The haunted house (open to one female)
* The story mechanism is highly inspirated from the show American horror story, season 1*
** please be tolerant, I know I can do mistakes, English isn't my first language. Any help would be appreciated, thanks**
On this sunny april morning, a middle age lady was waiting for her appointment in front of a big house iron gate. The morning sun light was perfect to enhance her chance but the woman somehow felt nervous. She had been trying selling this big and lovely house for years but no one ever showed interest in it because of its history.
What happened 8 years ago had not yet been erased from the neighborhood memory and people made sure to never stay too long in front of the house. At the time, a beautiful young woman lived alone in this big house. She inherited of this place she had never heard about before, when her both parents died in a car accident while they were driving back from the restaurant. One night an intruder went in the house, he wasn t really skilled and did a lot of noise that woke the dweller up. She went downstairs and found herself in front of the thief. He panicked more than her, grabbed his gun and shot her in a blink of an eye. Her body was discovered weeks later when postmen noticed the unpicked letters and the bad smell.
While the house seller recalled the bad memories, a car went by and parked in front of the house. A 30 year old man got out of the car and headed to the woman. He was tall (1.88 m), in good shape due to 3 times a week trainings, wearing black glasses, with light brown trimmed beard and same color short hair. They started talking and the house visit began.
Two weeks later the house was his and he moved in. He came here because of a career promotion opportunity, he didn t bring many things with him from Europe and bought the strictly necessary stuff in local stores.
The house story had been told to him but he didn’t care at the time. But now that he was going to bed alone in this big house, he wasn’t that much confident anymore. After turning himself in his bed for hours due to unpleasant thoughts, he eventually fell asleep.
* The story mechanism is highly inspirated from the show American horror story, season 1*
** please be tolerant, I know I can do mistakes, English isn't my first language. Any help would be appreciated, thanks**
On this sunny april morning, a middle age lady was waiting for her appointment in front of a big house iron gate. The morning sun light was perfect to enhance her chance but the woman somehow felt nervous. She had been trying selling this big and lovely house for years but no one ever showed interest in it because of its history.
What happened 8 years ago had not yet been erased from the neighborhood memory and people made sure to never stay too long in front of the house. At the time, a beautiful young woman lived alone in this big house. She inherited of this place she had never heard about before, when her both parents died in a car accident while they were driving back from the restaurant. One night an intruder went in the house, he wasn t really skilled and did a lot of noise that woke the dweller up. She went downstairs and found herself in front of the thief. He panicked more than her, grabbed his gun and shot her in a blink of an eye. Her body was discovered weeks later when postmen noticed the unpicked letters and the bad smell.
While the house seller recalled the bad memories, a car went by and parked in front of the house. A 30 year old man got out of the car and headed to the woman. He was tall (1.88 m), in good shape due to 3 times a week trainings, wearing black glasses, with light brown trimmed beard and same color short hair. They started talking and the house visit began.
Two weeks later the house was his and he moved in. He came here because of a career promotion opportunity, he didn t bring many things with him from Europe and bought the strictly necessary stuff in local stores.
The house story had been told to him but he didn’t care at the time. But now that he was going to bed alone in this big house, he wasn’t that much confident anymore. After turning himself in his bed for hours due to unpleasant thoughts, he eventually fell asleep.
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