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NightRAGES

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A story idea that has been bouncing around in my head, but remaining there since I haven't been able to complete anything in some time:

Starts fairly normal for Literotica, a husband with a 30-something wife starts dropping hints that he needs his wife's help at work. Pressures on their finances are such that it is important for him to keep his job. Throw in some darker (unspoken to each other) thoughts on both their parts to keep it a bit spicy.

After some consideration he gets her to agree to one day 'working' for the boss. That day comes and he receives a package from the boss to open. In it there is simply one bright red lipstick and two pieces of paper. On the first paper are the instructions, which indicate the husband is to look over the list of 10 sexual activities on the second paper, and choose the three for which he will offer his wife. He is to show her the complete list. He must then choose without telling his wife (perhaps a representative of the boss accompanies the package to ensure compliance with this instruction). Then he will write the sexual services he has chosen on her back with the red lipstick.

The list would start with (1) relatively tame and work its way to (10) quite extreme activities. The husband must balance what he is willing to offer with what the boss wants with what the wife will bear. If his choices are unsatisfactory to the boss, he will lose his job. If his choices are unsatisfactory to his wife, he may lose his marriage. If the choices are unsatisfactory to him, he may lose his love for her if she does them.

What will she feel as the husband writes his choices on her back? What will she feel as they are revealed to the boss and the men once she arrives at the private club? When everyone but her knows what she will be doing shortly? Will she be wet? Will she be terrified? Will she be afraid of not performing well enough? Will she be afraid of liking it too much?

What will the husband feel when the choices are revealed to the other men? Did he offer enough? Did he offer more than they expected? Has he offered his wife into the extreme when all the boss really wanted was a blow-job?


Any one with the motivation is certainly free to run with these thoughts.
 
I don't know if it has been done on Lit before but this sounds like it would make a great interactive story. You know write the first story out have a sex scene at the begining and mayb a second at the end. Then close it up with the list and ask people to vote and leave a comment/personal message. (I might even say that I will only count votes that also came with a rating to encourage voters. It would be hard to enforce but still, I like having a of votes. Then see what the crowd wants. Then work with that.

Then maybe either you decide if he loses respect for her, or she loses respect for him or hell the boss is bored cus the votes came in too low and didn't get extreme enough. Or you could ask for another vote on how the story actually ends.
 
I like this idea....

My only caution would be to keep it as simple as possible. I have read some good stories on Lietrotica, but then they go to pot when the storyline gets too technical. I am not saying you can't pull it off, I'm just saying keep that idea in mind when you start and you won't fall into the trap that so many other have.

Good idea though...run with it my friend.
 
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