The Elevator Project

[Madame Pandora]

Hi Ho.

Recently, Dillinger and I collaborated on a story together entitled “The Elevator.” The reason for this was because in the course of past debates, we discovered that we each had a completely different reader base. Our styles being as drastically dissimilar as they are, this wasn’t all that surprising.

So, out of curiosity, we came up with the idea to collaborate on a story that would blend both our styles and see if it would appease or repel our regular audiences.

If you have enjoyed either of our stories in the past and are so inclined, please give "The Elevator" a read and let us know what you think. You can email one of us or post any comments you have to share here.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=10304

We’re very curious to see if it was compelling enough to draw in more of an audience, or if the blend of style was a turn off.

Thanks!

MP

 

[Gaucho]

Well, MP, maybe GMTA because I had a difficult time figuring out which of you wrote which passage (if that's how you did it). Or maybe it's because one of my hands was, um, busy while I was reading it.

Well done, you two! Two well-aimed splats up!

 

[Dillinger]

MP - thanks for starting this thread! *smile*

Gaucho - Thanks!

 

[doctor_insanus]

Loved the story!

No attempt at high-brow literature here; just wall-to-wall, hardcore sex! I think the elevator fantasy is almost universal in its appeal, and the two of you took it to the extreme.

It was nasty, it was messy, and it was hilarious!

Here's my vote for a sequel!

 

[Madame Pandora]

It was nasty, it was messy, and it was hilarious!

I was hoping someone would comment on the humor. It thought we came up with the best damn punchline I've seen on a story since "Daddy, can I have a pony?"

MP

 

[circe!]

Wow!

A story answering the eternal question: How many cocks can you fit in an elevater?

The whole story was big fun. Congratulations MP and Dill. Job well done.

circe!

 

[doctor_insanus]

It was nasty, it was messy, and it was hilarious!

I was hoping someone would comment on the humor. It thought we came up with the best damn punchline I've seen on a story since "Daddy, can I have a pony?"

MP

The humor definitely made the story better. Even if it had just been a regular "elevator gang bang group cumshot" story, it would have been pretty darn good. Throw in a nice mixture of humor, and it was great!

I laughed. I cried. I... well, I didn't cry, but I did enjoy the story. A lot!

 

[Dillinger]

doctor_insanus and circe! - THANKS! *smile*

circe! - would you believe that in an earlier draft there were even more cocks in there? *lol* But then we got out the tape measure, did some calculations, and figured we'd better keep in in the realm of possibility...

doctor_insanus - thanks for not crying... and for laughing in the right places (hopefully).