is a take on the events that transpired after the original short story. If you haven’t already, I highly suggest reading Richard Connell’s The Most Dangerous Game for the background and ideas behind this prose. The characters currently include Darrenfate, Jack Steed, and myself. If you’re interested in writing an additional character into the storyline, please PM me.
The sun shimmered in agony as the crisp, biting horizon of the Caribbean swallowed it alive. Blood red stained the silky white clouds where the glowing orb had lain only moments ago, wounded and dying. Night - not a gentle, soft night - impeded on the fading light with its lengthening shadows. This was one of those nights that slink in like a tomcat, silent and crouching, awaiting the hunt with its eyes of stars gleaming in malicious anticipation.
A clump of bushes by the shore swayed, and a young man staggered out. His left leg was blooming into a rose of blood around a ragged bullet wound. Panting, his heavy breathing was dwarfed only by the battering of the waves on the outward cropping of rocks a hundred or so feet off shore.
His naked body was patterned with a lattice of scratches from the thorn bushes that overpopulated the island. Half running, half sliding, he made it down the sandy cliff to the flat expanse of sugar-white beach.
Atop of the rise, the broad emerald leaves parted with a slight rustle, and out stepped the vision of a huntress. The toned, sun-baked skin of her torso was wrapped in strips of tanned leather, a shade darker then her bare shoulders and legs. Her long, straight hair was plaited back into two braids reaching her trim waist. They were an almost unnatural shade of burgundy, and a few escaped wisps were plastered to her forehead and the nape of her neck from the heat of the sultry Caribbean night.
She stepped onto the brink of the precipice, scanning the lay of the land until her gaze came to rest upon the still-standing form, black against the contrasting pale earth. Swiftly holstering the revolver at her side, only one of it's chambers empty, she braced her bare feet in a shooter's stance, sideways to her target.
"Do you fear me…?" she called out to the lone figure. Her voice hung in the murky dusk with it's smoky low notes caught on the dense molecules of the humid air. His silent denial was enough of a confirmation for her as she drew the arrow from the quiver slung low over one shoulder. Rolling the perfectly smooth shaft between her fingers, she notched it, drawing the slender bowstring back with the graceful ease telltale of a practiced archer.
"Cupid's arrow always flies straight…" she murmured under her breath, closing her right eye. Pursing her lips and sighting with her left eye, she released the arrow. The thwack of the tensed string against her leather arm brace and the high-pitched whine of the arrow making it's target reached her ears simultaneously.
Trotting down the slope with the uncanny ease of someone who not only knows the land well but fancies themselves part of it, she swung her bow behind her to and fro. She reached the stretch of beach where the man lay. He brandished his hunting knife with weak gusto, and the predator's haughty laugh sounded as she kicked the blade from his shaky grasp.
At the sight of her, silhouetted by the dusky sky, a change came over him. His breaths shortened, not merely at the physical pain she had dealt mercilessly, but at his undeniable lust for this creature of the night.
And in the moist oppression of the impeding darkness, she pounced on her prey, making slow love to the dying figure as the stars glared down from the heavens voyeuristically, intent upon watching this macabre romance with a morbid fascination.
The sun shimmered in agony as the crisp, biting horizon of the Caribbean swallowed it alive. Blood red stained the silky white clouds where the glowing orb had lain only moments ago, wounded and dying. Night - not a gentle, soft night - impeded on the fading light with its lengthening shadows. This was one of those nights that slink in like a tomcat, silent and crouching, awaiting the hunt with its eyes of stars gleaming in malicious anticipation.
A clump of bushes by the shore swayed, and a young man staggered out. His left leg was blooming into a rose of blood around a ragged bullet wound. Panting, his heavy breathing was dwarfed only by the battering of the waves on the outward cropping of rocks a hundred or so feet off shore.
His naked body was patterned with a lattice of scratches from the thorn bushes that overpopulated the island. Half running, half sliding, he made it down the sandy cliff to the flat expanse of sugar-white beach.
Atop of the rise, the broad emerald leaves parted with a slight rustle, and out stepped the vision of a huntress. The toned, sun-baked skin of her torso was wrapped in strips of tanned leather, a shade darker then her bare shoulders and legs. Her long, straight hair was plaited back into two braids reaching her trim waist. They were an almost unnatural shade of burgundy, and a few escaped wisps were plastered to her forehead and the nape of her neck from the heat of the sultry Caribbean night.
She stepped onto the brink of the precipice, scanning the lay of the land until her gaze came to rest upon the still-standing form, black against the contrasting pale earth. Swiftly holstering the revolver at her side, only one of it's chambers empty, she braced her bare feet in a shooter's stance, sideways to her target.
"Do you fear me…?" she called out to the lone figure. Her voice hung in the murky dusk with it's smoky low notes caught on the dense molecules of the humid air. His silent denial was enough of a confirmation for her as she drew the arrow from the quiver slung low over one shoulder. Rolling the perfectly smooth shaft between her fingers, she notched it, drawing the slender bowstring back with the graceful ease telltale of a practiced archer.
"Cupid's arrow always flies straight…" she murmured under her breath, closing her right eye. Pursing her lips and sighting with her left eye, she released the arrow. The thwack of the tensed string against her leather arm brace and the high-pitched whine of the arrow making it's target reached her ears simultaneously.
Trotting down the slope with the uncanny ease of someone who not only knows the land well but fancies themselves part of it, she swung her bow behind her to and fro. She reached the stretch of beach where the man lay. He brandished his hunting knife with weak gusto, and the predator's haughty laugh sounded as she kicked the blade from his shaky grasp.
At the sight of her, silhouetted by the dusky sky, a change came over him. His breaths shortened, not merely at the physical pain she had dealt mercilessly, but at his undeniable lust for this creature of the night.
And in the moist oppression of the impeding darkness, she pounced on her prey, making slow love to the dying figure as the stars glared down from the heavens voyeuristically, intent upon watching this macabre romance with a morbid fascination.