The flying anvil wants some feedback on his stories

[theflyinganvil]

I am a new writer and would appreciate comments and suggestions about my stories.

 

[deliciously_naughty]

I am a new writer and would appreciate commants and surgesstions about my stories.

You need to post a link to your stories. Or...you need to at least give the title and category. Don't expect us to do your work for you.

Picky picky:
1. it's comments (not commants)
2. it's suggestions (not surgesstions)

 

[theflyinganvil]

Thank you for your reply it served as no help what so ever. Though you know the spellings of the words comments and suggestions you appear not to know what they mean. I have although taken in what you said about putting links to my stories in to consideration so here they are.

This is my Anna Kornikova story- http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=57711

This is my Stephanie McMahon story- http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=57714

And finally this is my S Club 7 story- http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=57733

 

[KillerMuffin]

You are insufferably rude. People do not owe you feedback. They give you feedback out of the kindness of their heart. If you can't use it, then don't use it. There is no need to be a dick while you're at it.

You want suggestions? Here's four:

1. Learn to spell.
2. Learn to use punctuation.
3. Learn standard English grammar.
4. Grow a larger vocabulary, in particular, pay attention to "connotation."

And yes, I read one your stories. Anna the virgin gave him the best blowjob and fuck of his life over the course of 500 words. What, was he a virgin, too?

No need to thank me.