The Morning After

[sirhugs]

How about some introspective reflective stories told from the viewpoint of a participant or observer the morning after?

this could be used in almost any category - how does it feel the day after The First Time? or the first Gay Male experience? Or the first time sharing your Loving wife ( or being that wife)? The first time dressing in panties, and stockings? And of course, the whole incest taboo is fertile....

 

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My first thought when I saw the title was pregnancy - you know, with "the morning after" pill.

But, maybe this could be an incest pregnancy, or loving wives pregnancy...How does the husband feel the morning after knowing that some other man got his wife pregnant?

 

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My first thought when I saw the title was pregnancy - you know, with "the morning after" pill.

But, maybe this could be an incest pregnancy, or loving wives pregnancy...How does the husband feel the morning after knowing that some other man got his wife pregnant?

ties nicely into the "knocking up " thread. Like the woman suspects she's pregnant, debates whether to take the Morning After Pill. In the process of course, she reflects on the great or abusive quality of the sex.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

How about if a man gets drunk and ends up in bed with his platonic friend/roommate, who just happens to be a lesbian. He is wondering if it is even POSSIBLE that they actually fucked, since she is supposed to be gay.

 

[sirhugs]

How about if a man gets drunk and ends up in bed with his platonic friend/roommate, who just happens to be a lesbian. He is wondering if it is even POSSIBLE that they actually fucked, since she is supposed to be gay.

I like

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

I like

Thanks. I particularly like the idea of the suspense. Did he fuck her or not?

 

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Thanks. I particularly like the idea of the suspense. Did he fuck her or not?

And how would you work in the oh-so-important sex scene?

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

And how would you work in the oh-so-important sex scene?

Gradual flashbacks, here and there, eventually making it clear that they DID fuck.

 

[bisexplicit]

Gradual flashbacks, here and there, eventually making it clear that they DID fuck.

Sounds perfect, I love it.

The flashbacks, I think, could be a great tease for the reader. Snippest of oh-so-hot sex scenes, and then being cut off.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Sounds perfect, I love it.

The flashbacks, I think, could be a great tease for the reader. Snippest of oh-so-hot sex scenes, and then being cut off.

Yep, and it would reinforce the idea that this was a "once in a lifetime" deal: since she IS a lesbian, and was simply drunk that time, nothing like that will happen again.
Or will it?

 

[Texguy84]

As a twist, you could have him actually hook up with an entirely different girl (as revealed towards the end of the story) who also hooked up with the lesbian (a MFF story with no connection between the M and the second F). They end up cuddling when the first girl gets up to find a bathroom or something.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

As a twist, you could have him actually hook up with an entirely different girl (as revealed towards the end of the story) who also hooked up with the lesbian (a MFF story with no connection between the M and the second F). They end up cuddling when the first girl gets up to find a bathroom or something.

You mean AFTER the incident in question?

 

[sirhugs]

I think it would be more likely that the platonic gal pal's lebian gf is secretly bi and decides to seduce the guy after the tryst...to get even?

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

I think it would be more likely that the platonic gal pal's lebian gf is secretly bi and decides to seduce the guy after the tryst...to get even?

It's a thought.

 

[Texguy84]

You mean AFTER the incident in question?

Well, the story starts with the guy waking up cuddling with the hot naked lesbian, trying to remember how he ended up there. Then flashback to when he got to the party the night before, and have him joking around with the platonic lady friend and trying to get the hot lesbian to "switch teams".

Eventually, his female friend manages to hook up with the lesbian instead, and the guy joins in (but only with the female friend, I'm willing to let lesbians remain as lesbians for the duration of the story). They fall asleep afterwards, guy cuddling the friend cuddling the lesbian, and the next morning, the friend gets up before the others and goes to find coffee or something, and the other two end up scooting together to stay warm while they're asleep.

If you want to play up the comedy angle, you could have them wake up, realize their apparant situation at the same time (before they remember what happened, and have one of those "Did I... with you... did we..?!" simultaneous dialogue moments or something.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Ah, I was thinking differently.

Your idea is interesting too.

My concept is that the lesbian doesn't INTEND to do it with a guy (duh, she's gay), but they are both so loaded, and she is so pissed off at her ex-girlfriend for cheating on her, that they end up in bed as a fluke. I was thinking that they both have flashbacks, though to her it's kind of gross, while he finds it hot. Of course, he knows that it can never happen again. He feels bad too, like he raped her or something, until she reminds him that they were BOTH drunk, so no one was tricking the other into bed. He was also somewhat upset that he thinks that he has no chance with this sexy co-worker, while her younger, more sentimental sister is constantly trying to be his girlfriend. He doesn't want a conservative girlfriend like her. He wants her wilder sister.

I have a twist in mind for the end....won't say what it is...

 

[Texguy84]

He was also somewhat upset that he thinks that he has no chance with this sexy co-worker, while her younger, more sentimental sister is constantly trying to be his girlfriend. He doesn't want a conservative girlfriend like her. He wants her wilder sister.

I have a twist in mind for the end....won't say what it is...

Wait! Wait! Make them TWINS!

That's one cliche I NEVER get tired of.

Sorry, been drinking much more sugary drinks today than I'm used to.

 

[sirhugs]

Ah, I was thinking differently.

Your idea is interesting too.

My concept is that the lesbian doesn't INTEND to do it with a guy (duh, she's gay), but they are both so loaded, and she is so pissed off at her ex-girlfriend for cheating on her, that they end up in bed as a fluke. I was thinking that they both have flashbacks, though to her it's kind of gross, while he finds it hot. Of course, he knows that it can never happen again. He feels bad too, like he raped her or something, until she reminds him that they were BOTH drunk, so no one was tricking the other into bed. He was also somewhat upset that he thinks that he has no chance with this sexy co-worker, while her younger, more sentimental sister is constantly trying to be his girlfriend. He doesn't want a conservative girlfriend like her. He wants her wilder sister.

I have a twist in mind for the end....won't say what it is...

some of us might enjoy the irony if she found it HOT, but that disgusted her at the same time, wheras he is hoping she doesn't ask, cause he found it less than stunning...

 

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Wait! Wait! Make them TWINS!

That's one cliche I NEVER get tired of.

Sorry, been drinking much more sugary drinks today than I'm used to.

the sisters are twins? or the guy and the first gal?

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

some of us might enjoy the irony if she found it HOT, but that disgusted her at the same time, wheras he is hoping she doesn't ask, cause he found it less than stunning...

Well, that would suggest that she was not 100% lesbian, or maybe she was just bi-curious and enjoyed his cock, but didn't find HIM all that attractive. Maybe he enjoyed it, too, but he found like he was just a dildo to her, sensing that she found the rest of him unattractive or ugly. Or maybe any slight opennness to hetero sex was opened up by the alcohol. Say she's only 80% lesbian, as it turns out.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

the sisters are twins? or the guy and the first gal?

That's what I'm wondering.

 

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That's what I'm wondering.

because it might be quite novel to have a guy and his lesbian twin sister waking up each wondering if they've done the nasty- with EACH OTHER!- and then add the flashbacks and the complications with the lesbian gf.

 

[AlienHunter]

How about some introspective reflective stories told from the viewpoint of a participant or observer the morning after?

this could be used in almost any category - how does it feel the day after The First Time? or the first Gay Male experience? Or the first time sharing your Loving wife ( or being that wife)? The first time dressing in panties, and stockings? And of course, the whole incest taboo is fertile....

This actually a damn good idea and as you said it can fit into any category.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

because it might be quite novel to have a guy and his lesbian twin sister waking up each wondering if they've done the nasty- with EACH OTHER!- and then add the flashbacks and the complications with the lesbian gf.

Hmmm....see I was thinking more of a pair of co-workers, personal trainers at a gym.
He is a womanizing bachelor and she a hard-core lesbian (but more femme than butch). They are also roommates, pending her planned move into her gf's apartment. Then she catches her gf in bed with a man. Turns out that the gf is bi, but not good bi. Bad bi, as in she thinks that being bi gives her a license to cheat.

The lesbian PT then cancels the move, which is cool with the bachelor. He is fine with her as a platonic friend, but that's because they have gotten to be close friends. Anyway, they both get upset and depressed one Saturday night, and they start drinking one of his bottles of Smirnoff. Before they know, he doesn't have any more bottles of Smirnoff. And the lesbian has lost her "technical virginity".

Then come the flashbacks, the awkwardness, until they both decide to accept that it was simply a fluke.

 

[sirhugs]

Hmmm....see I was thinking more of a pair of co-workers, personal trainers at a gym.
He is a womanizing bachelor and she a hard-core lesbian (but more femme than butch). They are also roommates, pending her planned move into her gf's apartment. Then she catches her gf in bed with a man. Turns out that the gf is bi, but not good bi. Bad bi, as in she thinks that being bi gives her a license to cheat.

The lesbian PT then cancels the move, which is cool with the bachelor. He is fine with her as a platonic friend, but that's because they have gotten to be close friends. Anyway, they both get upset and depressed one Saturday night, and they start drinking one of his bottles of Smirnoff. Before they know, he doesn't have any more bottles of Smirnoff. And the lesbian has lost her "technical virginity".

Then come the flashbacks, the awkwardness, until they both decide to accept that it was simply a fluke.

that works too