The Mind Game

[MasterKenz2000]

This is not really a mind control thing, but about a young man who potray a very loving enviroment for troubled female in his town. He talks about the beauty, lust and love to convince them to leave their trouble home and join him in his old mansion. He call this place the Heaven on earth.

One or more female writer are welcome. Please begin by responding to the ad below.


The story begin:

A small advertisement artical in a femine magazine reads:
For ladies only. Having trouble in your relationship, marriage, unhappy with your current life? Call 8678XXXX for an appointment. Free consultation and satisfaction assured. The Heaven is near.

 

[MasterKenz2000]

bump......... anyone??

 

[SalesGirlAnna]

Annabelle Morris was 29 years old, a very sucessfull business woman, and bored with her life.

Annabelle grew up in a Upper Middle Class family. She was an only child and her parents loved her very much. She was friends with just about everyone in school and very popular. She got very good grades in school and was able to get a full scolorship to Harvard. She graduated from the busness school when she was 22 and now 7 years later she was Vice President of Sales for a large mulit-national corporation. She had a great apartment, a great job, everything she could want... But, there was something missing...

She was flipping through her favorite magazine one day and saw the ad... She thought to herself, "Couldn't hurt to call..." So she picked up the phone and dialed the number.

 

[MasterKenz2000]

To Annabelle Morris

It was such a dissappointment I suppose when the female caller says hello and she was greeted by my answering machine.

"Please leave your name, age and describe your reason for calling. Describe your unhappiness and we will call you back shortly to invite you to The Heaven on Earth if your case is accepted."

I was actually listening to the recorded conversation and waiting for your reply. Somehow, I believe this is different from most of the caller that comes with abusive husband, forced marriage to a drunked, left by their boyfriends, raped by the step father etc. I was captured by her firm voice and high level of confident.

She begin to talk over the phone..............

 

[SalesGirlAnna]

"Hello, My Name's Annabelle Morris, I'm 29 years old and I'm calling because I'm bored with my life. I have a great apartment, a great job, everything I could want... But, there is something missing... I'm hopeing you can help me..." Then she left her work number, her cell number and home number.

 

[MasterKenz2000]

Ben picks up the phone and return her call. He speaks with full confidence "Hello, Annabelle? I am Ben. I heard your messege moment ago and like to invite you to Heaven on Earth. You had a problem of loneliness my dear and you will find the root of this problem here. Do you have a boy friend?"

He gave her his address which comes with a digital code to access his highly secured mansion.

 

[SalesGirlAnna]

She wrote down his address and the code to the front gate. "No, I don't have a boyfriend... What time should I be there?"

 

[MasterKenz2000]

"You can come anytime after 2pm. I need to have a short interview with you before telling you all the house rule and requirement. Oh yes, I am old fashion and I don't like girls to wear pants, so you will come in skirt or dress."

 

[SalesGirlAnna]

"No problem... I'll see you then..." Annabelle hung up the phone and made the arangements for her to leave work early. She arived at the address it was far in the country. She entered the code to the front gate and drove up to the mansion.

She got out of the car, She dressed in her best work outfit, a dark blue blazer with matching skirt that went to her knees, white stockings,black Mary Jane pumps with a 2" heel, a Crisp blue blouse, pearl necklace and earrings. She had her long red hair pulled back into a bun. Then she walked up to the front door and rang the doorbell.

 

[MasterKenz2000]

The mansion looks rundown from outside as it was very old and kind of eerie. The antic door opens and you are greeted by a bunch of happy women. The cute blonde Eva leads you to the guess room, assuring you that Ben would be here very soon.

You are left alone there in this neatly arranged room without much information.

Ben was watching you from his hidden camera carefully, studying your movement and action, trying to learn as much as he could about you.

He straighten his Hawaiian suit and step into the room.

"Welcome to Heaven on Earth." offering a warm handshake and a hug. "Please sit down."

 

[SalesGirlAnna]

Annabelle was surprised by the hug and returned it with a hug of her own. "Thank you, It's nice to be here." She said as she sat down. She smoothed out her skirt and crossed her legs. "You have a very lovely place here..."

 

[MasterKenz2000]

Ben looks straight into her eyes and speaks cheerfully. "Thank you, that is a compliment. Can I start asking some questions?" he did not wait for your answer and continue.

"You told me earlier that you are popular, lots of friends that mean boys and girls. Excellent at your career and no boyfriend. Do you mean never had a boyfriend? Are you a virgin?" he pause for a moment and before you could answer him, he spoke again. "Tell me Annabelle, you are in a corporate company and at times, some guys would tell dirty jokes. What would you think of that? I mean would you get uneasy, angry, joining him or shy away?"

 

[SalesGirlAnna]

Annabelle was shocked at the speed he was asking her, "Well, I had boyfriends in college and no I'm not a virgin. I just don't have a boyfriend right now. My job takes up a lot of my time and I don't have the time for a relationship. As far dirty jokes go, I don't really like it when my male coworkers tell dirty jokes."

 

[MasterKenz2000]

Staning up from his desk, he walks towards her and behind her. Gently resting his strong hands on her shoulder. "You had come to the right place but your life and mind needs a lot of modification to get happy. "

Leaning forward he whispered into her ears. "You will be perfectly happy like all those girls you see on your way in and you can keep your career and leave as you wish. The only condition is, you need to strictlly follow the rules of the house."

Walking back to his chair, he conclude. "If you fail to follow the rules of the house, you will be punished. Sign her if you can agree to the terms and condition." he pushes a piece of simple contract to her.

 

[SalesGirlAnna]

"OK... But what are the rules of the house?" she said, "I always like to know what the terms of a contract are before I sign..."

 

[MasterKenz2000]

"This place is known as The Heaven on Earth. So I am inviting you to become a member and basically allows you to stay here if you belive this place can actually makes you happy." Eva came in with two glasses of cold drink and Ben thanks him with a gently kiss on her cheek. "Thank you"

He sip his drink and continue "Have a drink. You will be given a room where you can decorate as you wish, it is yours. We do not collect rental or payment for food or anything but we had a contribution box in the hall where you can drop a cheque, cash or anything you wish to contribute. You can freely speak to anyone you wish or go to the pool, gym but you cannot go up the golden staircase that leads to the upper floor. It is only mend for those with full membership only."

"During your stay, you must observe 3 things.
First, no under garment allow in the house. no pantie under your skirt regardless its long or short and no bra at all time.
Second. All must attend the morning gathering eventhough you can choose not to participate in the activities.
Lastly, no virgins are allow in this place. So you had to go through a ceremony where you offer your virginity. Just a precaution if you are not telling the thruth."

Pushing the paper at you again "Sign here if you do not have any questions"

 

[SalesGirlAnna]

"OK... But before I sign..." She stood up and turned her back to him. she took off her blazer and a blouse. and removed her bra. She redressed her top half and then reached under her skirt and removed her panties. She placed them on his desk as she signed the contract and took a drink of her drink.

 

[smiley8022]

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Alex Carson had just turned 20 last week and was a college student.

Alex had always been a partier girl yet not always intimate. She grew up in a small town until the age of 10 when her parents moved her out to the city. When she got the credit cards, anything she wanted, no supervision, lots of boys yet never intimacy of her own choosing and then her parents died when she was 15, a car accident. She got on with her life but since then it made her think alot of who she was and what she was doing with her life, especially after her sister got married and when the two would stay at her place that creep of a husband would sneak into her room at nights and try to get in bed with her, touching her and other things but he never got the chance to take her full on.

Last week on her birthday one of her gifts was a year subsciption to her favorite magazine obsession. The first month came in this week. She smiled and plopped down reading an ad article. Heaven on Earth was the name. She thought about it for ten minutes then she picked up her phone and dialed the number in the ad.

She sighed listening to the phone's dialing rings... once..twice...

 

[MasterKenz2000]

To Alex Carson

The phone rang and usual, I allow the answering machine to do its job.

"Please leave your name, age and describe your reason for calling. Describe your unhappiness and we will call you back shortly to invite you to The Heaven on Earth if your case is accepted."

 

[smiley8022]

Alex sighed back into her bed as she heard an answering machine take into place, she really was hoping to speak to somebody there, not a machine. But this would help her, help her tell a little bit of her background and then hope for a reply.

She bit her lip hearing the beep and let out a breath before speaking.

"Uhm, Hello my name is Alex Carson, I recently turned twenty last week, and I'm calling to see what the ad is about, how it can help me. Well basically I live a supposedly happy life, but yet I'm not all that happy, there's something not there that I need. I consider my self an artist but my parents died five years ago, and my sister's new husband likes to sneak in my room at night and mess around with me, and I want to leave to somewhere else before he can get a chance to rape me fully. Thanks for listening when you do get this message. Bye"

 

[MasterKenz2000]

Alex

He listen to her carefully and called her after much thought. "Hello Alex, I am Ben. I heard your messege moment ago and like to invite you to Heaven on Earth. Come and I will show you real happiness. You must come in skirt for Heaven on Earth do not allow pants for girls." He gave her the address and agreed to see her the next morning.

 

[smiley8022]

Alex grinned when she got a call a little bit later as she was happy she listened and shreiked a little with joy"Oh thanks so much Ben, yes, happiness, and no pants. Thank you so much, I'll see you tomorrow morning!"

 

[MasterKenz2000]

to Alex

Ben knows she is curious and will be here very early. He waited for her as usual, in the guess room as Eva show her the way. "Welcome to the Heaven on Earth. I am Ben." Offering a hand shake and follow by a hug.

"Please sit down, my dear. I need to ask a few questions before we proceed any further"

He sat on the chair opposite her and begin to speak again "Tell me what kind of guys do you like? and what you hate most? Do you have a boyfriend anyway."

 

[MasterKenz2000]

to Annabelle

Ben press at the buzzer on his desk and a mask man came in to his assistance. He pointed at the man and said "I have 12 of them all on mask and they are called guard. You can ask for their help whenever you wish and they are very obedient."

He then speak to the man "Show her around. Show her the swimming pool, gym, kitchen, games room, garden and all my female guess. You should be back by 5 for dinner."

The man naked waist up only covered with a piece of loin cloth, a small towel like rag hanging from their waist.

"I will see you tonight after dinner in your room Annabelle. I will tell you interesting story." he make his remark just before she step out of the room with the guard.

 

[SalesGirlAnna]

Annabelle and the guard looked all over the mansion and she she knew that she would love it here. Dinner that night was grilled chicken breast, roasted potatos and a small green salad. She talked with some of the other guests and had a great time.

After dinner she was shown to her room. Just as you walked into the room was the bathroom door. Next to it was the door for the closet. Then, there was a little sitting area with a couch and a chair. There was a wall that separated the sitting area from where the bed was. On the other side of the room was a little desk with a chair and the dresser with the TV on top.

She hug her blazer in the closet and walked over to the coutch. She unfastend the small bucks on her shoes and slipped them off her feet. She was about to turn the TV on when a knock came on the door. She looked through the peephole and saw it was Ben.

"Hi, Ben... Come on in..."