ThinkerLover
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I am looking to complete my sister/sister piece Sisters' Indulgent Secret with a final chapter. The first chapter did well in ratings, I feel, but thesecond chapter fell kinda flat on ratings. Honestly, the eros in chapter two is secondary to the development of the characters and that may be why the casual reader doesn't like the sequel as much as the whack-mag inaugural chapter.
I'd like to make the final chapter close out on a bang and I have so many ideas on how to do it, I am searching for inspiration on what occurs naturally to you.
Chapters one and two
http://www.literotica.com/s/sisters-indulgent-secret
http://www.literotica.com/s/sisters-indulgent-secret-ch-02
I think that Karen needs to find love and the protagonist wants to help her. This would also be interesting because the revelation to George is that Jessie knows that he has been spying on them. Now that Jessie and George are together, can they work towards helping Karen to be happy and not regret that she gave him up?
I'd like to make the final chapter close out on a bang and I have so many ideas on how to do it, I am searching for inspiration on what occurs naturally to you.
Chapters one and two
http://www.literotica.com/s/sisters-indulgent-secret
http://www.literotica.com/s/sisters-indulgent-secret-ch-02
I think that Karen needs to find love and the protagonist wants to help her. This would also be interesting because the revelation to George is that Jessie knows that he has been spying on them. Now that Jessie and George are together, can they work towards helping Karen to be happy and not regret that she gave him up?
