The Magic vanishing Cape

[sirhugs]

She visits the Magic Shoppe to get a costume for the Halloween party, not realizing that it is a home for real magic. The shop keeper overhears her say to her friend "It's like I turn invisible, and just disappear when other girls are around. No one notices me."

The shopkeeper sells her a magician outfit complete with top hat and cape, not telling her that clicking her heals triggers the cloak of invisibility.

Later that night, at the party...

 

[Carnevil9]

I don't know. Becoming accidentally invisible doesn't sound like it has much potential. I would rework it one of two ways:

1) She knows it can make her invisible, and works all sorts of mischief with her new skill.

2) Keep the unknown power element, but make it something more amusing. F'rinstance, it makes her breasts grow an inch every hour. Or it makes her super horny, or sexually very aggressive, or it makes her exude a pheromone that turns guys super horny, etc. How she deals with the new "problem" is the crux of the drama (and the sex).

 

[darkbeast]

I think there is something to an insecure woman, going invisible, and seeing the world from a completely different perspective. Obviously a lot of voyeurism, but being able to stand next to the guys as they talk about the women they are lusting after, listening in to other women as they talk about their insecurities.

 

[DarkBee]

It would be fun if just the cloak disappeared, with the girl wearing (next to) nothing underneath, thus leaving her exposed to a full room.

 

[sirhugs]

I don't know. Becoming accidentally invisible doesn't sound like it has much potential. I would rework it one of two ways:

1) She knows it can make her invisible, and works all sorts of mischief with her new skill.

2) Keep the unknown power element, but make it something more amusing. F'rinstance, it makes her breasts grow an inch every hour. Or it makes her super horny, or sexually very aggressive, or it makes her exude a pheromone that turns guys super horny, etc. How she deals with the new "problem" is the crux of the drama (and the sex).

I love the voyeuristic possibilities, setting up a number of sex scenes, building up to her reveal, and more sex, great sex, the best nasty sex