The Gift, The Giver, The Thief, ....

MissTaken

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The Gift and the Giver,
the Rebel, the Thief,
and the Stranger and his Glue

The Giver was alone, and the Gift unused: the Giver felt lonely, and
sought
to find someone worthy of the Gift.

The Rebel came along and saw the Gift the Giver possessed, and
desired the
Gift for himself. Rather than ask the Giver for the Gift, or ask what
the
Giver wanted for the Gift, the Rebel decided that social rules did
not apply
to him, and simply said "Give me the gift."

The Giver knew that the Gift was fragile and would be destroyed if
mistreated, and did not trust the Rebel; for how many of those who
are
impolite are also delicate? But the Giver did not wish to offend, and
so said
to the Rebel "I am sorry, but this Gift is for someone else."

The Rebel grew angry and blustered "But I deserve the Gift. I am
special and
I deserve that things be given to me."

The Giver, glad to have trusted her first instinct, merely
repeated: "I am
sorry, but this Gift is for someone else."

And the Rebel, still complaining, went his way.

The Giver sat under a willow tree, contemplating the Gift and
wondering about
the qualities needed to really appreciate the Gift; as she was
sitting there
the sun and the breeze and the sound of the creek below lulled her
into a
doze.

The Thief, who had overheard the Rebel and the Giver, was waiting for
just
this moment. Dashing out from behind a nearby bush, he made a grab
for the
Gift; grasping it he started to run away.

However, the Giver was awakened by this and reached out to stop the
Thief.
"Give that back!" cried the Giver. "It is not yours! You have no
right!" So
saying, she reached out, trying to retrieve the Gift.

The Thief said "I do not care if it was not mine, I have possession
of it so
it is now my property." And so saying, he pulled again at the Gift,
hoping to
wrench it from the Giver.

In the ensuing struggle, the Gift was fouled, battered, and broken.
The
Thief, deciding he did not want a damaged Gift, finally let go and
said "You
keep it; it is now worthless."

The Giver cried at the state of the Gift, which she had hoped to find
someone
worthy of; it was dirty, pieces were missing and scattered in the
grass
around her, and the intact parts were bent and dented. She began to
believe
the Thief's assessment of the Gift: perhaps it no longer mattered who
it
belonged to, worthless as it was.

But then she noticed that her tears made clean streaks on the Gift as
they
fell, and she thought that perhaps if some of it could be cleaned,
all of it
could; perhaps she could make her Gift have worth once again. She
took the
Gift and its broken pieces to the creek, where she began to wash
them.

The Gift was easy to clean, but in trying to wash the pieces that had
been
broken from it, the Giver lost one. She began to lose hope again. Yet
she was
still determined to try to repair the Gift.

Hours passed as she fit pieces back together where they would stay.
Some
pieces she could not make stay, however. From behind her, a
voice: "Perhaps
this Glue could help you mend your Gift". She turned to see a
Stranger,
holding a small tube of Glue. She took the Glue and thanked the
Stranger,
then finished repairing her Gift with the Stranger's Glue.

When she turned to give the Glue back to the Stranger, he was gone.
She
thought to herself that this Stranger had thought her Gift worthy
enough to
donate his Glue, and not even demand payment, nor even ask for the
Glue to be
returned. Perhaps her Gift had worth after all.

And as she sat and contemplated her Gift, she realized that the
Stranger was
the type of person who would neither ask nor demand a Gift, nor would
he
take, but rather he would give. And she thought to herself that the
Stranger
was a Giver too. And who better to appreciate a Gift but a Giver?

So she sought out the Stranger, and when she found him, she tried to
return
the Glue to him. He thanked her, but said that she should keep the
Glue, in
case the Gift should break again.

And the Giver said "In that case, you should accept the Glue, for I
wish to
give the Gift to you." And so saying, she placed the Gift in the
Stranger's
hands.

The Stranger looked at the Gift, and said "This is too precious; I do
not
know if I can take care of this Gift." The Giver said "I believe that
you
can, and I will stay with you and help you care for the Gift when you
falter."

So the Stranger and the Giver took the Gift together, sharing in it
and
sharing it, and held it as an example for all to see.

~Author Unknown~
 
Food for thought

Who are you in this story?

What is the condition of your gift?

Where is your SO in this story?

How submissive is the Giver that she gives the gift without invitation? Is that acceptable?

Discuss ;)
 
It's a nice story, MissT (though the line returns make it format oddly depending on the width of one's browser).

What if you have played more than one role in your life? And I wonder whether people would actually agree with one's own assesment of which character they are.

I've definitely had the naivete/unworldlyness of the giver, but I'm not one to look to share like the giver. I've been rude/unconventional like the rebel, and tried to steal like the thief (although much more clandestinely), but mostly I see myself most like the Stranger, willing to help without expecting anything in return, except I would have kept the glue after helping.
:)

How's that for a start?
 
Now what? ........... my addition

Eventually, the Thief and the Rebel noticed the Giver had given the Gift to the Stranger. They became enraged with jealously. They decided that if they could not have the Gift, then no one should.

They plotted a plan to destroy the Gift and the happiness the Giver and the Stranger had found. And so one day, when the Giver and Stranger weren't looking, they placed a poison in the Gift.

The Stranger picked up the Gift, just as the Giver noticed something was wrong. The Giver slapped the Gift from the Stranger's hand. The poision was strong though and the Stranger immediately fell to the ground. The Giver called for help and listened, but no one came.

The only sound that the Giver could hear, was the snickers of the Thief and Rebel, who hid behind a nearby apple tree. The Giver held the Stranger in her arms and cried once more. Her stream of tears, fell on the Strangers body.

And then the Stranger stirred. The Giver's tears had washed away the poison and somehow cured the Stranger. The Thief and Rebel saw that the Stranger was not affected by the poison. They thought the poison was too weak.

As the Giver and Stranger were occupied by each other, the Thief and Rebel crept up and tried to take the Gift once more. The
Thief grabbed the Gift first, but the Rebel did not trust the Thief and so pulled it from his hands. In seconds both lay on the ground, stone dead. They died from their own poison.
 
Thank you, Miss Taken.
This story could not have been more timely for me. I had no gift great enough for the stranger that recently passed through my life.
 
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I didn't even know I had a Gift until I met the Stranger. I wanted to give him something special, so I did my best to make a gift from what I had.
 
Re: Food for thought

MissTaken:
"Who are you in this story?"

How many people do you expect to answer this question truthfully?
Thief.

"What is the condition of your gift?"
What gift?

"Where is your SO in this story?"
I don't have a SO. It's sort of obvious why.

"How submissive is the Giver that she gives the gift without invitation? Is that acceptable?"
The Giver could be a sub, or a dom/me, or a three toed sloth. Every person is capable of being a Giver.
 
Good point, Never

I did find that I responded to this story without considering the gift of submission, the first time I read.

Long before finding the lifestyle, I would have said I was the Giver. My gift being my heart.

I may have even written a poem or two in college to that affect.

Teh second time I read it, I read it from a submissive perspective as my best submissive friend and "mentor" had sent it to me.

*warm hugs to her*
 
I think right at this moment, I'm the giver who's just been assaulted by the Thief....I'm crying over my gift wondering if it's still worthy of being given...hoping that a Stranger will come along soon with the glue I need...

*sigh*
 
A great story MissT. I can't really respond, truthfully.

Nice amended ending, PlayDoe.

Rose
 
A Desert Rose:
"Nice amended ending, PlayDoe."


Selfish people should die horribly and alone.
It’s practically a Walt Disney classic.
 
That's a beautiful story, Miss Taken, and beautifully written.

I see Galahad and my Master as Strangers, and they have both given me the Glue of love, kindness and acceptance that restored my Gift to something worth giving.

I think the Giver in the story is very submissive. It's traditional for a submissive to petition a Dom/me for His or Her collar, though not common in my limited experience.
 
It is another day and another thought

has occurred to me regarding this story.

The Giver is so like a child, I am sitting here mulling over my children.

Children are like this.
My children are.
I watch them, day after day, seek their father's approval, search for love from him, giving him their's unconditionally as only a child can do.

Each step of the way, he shoots them down. He is a mean ugly bastard and the children are seeing it.

Then, in comes Painman and both children, after a day or so of some caution are eager to give to him what should be welcomed and nurtured by their dad.


*sigh* I can only keep my glue handy and hope that someone someday will come along who will bring his own, to care for my Gift as well as the children's.
 
In response to boz

I think we all take on different roles at different times in our life.

I am easily the Stranger for friends, family and anyone in my circle.

AS the Giver, I am holding that gift close to me and need someone to convince me it is worthy of giving.

I am not sure if I have met my Stranger yet.

I am sure that I have been the thief, whether knowingly or not.

I am sure that I haven't beent he rebel though.

I have met them all.
 
Re: Food for thought

MissTaken said:
Who are you in this story?

What is the condition of your gift?

unused


Where is your SO in this story?

The stranger

How submissive is the Giver that she gives the gift without invitation?
She sees in the stranger one who will take her gift and use it for the benifit of both of them. In my case, HE allowed me to make that decision.
Is that acceptable?
that depends on who the stranger is and who the giver is, doesn't it?? Each one of us are different in how we perceive what is right for us. Who am I to judge what is right for another??? :confused:

Thanx for the Thread Miss T. It gave me some great food for thought this morning. :D




-kym- Happy that MY-Sir has accepted my gift.:)
 
a strange concept...

:rose:

Let me start off my saying that i am not a religious person,
but here's a thought...

The Giver - God
The Stranger - life
The Rebel and the Thief - torment and tragedy
The Glue - is made up of knowledge, wisdom and strength
The Gift - you

How many of us have not been broken apart by torment and/or tregedy?
And what was it that put us back together but knowledge, wisdom and strength?
And by who's hands were we put back together?

Just a thought....
:rose:
 
Oh my...

:rose:

Geez I hate when I'm the last post...

this was a beautiful story... it shouldn't be burried on page 2...

;) just bringing it back to the top

:rose:
 
Thank you for the bump, ADR. This was posted before I came so I hadn't seen it. Thanks to Miss T for posting it originally.
 
snowy ciara said:
Thank you for the bump, ADR. This was posted before I came so I hadn't seen it. Thanks to Miss T for posting it originally.

I'm sure lots have not seen it. And I just happened on it while doing a search for something entirely different.

Glad you liked it. I'm sure she will be, too.
 
I see myself as the giver and my SO as the stranger. D/s has nothing to do with it. We all have a gift of our time, our attentions, ourselves, our wisdom and intuition, and I think we've all been hurt by other people over it.

M is just the kind of person who responds to all pain with a plan, he's definitely someone who goes through life with a tube of glue in case of emergencies, whereas I'm always polishing and perfecting my thingies.
 
Netzach said:
I see myself as the giver and my SO as the stranger. D/s has nothing to do with it. We all have a gift of our time, our attentions, ourselves, our wisdom and intuition, and I think we've all been hurt by other people over it.

M is just the kind of person who responds to all pain with a plan, he's definitely someone who goes through life with a tube of glue in case of emergencies, whereas I'm always polishing and perfecting my thingies.

Are you a first born child, only child or first born female, Netzach?
 
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