The color of freedom

[Deadwood]

I am not sure if this is a good story idea or not, but in trying to create erotic stories that sound realistic, truly possible and yet still have all the sexual elements present, I thought of this idea. I present it here and will let you guys poke holes at it, or praise it up.

Basically it is a clothes fetish kind of story. It starts out with a college co-ed who is at her computer trying to get some major homework/ studying done for her finals. All of a sudden the screen goes to a bright red color and locks up. Instantly she knows who is to blame. Its a game her boyfriend created who is studying computer science. The rules are simple. She is to meet the man for a date wearing clothing which is the same color as what is on her screen...in this case red.

She calls her boyfriend on his cell phone and pleads her case, noting her finals are near and she needs to study. Of course to no avail. So she sets out to find sassy red clothing and go on a date with her boyfriend. Of course they have sex later that night with the story being heavy on clothing descriptions and sex. The story ends however full circle with her at her computer, studying again, only to have the computer go to all white. It ends there, a semi-cliff hanger since the second interruption has now got her dander up. Still this is the intriguing thing...

Because her boyfriend has locked her computer up...a computer that has all her notes, personal information and all that, he cannot just study on another computer. She needs her computer so this story would kind of be an electronic form of domination. Despite the most inconvenient of times, in order for her life to continue, she must cater to her boyfriend wishes.

So what do you think? Is this idea worth writing or is it just a bad twist on an already over-done erotic story theme?

 

[sunandshadow]

If somebody did that to my computer I would back all my stuff up to CD as soon as it was unlocked and take it to another computer. Then I'd kick his ass for touching my computer.

 

[Monazwx]

An interesting premise. But after the first time, I would implement a password or something of some sort to prevent that kind of thing from happening again, (and avoiding the loop).

 

[emap]

I think I would start by kicking his ass, moving everything to a new computer and kicking his ass again.

However, that is a most interesting idea and would make for a rather interesting series. Especially if there was shopping involved.

Granted kinda boring to guys, but really something like this would have to be done to keep it interesting. Also would give a good reason for the clothing descriptions.

 

[Deadwood]

I guess its one of those things...if you have to ask, then you know the story idea is not any good. Thanks for letting me know.

 

[emap]

Nobody ever said it was a bad idea. It's a niche idea to be sure, though has merit and I am sure would make for a good series, you just hit some nerves with the computer angle. It being how we reference Literotica and in my case how I write up my stories.

However, something like that I think would be quite interesting, and that you should do it. With the computer the avenue of the orders or some other way.