The Constructive Criticism Game

[Guest]

 

[April]

Skipped over. Hmm. Really. Imagine that!

 

[seXieleXie]

April

1)Very sweet
2)Great sense of humor
3)Likes porn

1)Is very far away
2)Is taken ( )
3)Took her pretty av down

 

[Rhys]

Lexie

1. goes to one of them high falutin' colleges
2. is smart
3. is funny and not afraid of my pinball machine

1. I always manage to miss her in Lit chat for some reason...
2. what happened to the av?
3. ummm...I'm stuck

 

[alexandraaah]

I once played this game with a boyfriend.

Then we broke up.

But, since I hate learning from my mistakes, if I can find someone I know enough about, I'm game.

 

[AmishPope]

1) Pope wrote a story for the site.
2) He says "Silly Goose" and "pooper", which makes me laugh out loud.
3) He doesn't smell too bad.

Bad things:
1) He's got a nasty anti-gay thing happening.
2) I don't think the Amish believe in the Pope, do they?
3) I hear his gramma is no good.

i dont mind you saying things about me. but you leave my gramma out of this. youre supposed to be talking about me. not about my family members

 

[Phoenyx]

i dont mind you saying things about me. but you leave my gramma out of this. youre supposed to be talking about me. not about my family members

It supposed to be grammer.


Its a play on words

 

[AmishPope]

It supposed to be grammer.


Its a play on words

i dont know. people on here like to attack my defenseless family members

 

[alexandraaah]

It supposed to be grammer.


Its a play on words

grammar.

 

[april-wine]

i dont know. people on here like to attack my defenseless family members

AmishPutz.........

the good.....

1) Since he's Amish, he'll marry his cousin keep the gene pool contained......If he's the pope, look out cardinals, cover your asses....
2) He comes up with good ones.....Do you eat beef, nope I'm a vaginaterian thank-you......
3) Hmmmmm I'm at a loss for 3 good things.......

the bad.......

I am sure don't have to be listed........Look up AmishPutz you'll find more than enough bad......

the ugly.....

People keep attacking his poor defensless family members.....Don't make AmishPutz cry now........

 

[AmishPope]

AmishPutz.........

the good.....

1) Since he's Amish, he'll marry his cousin keep the gene pool contained......If he's the pope, look out cardinals, cover your asses....
2) He comes up with good ones.....Do you eat beef, nope I'm a vaginaterian thank-you......
3) Hmmmmm I'm at a loss for 3 good things.......

the bad.......

I am sure don't have to be listed........Look up AmishPutz you'll find more than enough bad......

the ugly.....

People keep attacking his poor defensless family members.....Don't make AmishPutz cry now........

april wine keep on whining. like everyone else you dont debate the facts that ive brought up several times. i hope you feel comfortable talking about other people and attacking their family members from the privacy of your own home

God Bless


ps your name calling is very mature

 

[april-wine]

april wine keep on whining. like everyone else you dont debate the facts that ive brought up several times. i hope you feel comfortable talking about other people and attacking their family members from the privacy of your own home

God Bless


ps your name calling is very mature

That's rich coming from you.........

 

[*bratcat*]

 

[april-wine]

Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Bratty

 

[april-wine]

april wine keep on whining.

Interesting comment..........I have only heard this once before, and that person has a writing style much like yours..............

 

[Rhys]

Re: Lexie

1. goes to one of them high falutin' colleges
2. is smart
3. is funny and not afraid of my pinball machine

1. I always manage to miss her in Lit chat for some reason...
2. what happened to the av?
3. ummm...I'm stuck

see what happens...you play the game and some asshole comes along and hijacks the thread


typical

 

[AusTess]

Re: Re: Lexie

see what happens...you play the game and some asshole comes along and hijacks the thread


typical

I didn't do it.
Ha.


Ya know i reckon some of the best threads have come from hijacking.


But what would i know.

 

[Rhys]

Re: Re: Re: Lexie

I didn't do it.
Ha.


Ya know i reckon some of the best threads have come from hijacking.


But what would i know.

arrrrrr matey! Avast ye! We wouldn't be knowin' a thing about that now, would we...

(ajusts pirate hat and eyepatch, wanders off...)

 

[AusTess]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Lexie

arrrrrr matey! Avast ye! We wouldn't be knowin' a thing about that now, would we...

(ajusts pirate hat and eyepatch, wanders off...)

Okay.
So i've been known to hijack a thread or 2.


This one however,i had NOTHIN to do with.
Nada.
Jack shit
Bugger all.

 

[Rhys]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Lexie

Okay.
So i've been known to hijack a thread or 2.


This one however,i had NOTHIN to do with.
Nada.
Jack shit
Bugger all.

I didn't either...I usually confine myself to ...threads by Rubyfruit for example...

 

[Rambling Rose]

Recapturing thread from hijackers

Rhys

1) gifted wordsmith who uses lush imagery to enrich his storytelling

2) clever tease

3) manages to remain coherent through an entire bottle of tequila


a) all that talented writing still comes at a snails pace. How can I stroke myself off two paragraphs at a time?

b) moody

c) has never shared his tequila with me!

 

[kotori]

Rambling Rose

plus:
1- Witty, clever & sharp
2- Good humored
3- Not much accent, really

minus:
1- Too many names
2- Knows more movies than I do
3- Hardly ever calls

 

[Yoni]

well ...heres goes ..

Kotori

as a professional lurker at bb this is my "critique"


positives:

dry sense of humour
level headed
chivalrous

the negs:

never replies to my posts
cynical
needs to move to a better land..

 

[kotori]

Re: well ...heres goes ..

. . . never replies to my posts
cynical
needs to move to a better land . . .

I promise to work on the first and third items--call me a cynic, but I don't think of the second as a negative.