The Elevator

[Tess22]

I was so happy to see this story finally up on the web. I know the person who wrote it, and know who it was written for, and I would like to know what everyone thinks. Sean's a great writer(I think) and I can't wait to see the rest of his work.

 

[Southernhelle]

I agree! after reading this post I went and read the story..very sweet. Made me reminisce about a certain online friend I met in Charlotte a few months ago...

 

[Sean316]

Thank you so much for reading! I have a couple more stories posted. I was going through the authors section and saw my name listed (Blushing). Please read my other stories and tell me what you think. I am thinking about posting a couple of my more adventerous stories. Romance is fantastic, but sometime you have to be a bit naughtier.

Thanks again!
Sean

 

[Tess22]

Sean -
I'm sure that anything you post will be spectacular, regardless of the topic. Can't wait to see those new stories. Am now anticipating that change of pace, curious as to what it will involve!!

 

[DaMan]

Am I the only real man here? That was a pussy ass story. If you were a real man, you would have had her doing you without all that crap. Grow up and find a pair

 

[Guest]

yeah, bring me a beer, and cook me a chicken pot pie, b**ch... (scratches his nuts)

 

[Guest]

An educated response from DaMan. With that attitude, I am certain the only thing you ever "do" is yourself.

Come back when you can walk erect you neanderthal......

 

[Deborah]

Neanderthal is right! He should stick to reading "Dick Pokes Jane" stories. You know, the ones with three words, "Dick pokes Jane."

Sean, I think your stories are very good. You are quite the romantic. I especially liked your "Winnie the Pooh boxers" (camouflage boxers are getting a little old) and the surprise ending. I love surprises! Being watched is another matter. Just depends.

What's up with the towel in "Valentine's Day" I wonder? I simply can not imagine.

The great thing about Literotica is that there are so many different stories by so many different authors that anyone can find the flavor they like. So why bitch for no good reason about something you don't like? Constructive criticism is one thing; snotty cheap shots are quite another.

You go for it Sean!

 

[Silver Sea]

I loved the story too Sean. The ending made me laugh. I just had a recent experience in a public garage. The next day when I was speaking with my friend she told me she was fondling recalling our experience when it dawned on her that there were probably security cameras in the garage.

Great writing!!! As Deborah said, "romantic", and may I add, "sensual".

 

[Sean316]

I didn't realize my stories would cause such different responses. I think there IS something for everyone here. I have submitted Valentines Day part 2, which gives you a little more of the story, but I admit to stringing the story along. Hopefully that will get posted soon. Thanks for reading. I am always interested in what people have to say about my stories and what they would like to see me write about next.