The Hunter By Hotcappucino-- What a Joke LOL

scorpiosting

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1) I have read better "shit" and I do mean "Shit" written by my
neice.

2) You can tell that the author is a neurotic asshole because this
story is filled with more "I's" then a rotten potato.

3) The author really has given us nothing original here in terms of
plot or storyline.

4) The author leaves nothing to our imaginations because he
has kindly disclosed every single minute detail to us, thus
relieving us of the burden of having to think.

5) If you are having trouble sleeping, read the first two
paragraphs of this drivel and you will soon be counting sheep.
 
It takes a good deal of courage to post your first work here and open yourself up to public critisism. In doing so you will undoubtedly receive your share of bad votes and feedback, technical merit and aesthetic value of the piece not withstanding.

It is just my opinion, but I think we face enough of these slings and arrows without throwing them at one another. If you have critisism of someone's work thats fine, but you can phrase it constructively and try to help. This post is just mean, it is of no value to the author in trying to improve his writing and offers nothing constructive. If I had been confronted with a post of this type after my first story I doubt I would have ever posted again. One can only hope this writer's ego isn't as fragile as mine.

I haven't read the story, but I notice it has a pink H, so it has some merit, at least in the opinions of the readership.

-Colly
 
"It is just my opinion, but I think we face enough of these slings and arrows without throwing them at one another....If I had been confronted with a post of this type after my first story I doubt I would have ever posted again." Colleen Thomas


As usual, I think Colly is right. True, this BB invite comment on "stories you hate", but this kind of a broadside for first-time story is unfair. Criticism should not be more vindictive than it is constructive.
 
A little further down on this board is a strong clue as to why Scorpiosting didn't think much of Hotcappucino's story.

It seems that Scorpiosting was advertising one of his stories here, complete with a poll for readers. Hotcappucino took him seriously, and altho he was reasonably complementary in his opinion, he did offer a criticisms of Scorpiosting's syntax.

Even worse in Scorpiosting's view, Hotcappucino told us more than he probably should have about the plot. Scorpiosting took offense and fired back with an angry reply that he apparently didn't think was a sufficient punishment for Hotcappucino's criticism..., and this thread was born.

Come on children! Let's play nice together! Everybody gets to use the sandbox.
 
I read the story and, even though it is not to my particular taste, it was pretty damn well done for a first submission. The writing is clear and well thought out. The grammar is fine. I found no glaring errors at all. The imagery is well done and concise. There are quite a number of "I"s in this story. It's a psycho drama written in the first person... DUHHHHH.

My opinion is that this story will not appeal to everyone. Serial rape is not to everyone's liking. I have to say even though the story isn't one I would have chosen to read it was well done, especially for a virgin writer.

If you chose to lower this forum to name-calling and personal insult please go elsewhere. The rest of us see value in CONSTRUCTIVE feedback far beyond anything you obviously are able to deal with.
 
Colleen Thomas said:
It is just my opinion, but I think we face enough of these slings and arrows without throwing them at one another.

I totally agree with that. I gave you feedback, scorpiosting, does that mean you're going to bash me next? :rolleyes:
 
You should have titled this thread "An idiotic temper tantrum from a spoiled brat."

Your so-called "critique" is crap. Compare it to the thorough and considerate one you got from Hotcappucino (https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=193241) and... need I say more? Get a grip.

The stories themselves, for anyone who would care to make up his/her own mind, are here:

Seducing Ben & the Healing (scorpiosting):
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=105959
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=98228

The Hunter (Hotcappucino):
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=97036
 
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