dwise80
"let there be lips"
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Hiya folks...I'm a relative newbie to forums but have been roaming around Lit. for over a year. I have just had my first 2 chapters posted on Lit. (YEA!!)
I'd love for y'all to give then a read and let me know what you think. Constructive criticism welcome but pls. be gentle.
Thanks
DW
The Horseman Ch1 (in erotic couplings)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=165676
The horseman Ch 2 ( in novels and novellas)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=165860
I'd love for y'all to give then a read and let me know what you think. Constructive criticism welcome but pls. be gentle.


Thanks
DW
The Horseman Ch1 (in erotic couplings)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=165676
The horseman Ch 2 ( in novels and novellas)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=165860