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Strangebuddy
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I've sat on this idea for a couple of years but I think I want to write this and can do it if I split it into bite-sized chunks. I need help on progression and how the story should be framed.
In her early teens, Susan found a sketch or photo of a naked woman kneeling atop a large pumpkin with a devious smile on her face and a beckoning hand outstretched to the side, her body turned in such a way that the side of her large right breast is exposed.
The picture, which was in her dad's studio, has her entrances and its subject's confidence and raw sexuality leave an impact on her. Now, as high school senior, she decides to return to the picture and creates a poem about it, describing the subject as a symbol of nature and feminine power. The poem does well but Susan's father is wide-eyed when he reads it, asking how she came up with the image.
Susan tells him but he then brushes off her follow up questions as to where the image came from. Later that night, she over hears her dad talking to her uncle about the image and her uncle getting ticked off that it was ever made, calling it "Lacy's pumpkin ride"
Susan is shocked since Lacy is her aunt's name and someone who has never shown the slightest trace of being the figure in the image.
Armed with what little knowledge she has, she goes to each of her relatives, bluffing them to get to the bottom of what's going on. Eventually discovering that her family had a brief tradition where every Halloween they met in the family barn to fuck. It didn't last long but each of her relatives admit to occasionally continuing it in smaller numbers or even outside of Halloween. Susan is shocked but wants to know what started it, why it stopped, ...and if it could happen again.
In her early teens, Susan found a sketch or photo of a naked woman kneeling atop a large pumpkin with a devious smile on her face and a beckoning hand outstretched to the side, her body turned in such a way that the side of her large right breast is exposed.
The picture, which was in her dad's studio, has her entrances and its subject's confidence and raw sexuality leave an impact on her. Now, as high school senior, she decides to return to the picture and creates a poem about it, describing the subject as a symbol of nature and feminine power. The poem does well but Susan's father is wide-eyed when he reads it, asking how she came up with the image.
Susan tells him but he then brushes off her follow up questions as to where the image came from. Later that night, she over hears her dad talking to her uncle about the image and her uncle getting ticked off that it was ever made, calling it "Lacy's pumpkin ride"
Susan is shocked since Lacy is her aunt's name and someone who has never shown the slightest trace of being the figure in the image.
Armed with what little knowledge she has, she goes to each of her relatives, bluffing them to get to the bottom of what's going on. Eventually discovering that her family had a brief tradition where every Halloween they met in the family barn to fuck. It didn't last long but each of her relatives admit to occasionally continuing it in smaller numbers or even outside of Halloween. Susan is shocked but wants to know what started it, why it stopped, ...and if it could happen again.
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