The Darkness Within ch2 has been resubmitted

[americandemon]

Just thought you'd like to know. I hope it will make it through this time. My fingers are crossed. I'll let you know if it gets posted. Hmmm Well, I take that back. I usually find out my story has been posted by the feedback I get. I guess you'll tell me! LOL

Demon
P.s The New Harry Potter movie was good but felt rushed and they left some stuff out. I think they should have added 10 more mins to the movie. I hope they don't short cut the fourth movie. The Goblet of Fire is my fav book out of the series!!

 

[Cherrie]

You really do seem to be having a lot of trouble with this one don't you?
Post the link when it comes up and then we can see what all the fuss has been over

 

[americandemon]

Hey

how do I put a link on the bottom of my postings? I see other people have them. Does it stay every time I post something? Help!!!
Demon

 

[Guest]

All right. I've read the ch1. I'm ready for the ch2.

But let me ask you: why do you make Lori say stuff like, "He was older, about twenty-five and in college." when she introduce the guy she dated and fucked for over nine months?

Things like this make me hit the "back" button.