I've found that my story is kind of like punk music. People either love it to death, or hate it witha passion. There's no in between. I'm wondering why people would go and post and post hurtful things about a story they don't understand. You should read some of the comments that are left for me. Can you tell me if my story is realy that bad, and what I might need to improve on? It's a gay male story called the crush. I think people might not like it because it was written by a 19 year old girl (me). People get so uncomfortable when they think that there children can think like this. But the hard truth is that they can. There's no use denying it!
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