The Final Fuck

[TadOverdon]

I think group sex usually works best when you keep a close focus on one character, and that character's thoughts and feelings about the group sex encounter. Especially if it's the character's first time engaging in group sex. It heightens the sense of strangeness and eroticism. To me, anyway.

Another thing to do is to put the orgy/group sex in an unusual place, like somewhere in public. That gives you something to write about other than just what the body parts are doing.

Yeah, I've set them in skyscraper penthouses, living rooms, backyard cookouts and now a tropical island. Point of view moves around the participants somewhat, but most of the bodies on the scene are always a step up from set dressing.

 

[8letters]

I think just cutting and pasting a previous fuck and tweaking a few details (filing off the serial numbers so to speak) does you and the reader a disservice.

I pasted in a similar scene at the bottom of the story, but there's very little that I think I can take from it. The characters are too different. I want this sex scene to have a lot of dialog, and the similar scene also has a lot of dialog, but the dialog is all wrong for this story. However, it is nice having it there as it gives me an idea of the length I want for the scene.

I’ve read a good story recently and it ends literally with the male character sliding his sisters silk thong panties down her toned, tanned thighs, as he decides to kiss his way up to her pussy. Sometimes leading somewhere and a nice final tease is enough.

As a reader, I'd be totally disappointed with this. I read Literotica stories to masturbate, and I want to cum along with the two characters. This would leave me frustrated.

 

[TadOverdon]

I read Literotica stories to masturbate, and I want to cum along with the two characters. This would leave me frustrated.

You are my target audience. LOL

 

[SimonDoom]

A good group sex scene shouldn't just happen in a short story. n.

LOL. Never say never! I just finished a group sex story that I will contribute to the upcoming 750-word story event. It can be done! It's a dogging story, so it doesn't require buildup because the lack of an emotional connection of any kind is the whole point.

 

[jehoram]

What I really have trouble with, is describing orgasms.

What? You're not content with one of the characters saying "Ohmygod ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod I'm CUMMMMMING!"


...followed by an explosion of liquids, saturating vaginas and balls and sheets.

Works every time for some writers.

 

[TadOverdon]

Guys' orgasms are easy. They cuss and groan and ejaculate.

 

[MrPixel]

And grunt.

I try to match female orgasms to the character's "voice". That's been my life experience, although there have been a couple of surprises.

 

[Lifestyle66]

LOL. Never say never! I just finished a group sex story that I will contribute to the upcoming 750-word story event. It can be done! It's a dogging story, so it doesn't require buildup because the lack of an emotional connection of any kind is the whole point.

A dogging story? Well, OK. That scenario does equate to "A picture is worth a thousand words."

My criticism of group sex in a short story came from having just read such a story of four couples who knew each other and decided one evening "Let's all swap and have sex together." The story ends abruptly with how they all went on to enjoy doing it over and over, happily ever after.

I prefer erotic stories which can or might happen, as opposed to those suddenly jumping into action with no resolution to conflicts or tension. In my stories, I use an "after action review" discussion between husband and wife to resolve tensions.
Even the 750-word story I wrote last year needed some resolution of unspoken tensions. (Couldn't just cum in her mouth then say "I'm done, now let's go home." It would have been only a 730-word story.)

I look forward to reading yours.

 

[IsItBad]

I've got 15K words written in a story, building up to the final fuck. The kissing started before 3K words, and the story has been steadily escalating from there. The final fuck is my least favorite type to write - missionary in a bed. I feel like I've written this kind of fuck too many times, and that there's nothing new to write. But at the same time, I feel like this is the most important part of the story, the conclusion I've building towards since the first word. I'd like the final fuck to be of a solid length, say 500-1000 words.

So I've been looking around for some inspiration for something new to say. I've watched some porn videos and read some porn stories. I'm strongly tempted to take a similar fuck scene from another of my stories and edit it rather than write the scene from scratch.

Does anyone else have this struggle? What do you look to for inspiration for such fuck scenes?

if its really the final fuck......like the couple is parting ways and this is the last time - its really all about the love and the bittersweet parting of ways.....its truly making love versus fucking.....its pouring out all of each other's emotions into one last intense loving of one another.....the sex is very secondary to the intense emotions involved.....its the desperate clinging, the trying to fight back tears, the increasing intensity, those kinds of things.......the position or wetness or whatever are super secondary to the emotional fucking that is taking place.........just my 2 cents

 

[Lovecraft_Lore]

They start having sex only to find there are a bunch of frat dudes having a BBQ on top the house next door.

They start holding up signs with numbers, rating the sex. The story was going in one direction, then that happens. It might make it fun.

 

[Nylonian]

I've written a couple of "final fucks" already and I am trying to avoid this trope for my next one! Haha. I consider it a creative challenge. Write a decent story without a final fuck...

 

[Smuttyandfun]

Since I normally have several love scenes in each of my stories, I try hard (no pun intended) to make each one a little different.

Maybe he takes her outside, bends his knees and takes her from behind on a balcony, gazing up at star-filled sky. Or half-way through, he changes position, or pulls her on top to finish, or vice versa. He might tell her forcefully to get down on all fours to take her doggy-style, because he's so close, he just has to get inside her. Or, half-way through he might slow things down, by going down on her again, before he finishes inside her.

Normally, I describe some love scenes in more detail, and later in the story not as much. But you still understand that they're really enjoying each other, and sometimes as often as they can.

Like most authors, I struggle to keep things fresh, and try not to do exactly the same thing from story to story. I know it's basically A goes into B, and hopefully they both get off, but getting there really can be half the fun. Teasing banter helps, too. Laughing and joking can even be a turn on, especially if it helps to set the mood.

Just my 2 cents worth.

 

[BobbyBrandt]

Have them get into it a bit, then have the guy glance at the clock and say: "Oh, shit, the big game is about to begin. Can we finish this later?"....

I was thinking along similar lines...

Make it a cliff-hanger. What does the condom breaking imply for their future?, etc.

Leave your readers wanting more. Challenge yourself.

 

[Emilymcplugger]

I've got 15K words written in a story, building up to the final fuck. The kissing started before 3K words, and the story has been steadily escalating from there. The final fuck is my least favorite type to write - missionary in a bed. I feel like I've written this kind of fuck too many times, and that there's nothing new to write. But at the same time, I feel like this is the most important part of the story, the conclusion I've building towards since the first word. I'd like the final fuck to be of a solid length, say 500-1000 words.

So I've been looking around for some inspiration for something new to say. I've watched some porn videos and read some porn stories. I'm strongly tempted to take a similar fuck scene from another of my stories and edit it rather than write the scene from scratch.

Does anyone else have this struggle? What do you look to for inspiration for such fuck scenes?

Emotion.

Memories, of the person, of different fucks. Fantasies, how that compares to the real thing they are experiencing now.

That’s where I’d start it.

But what do I know?

My views are well low.

 

[BuckyDuckman]

I've got 15K words written in a story, building up to the final fuck. The kissing started before 3K words, and the story has been steadily escalating from there. The final fuck is my least favorite type to write - missionary in a bed. I feel like I've written this kind of fuck too many times, and that there's nothing new to write. But at the same time, I feel like this is the most important part of the story, the conclusion I've building towards since the first word. I'd like the final fuck to be of a solid length, say 500-1000 words.

So I've been looking around for some inspiration for something new to say. I've watched some porn videos and read some porn stories. I'm strongly tempted to take a similar fuck scene from another of my stories and edit it rather than write the scene from scratch.

Does anyone else have this struggle? What do you look to for inspiration for such fuck scenes?

Your regular readers like the way you describe the final fuck, even if you're tired, worn-out, and a bit bored by the time you get to it. Write the 8Letters final fuck that screams: "This is how 8Letters writes a final fuck scene!" Those who follow you are expecting that, even if it feels like a retread of old thoughts to you.

 

[Seadog777]

I've got 15K words written in a story, building up to the final fuck. The kissing started before 3K words, and the story has been steadily escalating from there. The final fuck is my least favorite type to write - missionary in a bed. I feel like I've written this kind of fuck too many times, and that there's nothing new to write. But at the same time, I feel like this is the most important part of the story, the conclusion I've building towards since the first word. I'd like the final fuck to be of a solid length, say 500-1000 words.

So I've been looking around for some inspiration for something new to say. I've watched some porn videos and read some porn stories. I'm strongly tempted to take a similar fuck scene from another of my stories and edit it rather than write the scene from scratch.

Does anyone else have this struggle? What do you look to for inspiration for such fuck scenes?

The final climactic "fuck" should just flow from your brain, through your fingers, onto the screen.
Try getting away from the story for a day or so and see if that frees things up for you.

 

[oggbashan]

French President Faure had the final fuck:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Félix_Faure