The Dark Carnival

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A carnival come to your town unexpectly.You go you have fun at first.But then things go bad.There is something evil in that carnival and you'll have to do everything to survive...
 
a young policeman walks into the carnival to investigate it, he is well muscled and fillout his blue uniform to perfection
 
Cordillia

OOC: Oh I want to play...sounds great. One question...I hate to go to carnivals alone...is there anybody out there who wants to play a friend or boyfriend?

IC: Cordillia walks into the carnival. She LOVED carnivals. She and her dad had gone to carnivals since she was little and she always had a wonderful time.

She stopped to look at herself in a car window. Her strawberry blonde hair tied back in a simple ponytail, her blue eyes sparkling at the thought of fun, her white tank top showing a bit of cleavage and some of her trim tummy, her blue shorts just covering her pert ass...she did like to show off her figure.

She smiled and winked at her image in the window today should be a blast and she was going to enjoy every minute of it!
 
OOC: I would love to play the part of your boyfriend Isolde if you wouldn't mind. If so I can just write down who my character is and let you decide.

Jason (Jace) Michaels
6' 2"
200lbs
Blond, almost white hair
Hazel eyes
Is a fun going guy and likes to be with people, having fun but likes spending time with his girlfriend more than anything.
 
OOC: Sounds good to me...lets have some fun : )
I will post after you do...
 
OOC: Sounds good to me. I probably won't be able to write what Jace is wearing so I will put it here. He is wearing a pair of jeans, a white T-shirt that is a bit too small for him, a pair outdoor walking boots and a pair of dark sunglasses. Well that's what he is wearing at the start at least.

IC: Jace walked through the stalls trying to figure out where to go and what to do when he spotted a familiar figure standing next to her car looking at herself in the window. As he looked at her he thought Damn she looks good today and walked towards where she was standing. When he got close enough to her he cleared his throat, took his sunglasses off and said, "Oh my god. What is a beautiful girl like you doing all alone in the carpark. You should be in there enjoying yourself with a friend and if he or she doesn't arrive soon then I will sweep you off your feet and take you in there myself."
 
Cordillia looked up at someone clearing his throat and she looked quickly from where she had been studying her apperance up to see the one guy she just couldnt say no to.

A smile played on her face as she saw the approval in his eyes. That was better than all the mirrors in the world to her. She laughed at his comment and her smile became mischievious. She loved it when he played this little games and she was more than willing to play back.

Looking around and putting a pretty little pout on her lips, she said,"Well, to tell you the truth I was supposed to meet an incredibly hot guy here and we were going to spend the day at the fair. But it looks as if I have been stood up."

She slid over to Jace and gently laid her hands on his chest. She could feel his heart beating through the material of his shirt.

"I think it would serve him right if I spent the day with the first handsome stranger that came along."

She tilted her head and looked up into those increadible eyes of his and smiled. Her eyes twinkling as she teased him.

"What do you think, handsome stranger?"
 
Jace looked at Cordillia and thought God I love her.

"It's his lose then. If he is foolish enough to leave a beautiful woman like you standing in the carpark waiting for him then I guess it is his own fault that someone would come and pick you up."

Jace then moved quickly and wrapped his arms around Cordillia's waist, looked straight into her eyes before kissing her full and deep on the lips. When he stoppped kissing her he said, "Oh god baby, where have you been all my life. I could stand out here all day just kissing you, do you know that."

Before Cordillia could answer Jace kissed her again, picking her up off her feet as he did which caused her to gasp.
 
Cordillia wrapped her arms around Jace's neck and kissed him back. She let him know without a word that she felt the same about him.

Finally she came up for air and had to laugh. He still had her in his arms and off the ground. It wasnt hard to do as she was a mere 5'5" to his 6' 2" but if they kept on like this she was going to loose all thoughts of going into the carnival. Hell, with as great a kisser as Jace was she was going to forget that the carnival existed.

"Jace," She said, still laughing and running her finger down his nose before planting a kiss on it,"We had a date for the carnival...not for necking. Not that I mind necking with you but you promised me a day of fun and frolick."

"Now put me down, ya big lug and lets go have some OTHER kind of fun."

"Besides," She added,"Thats what the ferris wheel is for!"
 
Jace just looked at Cordillia with a smile before putting her down.

"I wish I didn't have to but seeming as we are here and we do have a date to see the carnival so that we can have some fun and I can see if I can win some prizes for you we might as well go in and look around. But you are forgetting one thing dear, the ghost train. It is nice and dark in there."

He then smiled at her and took his hand in hers, loving the feeling of it as if Cordillia's hand was the only one that he was meant to hold. He leaned down and kissed her on the lips before putting his sunglasses on and saying, "Come on, let's have some fun."

Before Cordillia could say a word he took her into the carnival.
 
Cordillia hurried along after Jace trying to keep up with his long strides. What he didnt realize was that she already had the best prize in the carnival right now.

She looked around at all the people in the carnival and saw all the women looking at her with envy. Jace was easily the hottest guy here and she knew the looks she was getting were looks of envy-and she loved it.

But that wasnt the only reason she liked to be with him. Jace was also fun to be around and he never failed to make her feel on top of the world. Not the mention the fact that her heart always beat faster when she saw him.

"I love the big lug," She thought to herself as she followed behind him, openly staring at his cute ass. Damn but he was making it hard for her to concentrate on anything else.

Shaking herself out of her thoughts she laughed at his comments.
"Jace, honey," She purred,"If you are going to start something on every ride that goes into the shadows we are either never going to be able to leave the park. Or we will be kicked out and asked never to come back again."

Even as she said it though a little thrill went through her at the thought of how daring making out on the rides were. "Stop it," She told herself,"thats NOT why you are here."

Catching up with Jace she took her hand from his and slid it around his waist, making sure her hand grazed his butt, and-looking up to him with an innocent face-said,"Where to first, handsome?"
 
eyes Codillia over his dark mirror shades and smiles thinking she looks damn fine, Chuckles slightly as a firm bulge appears in the pants of his uniform. Says to himself "you need to get out more Danny boy"
 
Jace smiled down at Cordillia, "I'm not handsome. I am more the rugged type."

He stopped and looked around trying to figure out where to go first when he saw a ride that he had always wanted to try. He looked at Cordillia and said, "Come on honey, lets try this ride. I have always wanted to try it."

Before Cordillia could say a word Jace took her hand in his and escorted her towards the ride. He smiled when he walked in and strapped himself in while Cordillia strapped herself in opposite him. The ride then started up with a whir and started to turn slowly. Before anybody in the ride had a chance to adjust the ride began to turn faster and they were pushed against the wall. Jace raised his arms above his head as the ride began to rise and turn even faster.

He looked over at Cordillia and saw that she was trying to hide the fact that the ride was making her a little sick. Damn, I am a goof he thought as the ride continued to turn and raise up and lower down.

After two more minutes the ride had stopped and Jace moved over quickly to Cordillia, wrapping his arms around her. She looked up at him with a weak smile as he took her over to a bench and sat her down on it. He knelt before her.

"Are you alright dear?" he asked, the concern obvious in his voice.

The answer he got was unexpected as she punched him.
 
OOC: OK I am going to try to add a bit of the spooky in here that drew me to the thread in the first place.

Having gotten that out of the way, Cordillia raced to the bathroom and lost the breakfast she never should have eaten that morning. She didnt know how long she had stood there trying to regain her composure but she was finally able to stagger to the sink and splash some cold water on her face.

It was then that it happened. She had just doused her face in cold water and was reaching for a towel when she happened to look in the mirror.

Now, as a rule, Cordillia loved mirrors. She worked hard on her figure. She ran every day and went to a spa twice a week. The spa had a tanning salon so she alway had a year around tan. She was a knock out and she knew it and she thrived on the looks she got as she walked down the street.

So what she saw in the mirror really knocked her for a loop. Staring back at her was her reflection but not the reflection she was used to seeing. This person staring back at her was a wrinkled old crone.

The skin was cracked and scaly. The lips thin and the mouth toothless and blackened. The hair was dry and dirty and hung in her face. Her white tank top showed, not the young pert breasts she knew she had, but empty, drooping sacks of skin that hung limply.

Hard, dark eyes stared at her from underneath bushy eyebrows and somehow there was evil in those eyes...Cordillia knew it.

She stood there for what seemed like ages just staring into the mirror until finally her stupor seemed to break and she screamed. She didnt know how long she screamed but finally pounding on the bathroom door got her attention. Jace was on the outside and calling to her, asking if she was okay.

Her attention was breifly turned toward the door and when she looked back at the mirror her normal reflection looked back. It was almost as if she had imagined it all except she knew she didnt have that good of an imagination.

Jace's shouts got louder and she realized that for some reason he couldnt get into the bathroom which was unusual since the door did not lock unless you had the key.

Going to the door she jerked on it and it came open easily, spilling her boyfriend into the bathroom as she did so.

OOC: Ok this is my post. If you dont want to go this way thats fine just post and let me know and we will treat it just as a day in the park.
 
OOC: I loved the post. Now, it's my turn.

IC: Jace looked at Cordillia, saw that she was spooked by something and asked, "What is it. What's the matter?"

"The mirror, something is in the mirror."

Jace looked at her with concern and then walked towards the mirror, looking at it. When he looked at the mirror what he saw was what he expected to see, his own reflection until it suddenly changed. The reflection started to grin evilly then said something that seem to come from within Jace's mind.
"You will never leave here alive."

The reflection in the mirror began to twirl around then got faster until it disappeared and a black void appeared there. Before Jace could say or do anything something flew out of the mirror and slammed into him, causing him to fly off his feet and onto the floor with a thud.
 
OOC: very nice : )

IC: Cordillia started to scream again as she ran over to Jace's side.

"Jace, honey, are you ok?," She sobbed out as she shook his shoulder. Oh, god, please dont let anything have happened she was thinking. She breathed a sigh of relief when he sat up and shook his head. He was dazed but othewise ok.

She helped him to his feet and gave him her shoulder to lean on.
"Come on," She said through her gritted teeth,"I dont care anymore. We are out of here. I am not staying one more minute in this place."

She helped him through the door not caring if everyone looked at them strangly or not. To hell with them, she was getting herself and him out of here right now. No amount of fun was worth this.
 
As they walked along Jace was starting to feel strange. He was feeling like himself but not like himself, it was if he was looking at the world through a new pair of eyes. Suddenly he heard a voice that seemed to come from nowhere,
"Hi there, you don't mind if I borrow your body for a little while. No, thanks."

Before he knew what was happening Jace felt himself fall into some sort of dark void and he screamed out but nothing came. He then looked around and noticed that he could see everything he was no longer in control and whoever was was looking down the front of Cordillia's top.
 
OOC: I love it! What an imagination!

IC: Cordillia looked up at Jace. He didnt look so good and she was worried about how pale he looked.

Helping him over to the bench she had been sitting on just moments before, she took his face in both of her hands an turned his face so she could see into his eyes.

What she saw there made her shudder. The look of love was gone from his eyes and instead was replaced by....what? She couldnt say but it was as if someone else was staring back at her through his eyes.

"Stop it," She told herself sternly,"This is Jace. The guy who jokes around with you and makes you feel so sexy. This is the guy you love, dammit, and you imagination is getting the best of you."

Shaking off the doubts, she started talking to him.
"Jace, baby, are you alright? You dont look so good. Listen, I thought I saw a cop walking around out here. I'm going to go get him and ask him for help. Will you be okay here til I get back?"

Jace's mouth started working but no sounds came out. This scared her and she didnt know what to do. She didnt want to leave him in this state but she didnt know what was happening and the cop was a bit of reality in this whole crazy thing.
 
The evil, vile, malicious voice came into Jace's mind again, "You are pathetic. Your woman has left you and you did nothing to stop her."
"I can't do anything and I don't know why," Jace said.
The voice in his head laughed then said, "Oh well, I want to go and have some fun and you are going to help me."

Jace tried to fight the evil presence that was in his body but it was too powerful and was now slowly locking him away. He could see what he was doing, feel what he was doing but there was no way that he could stop anything that he was doing.

He suddenly got to his feet and began walking away from the bench as one thought kept going through the presence's mind, women. It wanted to find one, no more than one and do unspeakable things to them. Jace screamed out, "Who are you?!"
"My name is Al but that is not important. What is important is what I am going to do."
Visions then flooded Jace and he screamed out when he saw what Al was planning to do. It was then that he saw the woman and heard his voice say, "Hey babe. What's your name." which was received with a smile as the woman got closer to his body.
 
Cordillia raced around the carnival trying to find the cop she had seen. It felt so weird and out of place...looking at all these people here that were going on as if nothing had happened. She felt as if she had stepped into an episode of the Twilight Zone and now couldnt escape.

Finally she spotted him. With a cry of relief, she ran up to him and grabbed his arm. She had planned everything she was going to tell him while she had been searching but what came out was hysterical babbling about mirrors and her boyfriend. She knew by the look on his face what he was thinking-that she had brought her own source of fun into the carnival and now was paying for taking some bad drugs.

He looked at her over his glasses and said in a stern voice.
"Calm down. I think we need to have a small chat..you and I. Where is this boyfriend of yours and exactly what HAVE you two been doing?"

God, I didnt have time for this.
"Honest Officer,"I said in the calmest voice I could manage,"I dont take drugs-Neither does Jace. Listen, there is something here in this place and it attacked Jace. I gotta get some help for him-NOW!"

The cop just nodded and crossed his arms.
"Um hum...so if you dont have anything you wont mind me searching your...person to make sure, will you?"

That did it..he wasnt going to believe me no matter what I did or said. I was just going to go back and get Jace and drive him to a hospital-the hell with everyone else.
"Fuck you!," I yelled at him. I was to mad and scared to care that I was talking to a cop.

I spun around to leave and I found his hand on my arm-preventing me from leaving.
 
Jace watched the entire scene before him as if it was happening to someone else but when he felt the entity, Al start kissing the woman he began to scream.

"Will you shut the hell up. I am trying to concentrate!" Al screamed at him and Jace then felt pain, more pain than he had felt in his entire life.

"That was just a warning little man; don't try and stop me again or I will be forced to do something that will cause you more pain that what you just suffered."

Jace instantly knew what Al was talking about and shouted out, "No, I won't let you!"

"You have no choice in the matter."
 
Cordillia pulled on her arm with all her strength.
"Get the fuck off of me," She yelled at the cop and she was suddenly free. After a split second of surprise she got to her feet and ran as fast as she could back to where she left Jace.

When she reached the spot he was not there. She looked frantically around, her heart beating almost out of her chest. Without a second thought, she began to search the carnival and suddenly she came to an abrupt halt. She could not believe her eyes. There was Jace kissing another girl-and deeply.

At first her body felt like it had been dipped in ice and she stood there frozen. Then she felt the heat of anger fill her and, without thinking, she rushed over to where Jace held the girl and ran at him with all her might, knocking him sideways onto the ground.

The other girl fell back too and looked at her with wide eyes. She must have seen the killer look because she took off at a pretty fast pace.

Cordillia turned to Jace where he lay on the ground and all she could see was red. With a snarl she fell on him-pounding his chest with her fists and then she took her long nails and starting scratching at his handsome face. She was like a woman possessed.

All the time she attacked him she cursed at him, calling him every name under the sun and some she made up in her anger. She was furious and past even caring about what she was doing.
 
Jace

Jace looked at Cordillia as she started to punch and scratch his face and tried to scream out that it wasn't him but he could do nothing, the entity that had taken over his body was too powerful.

Al

Al looked at the woman that was punching and scratching his face and recognized it instantly as that of the woman that he had seen earlier. Just then his anger and hostility flew out and he screamed out, "Get off me you bitch or I will kill you!"

When she didn't he slammed an open hand into her face, causing her to fly off him and onto the ground. He then got to his feet and looked at her with pure hatred.
"You stupid little bitch. Look at what you have done, I should kill you for that but I won't."

He reached down and grabbed Cordillia's wrist and pulled her up to her feet and before she could react kissed her hard and deep on the lips, sliding his tongue into her mouth.
 
Cordillia was stunned as she lay on the ground and her brain could not comprehend what Jace was saying to her. He had never spoken to her like that before and it scared her.

She was frightened even more when he picked her up and crushed his mouth to hers, snaking his tongue into it. She couldnt move for a minute and one thought ran through her mind...this is not Jace! She knew his kisses-hell loved his kisses-and this was nothing like anything she had experienced before.

She gagged as she could almost taste the evil that invaded her mouth and now she struggled to get free. Pushing on his chest and kicking her feet, she tried to free herself. But he was strong..stronger than usual and she knew in that moment for sure that this was not the man she loved.

Screaming against his mouth she bit hard down on his tongue and kicked him in the shin. Howling in pain, he released her and she dropped to the ground. Breathing hard she scrambled to her feet and broke into a run back to where she had left the policeman.

Let him arrest her for drugs or anything else he wanted to at least she would be away from whatever had attacked her.
 
OOC: Jace is in some type of hibernation for now, he is inside but unable to do anything.

IC: Al tasted the blood from his tongue and instantly loved it. It was like wine to him and he had to thank that woman for it. He walked over to a stall and looked at the man inside the booth who just nodded as he picked up the mallet, rested it onto his shoulder and walked away from it, after the woman.

He was looking everywhere for her and knew that she had no chance to hide as he knew this place like the back of his hand. He walked towards one of the rides where the person who controlled the ride pointed off to her right. Al nodded then walked steadily in the direction that the person had pointed to.

Al then came to a stall and heard her voice as she screamed out to someone. He smiled evilly as he turned the corner and saw her standing there, looking at a police officer and shouting at him. He took the hammer off his shoulder and held it loosely in one hand as he walked up to the two of them and said, "Well hello officer, nice day isn't it."
 
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