RennyStyle
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I posted this write-up in my thread in the SRP Lounge. I like the idea, but I don't have time to write it, and I'm curious to know what other people might do with it.
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For as long as you can remember, you had heard the stories of the beings who lived above the surface, the Men. Powerful, strong, brave, and their companions, the Women, blessed with grace and wisdom, and all possessing the alien qualities of warmth and passion.
One day, you could take it no longer. You found Poseidon, the old and clever God of the Sea, and begged him to use his powers to make you human. In return, you promise yourself to him, pledging to become his wife and join his hundred-strong harem. What did you have to lose? Mermaids can't feel love and Gods have insatiable appetites. After a generous sampling of your gifts, and the promise of a century of more, he relented, but with a caveat.
"You shall have legs, and be capable of passion and love, but from sunrise to sunrise, a Man or Woman of the surface must bring you to a climax. If this does not occur, you shall be returned to your true form and to the sea forever." You hastily agree, unable to truly appreciate the full meaning of his terms.
For you see, your new parts are magic, most powerful and most sensitive, bringing to you a level of ecstasy no mere mortal woman could dream of achieving. You cannot know this yet. Or that when you turn back, that ability to feel will remain, and you will be the only member of the harem to truly comprehend the meaning of servitude.
As his magic wraps around you, transforms you, hear his final warning.
"On the surface, you shall experience true love, false love, you shall lust for and be lust after. You shall be used, abused, and admired. You shall be battled over and you shall fight. You shall experience true freedom and total captivity. And you shall be punished for attempting to defy my edict and take matters into your own hands."
His words fade into the distance as you continue rising through the darkness. The diffused light from above becomes stronger, the rippling surface of the water approaches, and as the last tingle of your transformation passes, you break the surface.
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This is the beginning of the story, if you want to write it, you may change it however you see fit. And what will happen next? Will she wash up on the beach like the little mermaid, or be rescued out at sea by a boat? Can she breathe right away, or need the breath of life? And if you need to know more, feel free to ask.
[Image removed.]
For as long as you can remember, you had heard the stories of the beings who lived above the surface, the Men. Powerful, strong, brave, and their companions, the Women, blessed with grace and wisdom, and all possessing the alien qualities of warmth and passion.
One day, you could take it no longer. You found Poseidon, the old and clever God of the Sea, and begged him to use his powers to make you human. In return, you promise yourself to him, pledging to become his wife and join his hundred-strong harem. What did you have to lose? Mermaids can't feel love and Gods have insatiable appetites. After a generous sampling of your gifts, and the promise of a century of more, he relented, but with a caveat.
"You shall have legs, and be capable of passion and love, but from sunrise to sunrise, a Man or Woman of the surface must bring you to a climax. If this does not occur, you shall be returned to your true form and to the sea forever." You hastily agree, unable to truly appreciate the full meaning of his terms.
For you see, your new parts are magic, most powerful and most sensitive, bringing to you a level of ecstasy no mere mortal woman could dream of achieving. You cannot know this yet. Or that when you turn back, that ability to feel will remain, and you will be the only member of the harem to truly comprehend the meaning of servitude.
As his magic wraps around you, transforms you, hear his final warning.
"On the surface, you shall experience true love, false love, you shall lust for and be lust after. You shall be used, abused, and admired. You shall be battled over and you shall fight. You shall experience true freedom and total captivity. And you shall be punished for attempting to defy my edict and take matters into your own hands."
His words fade into the distance as you continue rising through the darkness. The diffused light from above becomes stronger, the rippling surface of the water approaches, and as the last tingle of your transformation passes, you break the surface.
[Image removed.]
This is the beginning of the story, if you want to write it, you may change it however you see fit. And what will happen next? Will she wash up on the beach like the little mermaid, or be rescued out at sea by a boat? Can she breathe right away, or need the breath of life? And if you need to know more, feel free to ask.
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