The Hot Mom is a Hot Mess

[ThaCoolChandler]

I have a perfect story idea since it's about me and having a hot mom that always gets her way because of how she looks allows her to act like she's better than everyone else, but is so full of herself that she's unaware of just how much everyone in the neighborhood can't stand her. The dads want to bang her, but can't because their wives would kill them. Those same wives are also all the moms that don't like my mom because of how their husbands flirt with her and the way my mom manipulates their husbands.

Her least biggest fan being her own son and how with the help of three of his friends decide to ruin the big dinner party his hot mom is planning to have in a few days.

 

[srgreene]

One Tumb Up, One Down

A lot of us can appreciate the arrogant, conceited, full-of-herself woman being taken down a peg or two. Depending on how its done, that is- I am not a big fan of outright rape or physical destruction. The ambiguities and uncertainties women can face while being dragged down a slippery slope are what I find intriguing, probably because those are issues I faced. But I doubt I would find having her son be the ringleader to be appealing. Possibly a step-son, with some years of animosity toward his step-mother, or a neighbor with a dissolving marriage would work. You need to provide something of the male motivation in the flow of events. Writing good stories that are more than first she did it with this guy, then that one, and finally ended up a sperm-coated mess is not easy!

 

[Hypoxia]

I also object to the mother-son dynamics -- unless the son grew up in boarding schools whilst his prominent, wealthy, arrogant, distant mom partied and snubbed him. That would provide motivation. If mom isn't rich then a fiercely competitive mother-daughter relationship is likely, especially if both are fairly brilliant but emotionally irreconcilable.

I know a few models of that setup: a PhD (education) mom constantly browbeating and berating her daughter for only gaining an MBA (information systems); a music-executive mom clashing with her daughter who became a top financial administrator; other moms dissing daughters who just Weren't Good Enough.

Any such setup could lead to a BtB funfest. And any BtB scenario could have various outcomes: mild-to-serious humiliation, or nuclear-level destruction, or bounceback (the perps catch the shit themselves), or the old Scooby-Doo chase, whatever. Whatever the author wants to happen, eh?

 

[ThaCoolChandler]

The Hot Mom in a Hot Mess

Thanks srgreene for recognizing and appreciating the arrogant, conceited, full-of-herself side of my mom. Sounds like you may have had or have a mom similar like mine. She's definitely due getting taken down a peg or two and I'm sure a lot of people besides me and my friends would like to see it happen. No doubt the other moms/wives would relish it, especially Steve and Mark's moms Janice and Hillary who are the sort of "leaders" of the rest of the moms who don't like mine.

I definitely wouldn't want anything hardcore like rape or physical hurt happen to my mom. More like something that would happen in a semi-public place like at one of the parties Mark's mom and dad always have at their house after one of our soccer games or maybe a school event. A prank or "accident" like getting soaked by a hose so her clothes become see-through (hopefully when she's not wearing a bra which would be a 50/50 chance) or somehow getting her skirt or dress snagged on something so it rips part way or completely off. The idea being whatever prank it is, it happens so suddenly or without warning that my mom is too surprised/shocked/dazed by her partial (or half naked) exposure in front of others who are laughing at her, that finally for once she doesn't know what to say or do, in a vunerable (and sexy) state where my friends (or if you're older) or one of the dads comes to my mom's "rescue" ushering her just out of sight where he/they can coerce her into giving a BJ (or more, but realistically it would be a short window of time before someone decided to check on her & whoever "rescued" her) I could go into a lot more and various details/scenarios, but I've already written alot.

Also, I'm definitetly not the ringleader of any of this - in real life and/or fantasy. That would be Bryce, who is way cooler than the rest of us, has already had sex with lots of hot girls in our school, and the one who pointed out the celebrities my mom often gets told by people she looks/dresses like all either have milf porn star lookalikes or easily could be one if not already famous. He's also the one who comes up with most of the prank ideas that he want me to help him and the other guys try on my mom, but most of them are kinda far fetched, but there are a few that really could possibly work (I haven't admitted that to those guys). As far as "male motivation" you might be over thinking that part because how complex or mentally deep motivation would you need if you were that "neighbor with a dissolving marriage" you mentioned and my mom looked like your favorite milf celebrity or porn star? LOL, if you got any you can name, let me hear them. It would be awesome if any of the names you mention are one of the celebrities/milf porn stars that my mom gets compared to.

Hypoxia - I didn't go to a boarding school, but my mom is both rich and snobby and bitchy to most everyone including me. Sometimes I don't even think of myself getting sexually involved, but want something to happen to my mom just so I could see the look of surprise on her face (and preferably the "mess" she'd look like while having to do a "walk of shame" past everyone.

What's a B&B funfest?

 

[Hypoxia]

Hypoxia - I didn't go to a boarding school, but my mom is both rich and snobby and bitchy to most everyone including me. Sometimes I don't even think of myself getting sexually involved, but want something to happen to my mom just so I could see the look of surprise on her face (and preferably the "mess" she'd look like while having to do a "walk of shame" past everyone.

So, payback? How do you calibrate it? What should she suffer to balance what she's inflicted? Is humiliation enough? What do you personally seek?

The most prominent of my IRL models are the Texan PhD mom (Iris) and her Californian MBA daughter (Bev aka Beaverly). How could Bev gain revenge on Iris for her lifelong put-downs? Both are politically rad-libs so BBC humiliation won't work. Maybe if Iris is revealed having sex with illiterate rednecks...

What's a B&B funfest?

That's BtB not B&B. Btb is Burn The Bitch (or Bastard). Vengeance. A public Walk of Shame is on the mild side. Total financial and reputation destruction (the nuclear option) is on the strong side. Violence is not excluded. A "BtB Funfest" details the plotting-out of the subject's downfall.

 

[ThaCoolChandler]

Hypoxia,

I dunno, you seem to have another agenda in mind than what I've explained. And you're kinda asking questions that almost answer themselves just by asking them. No offense, but I see that a lot on this site and it's usually an indication of someone just asking questions to keep the chat going instead of being able to reason your own conclusion. Its not as if my messages are vague and open to wildly confused interpretation.

I prefer chatting/messaging with people who can be creative as I can, not someone who just asks questions that are almost repeating what I've said but in question form.

I say that with all due respect and no malice. Peace

 

[EquinoxRising]

I prefer chatting/messaging with people who can be creative as I can, not someone who just asks questions that are almost repeating what I've said but in question form.

I say that with all due respect and no malice. Peace

Is this thread a story idea then or a "chat" thread?

 

[ThaCoolChandler]

Maybe I'll put it in both if there's some sort of issue. That cool with you? Kinda curious why you're making it your biz to ask. To contribute or to criticize?

 

[Strangebuddy]

Well, she's the story ideas mod so...

 

[Hypoxia]

This particular forum is for brainstorming story ideas. It's not for role-play, general chats, discussing politics-religion-sports (unless they involve stories), sharing recipes (unless stories involve food), playing word games, or any of the other fun diversions at LIT. Folks here throw out ideas. Then we tear them apart and stitch them back together, playing with motivations, extrapolations, familiar tropes, bizarre fantasies, whatever. Stuff that doesn't fit here is addressed by the moderator. Chat and roleplay forums are over yonder.

 

[ThaCoolChandler]

Ah, ok.

Well, I guess I was in the wrong spot, but since I'm here, I'm curious about maybe who the "we" are that do the brainstorming, tearing, stitching ect are. It's actually a cool idea to have something like this seen as story for people to check under the hood and kick the tires but at the same time I appreciate someone's complex input be it +/- I also think if it seems like someone is taking the entire engine, tranny, and wheels off so they can replace it with their own personal gear that not only doesn't fit the frame of the car, but when I get it back, it doesn't look or sound or drive what I brought in. You seem like a smart cookie and get the metaphor I'm tuning up with.

As the "author" of the story (and owner of the "car") I should be able to - which I think I properly did - politely decline the suggested change in parts. Not only did I turn the parts down, I'm pretty sure I including some supporting reasons as well, so it wasn't without explanation or manners.

Anyhoo....

If you're ok leaving it up on the lift for a few other gear heads to check the engine and consisours of fine automobiles to buff the surface, have at it. I realize the level of Oedipal in my thoughts about thinking, but hey, as long as I'm not eating people or banging dead bodies, right?

 

[EquinoxRising]

Maybe I'll put it in both if there's some sort of issue. That cool with you? Kinda curious why you're making it your biz to ask. To contribute or to criticize?

I am the mod to this board and if you are only looking to "chat", I'll move this thread to an appropriate board. That's why.

 

[ThaCoolChandler]

Hot Mom Hot Mess

I am the mod to this board and if you are only looking to "chat", I'll move this thread to an appropriate board. That's why.

Oh my. How brash. It's comforting to know there's still moderators on these Discussion Boards who haven't become supercilious in their judicious prudence.

 

[EquinoxRising]

Oh my. How brash. It's comforting to know there's still moderators on these Discussion Boards who haven't become supercilious in their judicious prudence.

Wasn't meant to be brash. I was just replying. Sorry.

 

[Hypoxia]

... I'm curious about maybe who the "we" are that do the brainstorming, tearing, stitching ect are.

"We" are anyone who shows up, yourself included. Peer at the many threads here and see if any provoke your own imagination and criticism. Join the fun. Whip out a wrench and start loosening and tightening bolts. Bust your knuckles. Get greasy and sweaty. Swear a lot.

I've written about 100 stories (not all yet posted) but I've slacked off lately. I'm here at SI to keep ideas seething and maybe gain inspiration for my next manic scribblings. Think of it as mental masturbation er I mean exercise. If you don't see me for some time it's because either we're on a long dry-camp trip (no WiFi) or I'm busy concocting more trash er I mean literature.

Back to SI. We (you & me & anyone else who bothers) throw out many ideas for setups and few for endings. (We need more 'endings' threads.) With any setup I'll poke into backstories, consequences, motivations, mechanisms, fetishes, twists, projections, all the various components of storytelling.

But I love starting with an ending and reverse-engineering the story. Why did she eat live banana slugs? How did he arrive in her bed? Why is her husband crouched atop a bookshelf? It's like seeing a customized auto, figuring out how (and why) it was built, and bolting it together.

SI is where we swap tools and parts.