The funniest feedback ever

[BlackSnake]

I'm not good at writing yet, so even though the reader's comments are valid, I'm betting that this reader had no idea how close they had come to being totally correct. I get a hard-on when I start a story, if my dick softens I stop. Check out this comment:


This message contains feedback for: BlackSnake
About the submission: Parenting Ch. 01
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Your story is good but you need to leave your dick alone when you write so that
you can pay more attention to your grammer.


LOL

 

[Svenskaflicka]

lol

He/she gotcha there, man!

 

[KillerMuffin]

You missed the joke, Sv. Bad grammar, bad punctuation, and bad spelling.


That's hysterical, Blacksnake.

 

[ag2507]

A quick response for now

Women in night clubs uncounsciously vary the amount of skin they display according the status of their fertility. It is an aspect independant of their motivation for being their: essentially their body is dressing for impregnation.

Their minds may be looking to gat laid, find a husband, dance with their friends, alleviate boredom, get drunk, watch a star. Whatever it is, it isn't any one single need, any more than guys go to get laid either.

I'm not sure what this proves vis a vis your premise other than it is just too simplistic.

AG

 

[KillerMuffin]

Did I miss the subject change? Darn it, I knew I shoulda made a right turn at Albequerque.

 

[BlackSnake]

Did I miss the subject change? Darn it, I knew I shoulda made a right turn at Albequerque.

We'll stay on track long enough for my ass to get nailed to the wall.

The comment just struck me as so funny. I promise to start giving the readers a break and at least read my own stuff.

 

[BardsLady]

Funny Feedback stuff.

I think the funniest one I've gotten so far on my very first story: Nightlife with Kiefer... was this one:

OMG! I Love Kiefer Sutherland!! I'm such a big fan you HAVE to write a sequel and you have to do it Now.. I cant wait.. please hurry! Oh, and make sure you keep that other guy in.. what's his name? Right.. Markus.. Keep him in there too.


I had to chuckle on this one because I get the image of either someone who has had way too much coffee to drink before reading stories, or one of those fans who screams and faints at the sight of her favorite star.

Just a good chuckle from:

BardsLady

 

[Svenskaflicka]

Even though the reader is throwing rocks in a glass house, he does have a point. I haven't read all your stories, BS; but your grammar and spelling always amuse me in the threads.

 

[BlackSnake]

Even though the reader is throwing rocks in a glass house, he does have a point. I haven't read all your stories, BS; but your grammar and spelling always amuse me in the threads.

You should see the replies I send at work to the many emails I get:

nope
yup
not
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