The Millenium Project Thread II
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How is Butterfly? Can she talk yet? I told ya she was horny!
Great story Fallen Angel!!! But let me clear up a few misconceptions. The part about "Deborah may have bitched" and "Deborah turned to protest" are OK. But I'm not really a redhead. Blonde mostly and who can't tell? Well, maybe strawberry blonde in the sunlight.
Fallen Angel, speaking of redheads, what did that redhead say when you kissed her? What redhead you say? The redhead on the end of Mrhappy's (bent) dick. Did that make it all better, Mrhappy, you poor baby? And just where is SpecialK going to "head" in her story? I think she has a serious case of penis envy! LOL!
Well, this "Project" is more fun than you shake a stick, 'er, I mean dick at. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters. Helle, don't you forget I nominated you for "Sexiest Author." I can always change my mind and switch to you know who.
Hey Angel, you got that part about us measuring Dixon screwed up. It's the right angle, Angel, that angles the angels. You know, get it up and keep it up. And no fair Viagra! We want to do this on our own.
Great story Fallen Angel!!! But let me clear up a few misconceptions. The part about "Deborah may have bitched" and "Deborah turned to protest" are OK. But I'm not really a redhead. Blonde mostly and who can't tell? Well, maybe strawberry blonde in the sunlight.
Fallen Angel, speaking of redheads, what did that redhead say when you kissed her? What redhead you say? The redhead on the end of Mrhappy's (bent) dick. Did that make it all better, Mrhappy, you poor baby? And just where is SpecialK going to "head" in her story? I think she has a serious case of penis envy! LOL!
Well, this "Project" is more fun than you shake a stick, 'er, I mean dick at. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters. Helle, don't you forget I nominated you for "Sexiest Author." I can always change my mind and switch to you know who.
Hey Angel, you got that part about us measuring Dixon screwed up. It's the right angle, Angel, that angles the angels. You know, get it up and keep it up. And no fair Viagra! We want to do this on our own.
Deborah nope can't speak yet!
But, I'm feeling pretty damn good! Just remembor my chapter is coming up after helle's so hmmmmm what can I do for you? Any requests?
Yea your right Deborah this has been a big joy and a laugh. Hope the next project will be just as much fun.
Yea your right Deborah this has been a big joy and a laugh. Hope the next project will be just as much fun.
Ahhh, finally; relief. Thanks deb for the 'kiss it and make it better' therapy.
Great chapter FallenA! Everyone got to join in on the fun. I must say, however that you and butterfly had more fun than most ever dream about. I could really believe that what I was reading was going on right here next to me. (scared the hell out of my cat until I brought out the mouse...then she wanted to play. good thing I had her de-clawed! You'd think she'd know the difference between a two-eyed mouse and a one-eyed trouser snake).
Great chapter FallenA! Everyone got to join in on the fun. I must say, however that you and butterfly had more fun than most ever dream about. I could really believe that what I was reading was going on right here next to me. (scared the hell out of my cat until I brought out the mouse...then she wanted to play. good thing I had her de-clawed! You'd think she'd know the difference between a two-eyed mouse and a one-eyed trouser snake).
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Well glad everyone liked it so far. It's nice to have great chapters before yours, to start from and play off of. I had several more ideas I wanted to use but just ran out of time. Deborah you were supposed to wind up with me in the cowboy sleeper when we went to look at the old skin with indian writings on it.
Crystal you got left in the room by HS and yes you charcter got the shyness from your post on trying anal but hey you'll get over it I'm sure. I tried to weave a scenario with three couples on the bed but it lost the personal touch and read more like a report.
Mrhappy I wasn't sure how changing tenses was going to work with the scene. I like to write in past tense but the main action didn't flow except in present tense. (Who knew that I would ever need the stuff I learned in English class, go figure. Wish now that I had taken some of the required courses in my few college dazes)
Well I enjoyed it but I'm glad my part of the writing is over. Looking forward to everyone else's contribution and could somebody see to it that Zeke gets fed?
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Crystal you got left in the room by HS and yes you charcter got the shyness from your post on trying anal but hey you'll get over it I'm sure. I tried to weave a scenario with three couples on the bed but it lost the personal touch and read more like a report.
Mrhappy I wasn't sure how changing tenses was going to work with the scene. I like to write in past tense but the main action didn't flow except in present tense. (Who knew that I would ever need the stuff I learned in English class, go figure. Wish now that I had taken some of the required courses in my few college dazes)
Well I enjoyed it but I'm glad my part of the writing is over. Looking forward to everyone else's contribution and could somebody see to it that Zeke gets fed?
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I am stunned. Didn't know, hadn't even thought about it being popular. I just wrote it for you'll.
I'm sure that the next in line on both threads will raise the bar a little higher. I thought that all the chapters have been winners.
I'm sure that the next in line on both threads will raise the bar a little higher. I thought that all the chapters have been winners.
Jesus Fallen, that was a good chapter - I hope that none of that inspiration comes from Zeke. And dammit butterfly, how come you get all the luck - I'm sitting around reading poetry and you're getting shagged for America! Most unfair I feel - I gave it an awesome vote anyway though!
Love,
Crystal
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Love,
Crystal
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I think we should have a vote on which chapter was the best. When they are all posted, that is...
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HS, I think that a little healthy competion is good normally, but all the stories written thus far have been excellent, and we have seen some incredible talent in all the authors, but I would hate to take anything away from that by having to vote of it and it might put some pressure on the upcoming writers in the chain. This is for fun. As for your suggestion, that would probably be a good idea for a future chain where the reader could vote on their favorite part.
Hey Fallen congrats to you on the top 20! WOW!
Crystal..I don't know what I can say to ya kiddo...age/experience just damn lucky I think...hehe. Shall I make it up to you in my chapter, I'll let you have some fun okay!
And Eve, thanks for what you said to HS, great Idea but I would most definetly feel pressure since this is the first time I'll be writing...But again that is just me..
Crystal..I don't know what I can say to ya kiddo...age/experience just damn lucky I think...hehe. Shall I make it up to you in my chapter, I'll let you have some fun okay!
And Eve, thanks for what you said to HS, great Idea but I would most definetly feel pressure since this is the first time I'll be writing...But again that is just me..
Hey Laurel...HSWriter has a good idea, but I agree with *eve*, it might put some of us on the spot. Plus I'd hate risking another healthy debate like we just got over.
I was thinking though....hhmmm; Maybe you could somehow join all the chapters together in each thread, do a little judiscious editing, give each thread a name and post it as a new story written by "anonymous" or whoever.
This may not be possible with this one since it's been out there for everyone to read. Would it be possible to let only the participating writers of the next threads view the story as it builds. (view their own thread only...and not be able to see what the other thread is doing). Then join the chapters together, post it and let the readers vote. Of course you'd have to disable the voting capabilities of the contributors. (I know we're all honorable...but, I've heard there's no honor amongst theives...or something like that.)
Even if we don't publish jointly, it might be interesting to see how each group evolves their thread without benefit of viewing the other one.
I was thinking though....hhmmm; Maybe you could somehow join all the chapters together in each thread, do a little judiscious editing, give each thread a name and post it as a new story written by "anonymous" or whoever.
This may not be possible with this one since it's been out there for everyone to read. Would it be possible to let only the participating writers of the next threads view the story as it builds. (view their own thread only...and not be able to see what the other thread is doing). Then join the chapters together, post it and let the readers vote. Of course you'd have to disable the voting capabilities of the contributors. (I know we're all honorable...but, I've heard there's no honor amongst theives...or something like that.)
Even if we don't publish jointly, it might be interesting to see how each group evolves their thread without benefit of viewing the other one.
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Hmm... I have a few issues with the idea of voting on stories (see my response on the "Has Doubts" thread on the General board). We have the voting feature because we want the authors to get some sort of feedback, but they must understand that the feedback isn't the stuff I'd live and die on. In addition to the fact that it is impossible to prevent ALL fraud (though the voting script I'm using for the awards is 99.9% there), I don't feel that voting here is a real indication of what how our readers feel about our stories because the vast majority of them don't vote.
A reader may read a story and enjoy it very much, but that doesn't mean they'll necessarily vote on it unless it's by someone they know. After tallying the nominations, I've noticed that the majority of what's nominated is work by authors who post frequently on the BB, or stories that people recognize from the Top 20. Don't get me wrong - these are all wonderful stories by great authors, but there are awesome stories by talented writers that were neglected.
I realize that feedback is very important to authors, which is why relying on voting to determine a story's worth concerns me. Many of you will end up feeling slighted by the results of a vote, and for no good reason as such data is highly inaccurate for the reasons I've stated above.
I'm not saying that the voting results are TOTAL garbage - I'm saying that you shouldn't live and die by them. They're the opinions of a handful of strangers. One of Stephen King's college creative writing teachers told him his writing style was awful and gave him a "C" on every paper he turned in. Van Gogh died poor and unknown. I think the chapter-by-chapter feedback here on the BB has been extremely helpful and positive. And having a story in the Top 20 is something to be proud of. Winning a Literotica Award is a good thing, too. But it's not the frigging Pulitzer, people. This is PORN. It's supposed to be FUN. Know what I'm Sayin'?
A reader may read a story and enjoy it very much, but that doesn't mean they'll necessarily vote on it unless it's by someone they know. After tallying the nominations, I've noticed that the majority of what's nominated is work by authors who post frequently on the BB, or stories that people recognize from the Top 20. Don't get me wrong - these are all wonderful stories by great authors, but there are awesome stories by talented writers that were neglected.
I realize that feedback is very important to authors, which is why relying on voting to determine a story's worth concerns me. Many of you will end up feeling slighted by the results of a vote, and for no good reason as such data is highly inaccurate for the reasons I've stated above.
I'm not saying that the voting results are TOTAL garbage - I'm saying that you shouldn't live and die by them. They're the opinions of a handful of strangers. One of Stephen King's college creative writing teachers told him his writing style was awful and gave him a "C" on every paper he turned in. Van Gogh died poor and unknown. I think the chapter-by-chapter feedback here on the BB has been extremely helpful and positive. And having a story in the Top 20 is something to be proud of. Winning a Literotica Award is a good thing, too. But it's not the frigging Pulitzer, people. This is PORN. It's supposed to be FUN. Know what I'm Sayin'?
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Hot damn a new chapter and Zeke gets a little too. Well done Shintani. SpecialK you are insatiable. The story just keeps building.
Closet?...Closet?
Did I hear closet?
Allright SpecialK, there ya go...gettin us guys and gals all worked up. Looks like Shintani blew your cover. You've been sneakin' & peakin' the whole time, while you've perpetuated this tight-belted, neck of the robe closed tightly, vicarious persona.
Now we know!
Great chapter Shintani! You had us all believing that the long drive had worn you out. Surprise!...Surprise!
It's truly amazing what one can accomplish when properly, ahemm, motivated.
Nice work!
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Did I hear closet?
Allright SpecialK, there ya go...gettin us guys and gals all worked up. Looks like Shintani blew your cover. You've been sneakin' & peakin' the whole time, while you've perpetuated this tight-belted, neck of the robe closed tightly, vicarious persona.
Now we know!
Great chapter Shintani! You had us all believing that the long drive had worn you out. Surprise!...Surprise!
It's truly amazing what one can accomplish when properly, ahemm, motivated.
Nice work!
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heehee! I'm glad you liked it! You made it through the whole thing?
I noticed the formatting is a bit screwy on the 2nd part. It is okay on my copy of it so I haven't a clue how that happened. (The @'s and ='s should be quotation marks. Offhand I can't remember what other odd marks appeared and what they really should have been.)
Is it too long to be really enjoyable?
K
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I noticed the formatting is a bit screwy on the 2nd part. It is okay on my copy of it so I haven't a clue how that happened. (The @'s and ='s should be quotation marks. Offhand I can't remember what other odd marks appeared and what they really should have been.)
Is it too long to be really enjoyable?
K
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"Dr. Joel's Pump with Scrotum Enlargement!!"??
I'm cracking up here! Loved it. I enjoyed your chapter almost as much as I'd enjoy it actually coming true *wink, wink, nudge, nudge*
I'm cracking up here! Loved it. I enjoyed your chapter almost as much as I'd enjoy it actually coming true *wink, wink, nudge, nudge*
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