The Last Fall Bikini Party

sirhugs

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Set in a new subdivision. The host and hostess own the first and biggest house in the development, located on a cul de sac backing onto virgin farm fields. They have the only swimming pool built so far, so their yard is enclosed by a privacy fence. As each new couple moves in, they get invited to a pool party. As the group gets bigger, the atmosphere seems to get rowdier. The guys still wear the same swim trunks, but some of the wives start wearing smaller bikinis. soon, they joke about it being a contest.

Now it is October, the air is crisp. They decide that this weekend will be the last bikini party of the season...
 
You need someone better than me

This is a fun story, my stuff is more emotionally charged. I doubt I could do this justice. You need to look into this kind of story and see who you like, then contact them with your idea.
Let me know when you do though, I'd love to read this one.
 
This is a fun story, my stuff is more emotionally charged. I doubt I could do this justice. You need to look into this kind of story and see who you like, then contact them with your idea.
Let me know when you do though, I'd love to read this one.


better than you? hardly. I see this as a pretty run of the mill launching pad for some mix and match sex... the writer could take it in whatever direction they wish in terms of the matches.

But if I had time to go looking for a specific writer, I'd have time to write it myself. which I don't right now. Though there's always the First Spring Bikini Party...
 
Thanks for vote of confidence.

That's nice of you to say, but yes, better than me. I saw this scenario as a humorous format, describing the embarrassment and jealousy of the women as the bikini get smaller and smaller. Maybe the wives coming up with some dirty tricks trying to, one-upmanship, the others. Then of course we have the husbands taking pictures and looking through magazines to find smaller suits to suggest to the wives.
 
just shows how ideas can go different ways. I pictured it as straight sexually charged set up to mix and match sex.
 
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