The CLub

MasterJS

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Tonight was the first night in a while that i have finally been able to do something with my friends. It's a hot saturday night, and the cold air of the club feels wonderful on your skin. I walk in and check out the club. It seems like a normal club, having lights, pumping music, men and women dancing all sweaty on the dance floor, drinks all around, the aroma of alchohol in the air. I go to the bar and order a beer. As it arrives, my interest goes to a beautiful brunette sitting by the bar. I grab my beer and walk towards her, sitting down in the stool next to her. Leaning in carefully, i whisper, "Whats your name, beautiful?" I stay close to her face, awaiting her movement and response. My hear beats rapidly as she pauses and eases up as she advances towards my ear. "Maria Andiare", she whispers. I move my hand to her outer thigh and begin rubbing it, moving my face to her ear and nibbling on her earlobe. As i do this, i move my body closer to her, bring my hand to her inner thigh. My hand moving higher, my mouth moves to her neck. Kissing lightly and touching lightly. As I move closer to her body, she....

(Anyone wish to join in...looking for a woman to play the part of Maria Andiare...Any takers???)
 
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Thanks for the reminder of the rule! and thanks for the good luck, u inspired me to change the story, well i hope ud continue my story with me but oh well, ur choice, and anyone else who wants to continue with me, talk to me
 
Observation ...

In your edit you've written more for the waitress than for your character.

If you write what your character does, then it leaves the story open for another writer to post.
Making decisions, moves and giving words to someone else's character kinda takes away the point of them writing with you ...

This isn't my type of story, I'm afraid ... but I hope it goes well ...

DM
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Anyone interested in playing a role, talk to me about the addition of a role or for a woman who would like to play the role of Maria, talk to me
 
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