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The promise
Near Stirling, Scottland in the year of 1314
Alan of Strode made a grimace at the suffocating sweet smell of death and corruption. The fever was ravishing. Tavish would be lucky to live until dawn. Alans own wound was small in comparison and it ached in sympathy.
"Four days, five at most. Then your lovely lady will take care of you. We will make it Tav."
He forced himself to sound cheerful. Trying not to listen to Tavish´s whimpering Alan occupied himself by going through one of the english packs he had taken after the battle. He unwrapped a red under coat with a yellow stripe. Fine stuff he thought and rubbed the fabric between his fingers.
In another pack he found an ornamented silver pitcher, that he filled with good scottish liquor.
"See how much of this you can drink Tav. It will still hurt, but you won´t care as much."
Tavish pushed the pitcher away.
"It will only numb me from the chin and up." He said with a weak voice.
"Do you have a feather pen?" His voice, broken with pain. Alan looked in his leather pouch. "Yes, and i have some ink and parchment to." He tried to keep his voice as merry as he could. "Are you fit to write?
Tavish gave a weak nod. "Help me sit up." He whispered.
An half hour later he finished the letter and let the feather pen slip from his hand. "There." For a while he closed his tired eyes before he opened them and met Alans steady gaze.
"See if you agree." He quietly says to Alan.
"This?" Alan asks while biting his lower lip. He touched the parchment with leaning signs that had no meaning to him.
"It is commands to my wife." Tavish explained with a tormented look in his eyes. His hands clenched around the blanket he lay on, so his knuckles whitened. His breathing became shallow and unregular.
"Good thinking, don´t you think?" Tavish said with an attempted smile. Alan let his eyes follow the figures on the parchment. "Well written Tav." He touched the parchment with his knuckle and smiled. "It is very good advices, and she will obey them if i have my say."
His friends peace of mind justified Alans little lie. And the noble lady would find comfort in her husbands dying wish, whatever it was.
Despite that he could see the roof of Saint Ninian from here, Alan knew that his friends death would come quicker if he tried to move him. It wasn´t fun to be forced to tell the noble lady that her husband had breathed his last breath under an old oak at the edge of the battleground. But no lies would make the truth any better.
Death was death and if there was a soul that could get to heaven without the last salvation, it was Tavish Ellerby´s. Everything south of Stirling lay in ashes. He prayed that Tavish´s home was outside of the armies movements.
What the english hadn´t ravaged during the past weeks, Robert Bruce himself had taken care of to keep the enemy going hungry and without roof over their heads. Now many scotts would suffer, even after they had won the battle.
Tavish reached out to Alan with his hand, gripping his arm.
"You will bring me home? And lay my body to rest down by the river? Don´t let Honor see me. Not like this. Promise me."
"Yes, i promise. I have your leg and bring that to. I promise in the name of god." Weak laughter followed his words.
"You plan of putting me back together?" Tavish´s eyes closed and the weakened body quivered.
"Alan, tell my Honor that my death are for the best. Tell her how much i loved her."
"She knows that Tav. I will sing it like a troubadur to her. I swear on it. Sweet memories she will cry over long after she becoming old and... Tav? Tavish?
Alan took a deep breath and then exhaled slowly. Burning tears rolled down his cheeks.
"Oh, Tav. think if your Honor could have seen you smile like that."
He watched the empty blue eyes for a long time. Before he finally reached down and closed them.
Near Stirling, Scottland in the year of 1314
Alan of Strode made a grimace at the suffocating sweet smell of death and corruption. The fever was ravishing. Tavish would be lucky to live until dawn. Alans own wound was small in comparison and it ached in sympathy.
"Four days, five at most. Then your lovely lady will take care of you. We will make it Tav."
He forced himself to sound cheerful. Trying not to listen to Tavish´s whimpering Alan occupied himself by going through one of the english packs he had taken after the battle. He unwrapped a red under coat with a yellow stripe. Fine stuff he thought and rubbed the fabric between his fingers.
In another pack he found an ornamented silver pitcher, that he filled with good scottish liquor.
"See how much of this you can drink Tav. It will still hurt, but you won´t care as much."
Tavish pushed the pitcher away.
"It will only numb me from the chin and up." He said with a weak voice.
"Do you have a feather pen?" His voice, broken with pain. Alan looked in his leather pouch. "Yes, and i have some ink and parchment to." He tried to keep his voice as merry as he could. "Are you fit to write?
Tavish gave a weak nod. "Help me sit up." He whispered.
An half hour later he finished the letter and let the feather pen slip from his hand. "There." For a while he closed his tired eyes before he opened them and met Alans steady gaze.
"See if you agree." He quietly says to Alan.
"This?" Alan asks while biting his lower lip. He touched the parchment with leaning signs that had no meaning to him.
"It is commands to my wife." Tavish explained with a tormented look in his eyes. His hands clenched around the blanket he lay on, so his knuckles whitened. His breathing became shallow and unregular.
"Good thinking, don´t you think?" Tavish said with an attempted smile. Alan let his eyes follow the figures on the parchment. "Well written Tav." He touched the parchment with his knuckle and smiled. "It is very good advices, and she will obey them if i have my say."
His friends peace of mind justified Alans little lie. And the noble lady would find comfort in her husbands dying wish, whatever it was.
Despite that he could see the roof of Saint Ninian from here, Alan knew that his friends death would come quicker if he tried to move him. It wasn´t fun to be forced to tell the noble lady that her husband had breathed his last breath under an old oak at the edge of the battleground. But no lies would make the truth any better.
Death was death and if there was a soul that could get to heaven without the last salvation, it was Tavish Ellerby´s. Everything south of Stirling lay in ashes. He prayed that Tavish´s home was outside of the armies movements.
What the english hadn´t ravaged during the past weeks, Robert Bruce himself had taken care of to keep the enemy going hungry and without roof over their heads. Now many scotts would suffer, even after they had won the battle.
Tavish reached out to Alan with his hand, gripping his arm.
"You will bring me home? And lay my body to rest down by the river? Don´t let Honor see me. Not like this. Promise me."
"Yes, i promise. I have your leg and bring that to. I promise in the name of god." Weak laughter followed his words.
"You plan of putting me back together?" Tavish´s eyes closed and the weakened body quivered.
"Alan, tell my Honor that my death are for the best. Tell her how much i loved her."
"She knows that Tav. I will sing it like a troubadur to her. I swear on it. Sweet memories she will cry over long after she becoming old and... Tav? Tavish?
Alan took a deep breath and then exhaled slowly. Burning tears rolled down his cheeks.
"Oh, Tav. think if your Honor could have seen you smile like that."
He watched the empty blue eyes for a long time. Before he finally reached down and closed them.
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