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Derbyshire, Handes keep 1352
The announcement that she planned to marry caused more or less the reaction the beautiful young woman had expected from her elegant, white haired father, Sir Crispin de Molyns.
"Right." He said as he pinched the back of his nose. "Surely you can speak of making the best of the situation, Eloise, but this is ridicolous. A lady of your position do not need to marry her caretaker just to keep him. I have never needed to marry one of my servants."
His attempt to to joke passed unnoticed by Lady Eloise Gerrard. She had practiced her defence practically uninterrupted during the two day trip from the keep in Staffordshire to her fathers home in Derbyshire. Despite that her response wasn't as articulate and well put as she had imagined.
"I do not have to marry anyone father."
Sir Crispin immediately noticed her error and studied her under snow white eyebrows.
"Yes, you have to Eloise. Surely you understand."
"Yes... I must." Eloise wandered back and forth in the big, bright sun room at the Handes keep as if remember her point.
"I have been widow for a year... And the king have sent for me... We all know of the reason and i will tell him that i have allready decided for another man."
Her father wasn't impressed as he knew the king very well. "If you think that he will allow you to marry your caretaker, no matter you are a widow or not, you better need to reconsider. He will not. You are a land owner Eloise and the king will not permit widows under his rule to give themselves to common peaple. There are many knights that will pay him a lot for the privilege to marry a woman of the de Molyns family, especially one that have inherited Gerrards property. He will not allow that it will be wasted on a offspring of a lesser caretaker. No matter how good heritage he have."
"But there will be no offspring father." That was a well practiced response Eloice had practised on but it came to early.
"Now you are talking nonsense! You are to young to marry convenience, if that was your thinking."
He could also mention that she was to beautiful. As the oldest of his two daughters Eloise had a majestic beauty that rendered men speachless. They used to follow her with their eyes and then loose themself in daydreams. He had seen them himself.
Close to 23 in age she was tall and slender, but the maturity of womanhood had given her a full figure and a natural charm that separated her from other women. Her thick dark brown hair was loosely braided and reached long below her waist. During the last two days travelling she hadn't any mean to make more with her hair than keeping it out of the way from her eyes. Some thought her eyes was her most beautiful feature. They where bright green covered by dark eyelashes that made every blink enchanting. Others meant it was her mouth that stood out. Broad and soft over pearl white teeths. while some thought it was her skin. Cream white and flawless.
Eloise herself meant that whatever good qualities she had, haven't brought her much happiness, with a long line of unhappy circumstances and and being widowed after only three months marriage.
Eloise had hoped that of all in her family her father would understand why she decided to marry her caretaker instead of the man the king had choosen for her.
"Other widows have done it." She claimed in a vain hope to persuade him.
"Yes, old widows who long have been barren." Sir Crispin responded tiredly. "Of course they have done that but was before, not under our present kings rule. Edward III will not release his property without getting something for it. And you are his property, either you like it or not."
A marriage with her own loyal caretaker had seemed resonable only a week earlier, but now Eloise felt her point weakened because of her fathers refusal of seing things her way.
"If i only had known that i would be in this position so soon, i wouldn't had."
"you where in a hurry to marry Sir Piers" Sir Crispin reminded her. "You regret that?"
His daughters silence confirmed what he allready suspected.
"I understand. You had preferred the other man if your pride hadn't been in the way. And now you are intent on making the same misstake before you meet him again."
"I will not meet him father and you are wrong. I don't care about him. I will marry Stephen atte Welle because we both wan't the security a marriage bring and because we have what the other need."
"Except a desire for children." Sir Crispin looked sadly at his daughter.
"I don't need children." Eloise looked down.
"Don't expect me to believe that. And you will actually have to meet him."
"Who?" Worried, Eloise looked up at her father again.
"Sir Owain of Whitecliffe will live here while we celebrate your sisters engagement."
"Here? now? In the keep? You can't mean that father." Eloise stared terrified at her the white haired man whose calm message had her tremble with both anger and excitement. Even she could not tell what was what.
"Yes i mean that."
"And you didn't warn me because you and mother knew i would not come if i knew?"
"We had hoped that you had put your resentment behind you." Sir Crispin patiently said. "Jolita do not celebrate her engagement every day, right?"
"Not even every other month father."
"Eloise, being so cold don't fith you, neither is it like you to hold a grudge against someone so long time."
"It wasn't a small thing father. how can you think i will be polite to a man that offered me marriage and then just dissapeared. And by all signs had something to do with my husbands death? I wasn't cold until then, but no woman can look past these facts."
Sir Crispin couldn't agree, because he had hoped to praise Sir Owain to his daughter. "He are my neighbour, a wealthy and successful man. and..."
"And infamous." Eloise put in.
"Yes, to some part. But all jousters are. Either it is well deserved or not. It comes with the trade."
"I know. I was married to a jouster." Eloise said.
Sir Crispin resisted a dissapointing sigh. Her three month long marriage to Sir Piers Gerrard had shown every sign of neglectance and maybe this wasn't the right time to speak of his neighbour. Instead he would speak of things closer to his daughters heart. But he had misstaken. Sir Owain of Whitecliffe was closer to Eloise's heart than he thought.
"It will bring me much pleasure to come up with reasons to avoid him." Eloise promised. "It will be hard to act lovable on the memorial day of Sir Piers passing even without standing face to face with the person who was responsible for his death."
"How can you say that Eloise? Sir Owain had nothing to do with it. It was Sir Phillip Cotterell that by mistake delivered the killing blow and you know that."
"But they are friends. Sir Phillip and your cowardly neighbour." Eloise had no intention to change her mind on the subject.
"They take part in the same tournaments, but the jousts are man against man. Not with three or four men."
"He was involved either way." Eloise stubbornly said.
"The tragedy was investigated to the kings full satisfaction."
"Yes, but not to mine. I know very little of what happened that day at Windsor, only that Sir Phillip was devestated, as if he could be more devestated than me. Not even Phillips closest friend could bring himself to explain it to me personally."
"Maybe he didn't think you would accept him my child."
"I wouldn't!" Eloise shouted. "But at least he could have tried."
Sir Crispin had hoped that the situation had been a little less complicated this time. He was right between his lively daughter and his well respected neighbour, Sir Owain of Whitecliffe. Even if he was to honest to deny that situation to some part was his own fault.
It was true that the young couples first meeting had been brief. But both he and Lady Fransesca had agreed that the immediate attraction between Eloise and Sir Owain was one of the few opportunities in life it was worth witnessing. The chemistry between them had been so strong it had caused shivers among those close by. The appearant current of tension Sir Crispin would have called lust just as his wife would say an obvious warmth.
But the young couple hadn't got the opportunity to explore it further. Not many words had been spoken, except from the ordinary formal conversation under the watching eyes of Sir Crispin and his wife. Not exactly an environment to express your inner feelings. That Sir Crispin understood now. Maybe he should have let them to be alone to come to an agreement. But the time had been short until his departure. In some way it had felt more important that he and Lady Francesca spoke with Sir Owain than that Elois did it. Afterall, that was how it was done.
At that time Sir Crispin had been sure he did the right thing. Eloise had given him the view that her oppinion of Sir Owain was in line of his own. The problem rose when Sir Owain had received orders to follow the king on a mission. He hadn't given any warning to de Molyn family. Only sent a letter, scribbled in haste. Where he asked for Eloise's hand and expressed his hope that she would wait for his return.
Now Sir Crispin knew he should had handled the matter better, and given strict instructions to his son Rolph. Instead he had thought that Eloise finally had decided for a man that seemed to hold her heart.
Sir Crispin had left for Westminster as planned and hadn't worried when Lady Francescas letters had told him of one of Rolphs neighbours. Sir Piers Gerrard that often came to visit. She had written about the mans gifts to Eloise and his charming manners and Rolphs oppinion that he would be a more fitting match to Eloise as he was there and Sir Owain was not.
When he came home at the end of the summer Eloise's determination to marry Sir Piers was as strong as her discontent with Sir Owain. Sir Crispins hope of getting Sir Owain as son in law had been crushed. When Sir Owain returned from his mission Eloise's dissapointment about his mystical departure, reinforced by Sir Rolph's and Sir Piers teasing comments about the knights notorious women affairs at the court, had her feeling personally offended.
Sir Crispin had no answer to give Sir Owain about the events that led to this. "I am afraid i have little control over my daughters plans nowadays." was the best answer he could provide to the knight. "Eloise are leaning to decide her own marriage affairs, which i am sorry for." He had added apologisingly.
"Then it is about time she will hear what is best for her." Sir Owain had replied, far from happy. "Have she decided?" He asked.
Sir Crispin had nodded. "I hope we still are friends? Good neighbours?"
"Of course Sir Crispin. We may meet in London some time."
Sir Crispin sighed as he looked at his daughter.
"It is a shame that you don't get along, now as Sir Owain are looking to take a wife." Sir Crispin said thoughtfully.
"He are looking for a wife?" She frowned. "Men like him don't look for wives. Women lay at their feet all the time." She didn't hear the door open silently behind her.
"And don't let mother think she can marry me of with that big thickheaded man who make a living by strutting around and knock other men of their horses."
"Eloise!" Her father warned.
"Yes, i know that he are your neighbour. But he aren't mine. I rather take my dry caretaker to husband than your rough fighter. No matter how famous he are."
"Please Eloise." Sir Crispin urged.
"I am sorry father but you can't have these thoughts. Tell mother i am to expensive to keep, even for him."
Sir Crispin sighed and nodded towards the door. "You can tell them that yourself my child."
Suddenly aware that her fathers attention was elsewhere Eloise turned around and understood why he had tried to stop her outbreak. Only a few meters away three peaple stood. Her mother, her sister Jolita and their guest. Sir Owain of Whitecliffe. Her breathing frose and her mouth suddenly became dry. They must have heard every word. Every insult she threw out.
Derbyshire, Handes keep 1352
The announcement that she planned to marry caused more or less the reaction the beautiful young woman had expected from her elegant, white haired father, Sir Crispin de Molyns.
"Right." He said as he pinched the back of his nose. "Surely you can speak of making the best of the situation, Eloise, but this is ridicolous. A lady of your position do not need to marry her caretaker just to keep him. I have never needed to marry one of my servants."
His attempt to to joke passed unnoticed by Lady Eloise Gerrard. She had practiced her defence practically uninterrupted during the two day trip from the keep in Staffordshire to her fathers home in Derbyshire. Despite that her response wasn't as articulate and well put as she had imagined.
"I do not have to marry anyone father."
Sir Crispin immediately noticed her error and studied her under snow white eyebrows.
"Yes, you have to Eloise. Surely you understand."
"Yes... I must." Eloise wandered back and forth in the big, bright sun room at the Handes keep as if remember her point.
"I have been widow for a year... And the king have sent for me... We all know of the reason and i will tell him that i have allready decided for another man."
Her father wasn't impressed as he knew the king very well. "If you think that he will allow you to marry your caretaker, no matter you are a widow or not, you better need to reconsider. He will not. You are a land owner Eloise and the king will not permit widows under his rule to give themselves to common peaple. There are many knights that will pay him a lot for the privilege to marry a woman of the de Molyns family, especially one that have inherited Gerrards property. He will not allow that it will be wasted on a offspring of a lesser caretaker. No matter how good heritage he have."
"But there will be no offspring father." That was a well practiced response Eloice had practised on but it came to early.
"Now you are talking nonsense! You are to young to marry convenience, if that was your thinking."
He could also mention that she was to beautiful. As the oldest of his two daughters Eloise had a majestic beauty that rendered men speachless. They used to follow her with their eyes and then loose themself in daydreams. He had seen them himself.
Close to 23 in age she was tall and slender, but the maturity of womanhood had given her a full figure and a natural charm that separated her from other women. Her thick dark brown hair was loosely braided and reached long below her waist. During the last two days travelling she hadn't any mean to make more with her hair than keeping it out of the way from her eyes. Some thought her eyes was her most beautiful feature. They where bright green covered by dark eyelashes that made every blink enchanting. Others meant it was her mouth that stood out. Broad and soft over pearl white teeths. while some thought it was her skin. Cream white and flawless.
Eloise herself meant that whatever good qualities she had, haven't brought her much happiness, with a long line of unhappy circumstances and and being widowed after only three months marriage.
Eloise had hoped that of all in her family her father would understand why she decided to marry her caretaker instead of the man the king had choosen for her.
"Other widows have done it." She claimed in a vain hope to persuade him.
"Yes, old widows who long have been barren." Sir Crispin responded tiredly. "Of course they have done that but was before, not under our present kings rule. Edward III will not release his property without getting something for it. And you are his property, either you like it or not."
A marriage with her own loyal caretaker had seemed resonable only a week earlier, but now Eloise felt her point weakened because of her fathers refusal of seing things her way.
"If i only had known that i would be in this position so soon, i wouldn't had."
"you where in a hurry to marry Sir Piers" Sir Crispin reminded her. "You regret that?"
His daughters silence confirmed what he allready suspected.
"I understand. You had preferred the other man if your pride hadn't been in the way. And now you are intent on making the same misstake before you meet him again."
"I will not meet him father and you are wrong. I don't care about him. I will marry Stephen atte Welle because we both wan't the security a marriage bring and because we have what the other need."
"Except a desire for children." Sir Crispin looked sadly at his daughter.
"I don't need children." Eloise looked down.
"Don't expect me to believe that. And you will actually have to meet him."
"Who?" Worried, Eloise looked up at her father again.
"Sir Owain of Whitecliffe will live here while we celebrate your sisters engagement."
"Here? now? In the keep? You can't mean that father." Eloise stared terrified at her the white haired man whose calm message had her tremble with both anger and excitement. Even she could not tell what was what.
"Yes i mean that."
"And you didn't warn me because you and mother knew i would not come if i knew?"
"We had hoped that you had put your resentment behind you." Sir Crispin patiently said. "Jolita do not celebrate her engagement every day, right?"
"Not even every other month father."
"Eloise, being so cold don't fith you, neither is it like you to hold a grudge against someone so long time."
"It wasn't a small thing father. how can you think i will be polite to a man that offered me marriage and then just dissapeared. And by all signs had something to do with my husbands death? I wasn't cold until then, but no woman can look past these facts."
Sir Crispin couldn't agree, because he had hoped to praise Sir Owain to his daughter. "He are my neighbour, a wealthy and successful man. and..."
"And infamous." Eloise put in.
"Yes, to some part. But all jousters are. Either it is well deserved or not. It comes with the trade."
"I know. I was married to a jouster." Eloise said.
Sir Crispin resisted a dissapointing sigh. Her three month long marriage to Sir Piers Gerrard had shown every sign of neglectance and maybe this wasn't the right time to speak of his neighbour. Instead he would speak of things closer to his daughters heart. But he had misstaken. Sir Owain of Whitecliffe was closer to Eloise's heart than he thought.
"It will bring me much pleasure to come up with reasons to avoid him." Eloise promised. "It will be hard to act lovable on the memorial day of Sir Piers passing even without standing face to face with the person who was responsible for his death."
"How can you say that Eloise? Sir Owain had nothing to do with it. It was Sir Phillip Cotterell that by mistake delivered the killing blow and you know that."
"But they are friends. Sir Phillip and your cowardly neighbour." Eloise had no intention to change her mind on the subject.
"They take part in the same tournaments, but the jousts are man against man. Not with three or four men."
"He was involved either way." Eloise stubbornly said.
"The tragedy was investigated to the kings full satisfaction."
"Yes, but not to mine. I know very little of what happened that day at Windsor, only that Sir Phillip was devestated, as if he could be more devestated than me. Not even Phillips closest friend could bring himself to explain it to me personally."
"Maybe he didn't think you would accept him my child."
"I wouldn't!" Eloise shouted. "But at least he could have tried."
Sir Crispin had hoped that the situation had been a little less complicated this time. He was right between his lively daughter and his well respected neighbour, Sir Owain of Whitecliffe. Even if he was to honest to deny that situation to some part was his own fault.
It was true that the young couples first meeting had been brief. But both he and Lady Fransesca had agreed that the immediate attraction between Eloise and Sir Owain was one of the few opportunities in life it was worth witnessing. The chemistry between them had been so strong it had caused shivers among those close by. The appearant current of tension Sir Crispin would have called lust just as his wife would say an obvious warmth.
But the young couple hadn't got the opportunity to explore it further. Not many words had been spoken, except from the ordinary formal conversation under the watching eyes of Sir Crispin and his wife. Not exactly an environment to express your inner feelings. That Sir Crispin understood now. Maybe he should have let them to be alone to come to an agreement. But the time had been short until his departure. In some way it had felt more important that he and Lady Francesca spoke with Sir Owain than that Elois did it. Afterall, that was how it was done.
At that time Sir Crispin had been sure he did the right thing. Eloise had given him the view that her oppinion of Sir Owain was in line of his own. The problem rose when Sir Owain had received orders to follow the king on a mission. He hadn't given any warning to de Molyn family. Only sent a letter, scribbled in haste. Where he asked for Eloise's hand and expressed his hope that she would wait for his return.
Now Sir Crispin knew he should had handled the matter better, and given strict instructions to his son Rolph. Instead he had thought that Eloise finally had decided for a man that seemed to hold her heart.
Sir Crispin had left for Westminster as planned and hadn't worried when Lady Francescas letters had told him of one of Rolphs neighbours. Sir Piers Gerrard that often came to visit. She had written about the mans gifts to Eloise and his charming manners and Rolphs oppinion that he would be a more fitting match to Eloise as he was there and Sir Owain was not.
When he came home at the end of the summer Eloise's determination to marry Sir Piers was as strong as her discontent with Sir Owain. Sir Crispins hope of getting Sir Owain as son in law had been crushed. When Sir Owain returned from his mission Eloise's dissapointment about his mystical departure, reinforced by Sir Rolph's and Sir Piers teasing comments about the knights notorious women affairs at the court, had her feeling personally offended.
Sir Crispin had no answer to give Sir Owain about the events that led to this. "I am afraid i have little control over my daughters plans nowadays." was the best answer he could provide to the knight. "Eloise are leaning to decide her own marriage affairs, which i am sorry for." He had added apologisingly.
"Then it is about time she will hear what is best for her." Sir Owain had replied, far from happy. "Have she decided?" He asked.
Sir Crispin had nodded. "I hope we still are friends? Good neighbours?"
"Of course Sir Crispin. We may meet in London some time."
Sir Crispin sighed as he looked at his daughter.
"It is a shame that you don't get along, now as Sir Owain are looking to take a wife." Sir Crispin said thoughtfully.
"He are looking for a wife?" She frowned. "Men like him don't look for wives. Women lay at their feet all the time." She didn't hear the door open silently behind her.
"And don't let mother think she can marry me of with that big thickheaded man who make a living by strutting around and knock other men of their horses."
"Eloise!" Her father warned.
"Yes, i know that he are your neighbour. But he aren't mine. I rather take my dry caretaker to husband than your rough fighter. No matter how famous he are."
"Please Eloise." Sir Crispin urged.
"I am sorry father but you can't have these thoughts. Tell mother i am to expensive to keep, even for him."
Sir Crispin sighed and nodded towards the door. "You can tell them that yourself my child."
Suddenly aware that her fathers attention was elsewhere Eloise turned around and understood why he had tried to stop her outbreak. Only a few meters away three peaple stood. Her mother, her sister Jolita and their guest. Sir Owain of Whitecliffe. Her breathing frose and her mouth suddenly became dry. They must have heard every word. Every insult she threw out.
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