The Jill, Jack, & Kate saga

[TheJillOff]

Hello writers and readers! I'm new. Hope I'm doing this right. I've been an occassional reader of literotica for probably three years now!

I recently started writing my story (our story) in a blog. I'd love to get some feedback from the pros on my writing so far.

Please don't think I'm advertising. The truth is I haven't made a single cent from my blog, nor am I trying to.

The whole blog is linked in my siggy.

The story specific parts are:
http://thejilloff.wordpress.com/2009/09/26/how-we-three-came-to-be-part-1/
http://thejilloff.wordpress.com/2009/09/29/how-we-three-came-to-be-part-two/
http://thejilloff.wordpress.com/2009/10/02/how-we-three-came-to-be-part-3/

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Sorry, Dude. We will gladly give your our opinion on stories posted on lit. We do not review stories posted elsewhere. If and when you decide to post here on this site, try us again.

J Jackson, Insane Porn and Mystery Writer

 

[TheJillOff]

Ok. Didn't know!