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Here is my story
I hope this meets the present tense criteria, it is different...
Dear Diary
By Dingus Guy
Dec. 21, 2003
Dear Diary,
My day started off pretty average, I went to work, got off of work, ate, then I hit the Mall and all hell broke loose. Everyone and their Grandma are out doing last minute gift shopping. I got lucky and got a parking spot only ½ mile from the mall entrance. I never thought I would get sick of Christmas songs, but when you are stuck in line with smelly people, and having to listen to the Rolling Stones sing their version of “Here comes Santa Clause”, you want to end it all. I finally tracked down some Star Wars Collectible for Johnny. It’s a stormtropper in silvery pewter with a red lacquer stand. I would never want it, but I know it will make Johnny’s day. I got Mom shoes and a gift certificate to Blairwood’s Hair Salon. I got Dad a new putter, he’s been hinting at with a little help from Mom. It is way expensive. I am so relieved now that I am done, but it is snowing again outside. I hate driving in this stuff!!! I mentioned that before, didn’t I? He he…Anyway, I just made myself some hot cocoa and all is suddenly right with the world. I feel pretty tired right now, so it won’t take me long before I go off to dreamland.
Dec 22, 2003
Dear Diary,
I didn’t mention this yesterday, but I heard a noise outside my window last night as I was getting undressed. My blinds were closed so I wasn’t worried at the time. I looked outside with the lights off and saw nothing, so I didn’t think it was a problem. I just opened up the shades and there are footprints in the snow leading away from my apartment. I feel totally freaked right now. I will continue this later, but I have to get to work.
Christmas party tomorrow, and the boss told us that we will not be having Chinese food as first thought, but bringing in some fancy-schmancy caterer from Soho. Soho has some good restaurants, so it should be interesting. The mystery grab bag will be a blast too, can’t wait to see Jillian’s eyes when she opens my present. She told me she was worried that someone from accounting she hates got her name, and I played into that and told her it would be Brooke and she would put her panties in a box. We laughed our ass off. Jillian hated Brooke, and everyone thought Brooke was a dyke and was interested in Jillian. Everyone busted on Jillian anytime Brooke walked by her and gave a second glance or spoke to her. Anyway, I am happy to be at home. No shopping today, I am just going to veg out in front of the TV. Wait, a thought just hit me, time to call Nick, be right back…Nick’s not home, waaaaaaa. But I did get through with Chrissy and she is the greatest friend. She got some guy for me to meet at the Nick’s party, supposedly cute, but we shall see. Damn, just heard a noise by the window again. This is getting freaky. I can see the footprints again along side the ones from last night. I might have to call the police if it happens again.
Dec 23, 2003
Dear Diary,
I had the crazy notion to follow the footsteps when I woke up, see if they led anywhere. They went in an arc right to next apartment complex. No way of telling which apartment it would be because the sidewalk was shoveled. At least I have a general idea where it is coming from. I had a nice day of work. Jillian loved my gift, and Artie got me some Deep Shoulders perfume, my fav. The food from Soho was so-so. Mostly fancy finger foods and dips. They had this splendid French cheese called St. Andre, which is similar to Camembert and the Swedish meatballs were very yummy. Other than that I would have tossed the rest. Larry was hilarious drunk, I think he should work that way, and Gloria was a dancing fool, I never knew she had it in her. Love that old tymer. On the way home from…
Oh My God, I can’t believe what I just did. I kept my clothes on later than I usually do just in case I heard a noise outside of my window again. I wanted to catch the person red-handed. So I just heard a noise, ran to the door, grabbed my coat and saw someone walking away towards the building next store. I ran across the snow to see where they went and they were on the lower floor facing the back of the complex. I decided, and I am not sure what possessed me to do it, but I went around to see if I could see through their window. The person’s curtains had a small gap in them and it showed a living room and a TV was on and a guy was just sitting down on a couch facing the TV. He removed his sweater, then t-shirt and was bare-chested. He looked incredible and he had a beautiful face. He was well shaven and had pouty lips. Why the hell was this gorgeous guy looking through my window? I’m in no league with him. Anyway, I saw that the TV had a naked woman playing with herself, and that was all I needed to see, so I was about to leave, when this stud removed his pants and he wasn’t wearing any underwear on underneath. Before I could get a good look at his penis, I turned away and left feeling guilty at looking. I am not sure why I even stared to begin with. Let me tell you this, my dear diary, I am going to have a little fun now thinking about this guy, so see ya.
Dec 24, 2003
Wow, it’s all ready past 3am Christmas Day, the last 24 hours were some of the best of my life. Not sure where to start. Do I just dive right in on the juicy stuff or tell about my whole day? I vote juicy stuff. Ok, that guy from last night, well he came by again tonight, 4 days in a row. I think he wants me to know he is there. No one is that stupid to make that much noise every damn night. I got home at a little past midnight from my family get together at my parents’ house. As I took my dress off I heard the noise from behind me. I thought it would be fun to pretend I didn’t hear it, so I took my clothes off and stretched towards the window as if I was yawning. I felt up my breasts and tweaked my nipples as if I really had an audience. I don’t know why, but it got me really excited and I sat down in a chair and started to play with myself. Imagining he was really looking at me, like I was looking at him yesterday. That was when I noticed through glazed eyes, that two of the blinds were bent slightly. It was hard to see anything because of the glare of the window from the light inside and the darkness outside, but I could still see his blinking eyes pressed against the window staring at me. His hands enveloped his face as he pressed it against the cold glass. I sat there frozen, but never did I once feel like covering myself. It just made my pussy tingle more. My heart was beating so fast I thought it would explode. I started to move my fingers inside me and I relished the immediate orgasm that warmed my whole body. I have never had such an easy orgasm since my very first. I lay there in a heap for a few seconds and look back at the window and disappointed to see that his eyes are gone. I am still horny so I imagine he is still staring at me and I play again. Somehow this just doesn’t do it for me, and I have an urge to go look at him. Well, next thing I know I am standing outside his apartment window, and I am now a full-fledged voyeur. He is stroking his cock, oblivious to my presence or is he? His cock is huge, at least 8 inches. My panties are wet and even in this cold, I feel warm all over. I put a hand on my clit and rubbed myself again. He suddenly stood up and began stroking his cock while standing, facing me the whole time. I had never really stared at a man masturbating before. Now with him standing before me, I was mesmerized by how his cock moved in his hand and how his balls were shrunken at the back of his staff. I watched how his hands moved along the slick surface. I saw the pre-cum at the tip and I could practically taste it. I don’t think I was ever so horny, even during sex. I wanted to taste him. I wanted his cock inside me so bad. He just kept stroking his cock, never looking up at the window at me. He just went on and on and I watched the whole time, playing with my pussy. Then I had an orgasm spread through me and I fell against the window for support. I couldn’t help it, but he never stopped and looked up. Instead, a jet of sperm shot out of his cock and went splat against the window. I scuffled off back to my apartment and here I am. I am still wet and in a need of a shower. I will right the normal part of my day tomorrow, or shall I say today, Christmas day. I hope he comes back tomorrow. Maybe I will leave the door open next time. Hehe…
BTW...Happy Holidays to all!!!
Black Tulip said:Well, I feel honored Dingus.
Sorry for the delay, but I am on European time.
Ok, here it is:
1000 words minimum
no dialogue
present tense only
use the words:
- footprints
- red lacquer
- camembert
- perfume
- Rolling Stones
Next week Thursday, 25th December.
I hope this meets the present tense criteria, it is different...
Dear Diary
By Dingus Guy
Dec. 21, 2003
Dear Diary,
My day started off pretty average, I went to work, got off of work, ate, then I hit the Mall and all hell broke loose. Everyone and their Grandma are out doing last minute gift shopping. I got lucky and got a parking spot only ½ mile from the mall entrance. I never thought I would get sick of Christmas songs, but when you are stuck in line with smelly people, and having to listen to the Rolling Stones sing their version of “Here comes Santa Clause”, you want to end it all. I finally tracked down some Star Wars Collectible for Johnny. It’s a stormtropper in silvery pewter with a red lacquer stand. I would never want it, but I know it will make Johnny’s day. I got Mom shoes and a gift certificate to Blairwood’s Hair Salon. I got Dad a new putter, he’s been hinting at with a little help from Mom. It is way expensive. I am so relieved now that I am done, but it is snowing again outside. I hate driving in this stuff!!! I mentioned that before, didn’t I? He he…Anyway, I just made myself some hot cocoa and all is suddenly right with the world. I feel pretty tired right now, so it won’t take me long before I go off to dreamland.
Dec 22, 2003
Dear Diary,
I didn’t mention this yesterday, but I heard a noise outside my window last night as I was getting undressed. My blinds were closed so I wasn’t worried at the time. I looked outside with the lights off and saw nothing, so I didn’t think it was a problem. I just opened up the shades and there are footprints in the snow leading away from my apartment. I feel totally freaked right now. I will continue this later, but I have to get to work.
Christmas party tomorrow, and the boss told us that we will not be having Chinese food as first thought, but bringing in some fancy-schmancy caterer from Soho. Soho has some good restaurants, so it should be interesting. The mystery grab bag will be a blast too, can’t wait to see Jillian’s eyes when she opens my present. She told me she was worried that someone from accounting she hates got her name, and I played into that and told her it would be Brooke and she would put her panties in a box. We laughed our ass off. Jillian hated Brooke, and everyone thought Brooke was a dyke and was interested in Jillian. Everyone busted on Jillian anytime Brooke walked by her and gave a second glance or spoke to her. Anyway, I am happy to be at home. No shopping today, I am just going to veg out in front of the TV. Wait, a thought just hit me, time to call Nick, be right back…Nick’s not home, waaaaaaa. But I did get through with Chrissy and she is the greatest friend. She got some guy for me to meet at the Nick’s party, supposedly cute, but we shall see. Damn, just heard a noise by the window again. This is getting freaky. I can see the footprints again along side the ones from last night. I might have to call the police if it happens again.
Dec 23, 2003
Dear Diary,
I had the crazy notion to follow the footsteps when I woke up, see if they led anywhere. They went in an arc right to next apartment complex. No way of telling which apartment it would be because the sidewalk was shoveled. At least I have a general idea where it is coming from. I had a nice day of work. Jillian loved my gift, and Artie got me some Deep Shoulders perfume, my fav. The food from Soho was so-so. Mostly fancy finger foods and dips. They had this splendid French cheese called St. Andre, which is similar to Camembert and the Swedish meatballs were very yummy. Other than that I would have tossed the rest. Larry was hilarious drunk, I think he should work that way, and Gloria was a dancing fool, I never knew she had it in her. Love that old tymer. On the way home from…
Oh My God, I can’t believe what I just did. I kept my clothes on later than I usually do just in case I heard a noise outside of my window again. I wanted to catch the person red-handed. So I just heard a noise, ran to the door, grabbed my coat and saw someone walking away towards the building next store. I ran across the snow to see where they went and they were on the lower floor facing the back of the complex. I decided, and I am not sure what possessed me to do it, but I went around to see if I could see through their window. The person’s curtains had a small gap in them and it showed a living room and a TV was on and a guy was just sitting down on a couch facing the TV. He removed his sweater, then t-shirt and was bare-chested. He looked incredible and he had a beautiful face. He was well shaven and had pouty lips. Why the hell was this gorgeous guy looking through my window? I’m in no league with him. Anyway, I saw that the TV had a naked woman playing with herself, and that was all I needed to see, so I was about to leave, when this stud removed his pants and he wasn’t wearing any underwear on underneath. Before I could get a good look at his penis, I turned away and left feeling guilty at looking. I am not sure why I even stared to begin with. Let me tell you this, my dear diary, I am going to have a little fun now thinking about this guy, so see ya.
Dec 24, 2003
Wow, it’s all ready past 3am Christmas Day, the last 24 hours were some of the best of my life. Not sure where to start. Do I just dive right in on the juicy stuff or tell about my whole day? I vote juicy stuff. Ok, that guy from last night, well he came by again tonight, 4 days in a row. I think he wants me to know he is there. No one is that stupid to make that much noise every damn night. I got home at a little past midnight from my family get together at my parents’ house. As I took my dress off I heard the noise from behind me. I thought it would be fun to pretend I didn’t hear it, so I took my clothes off and stretched towards the window as if I was yawning. I felt up my breasts and tweaked my nipples as if I really had an audience. I don’t know why, but it got me really excited and I sat down in a chair and started to play with myself. Imagining he was really looking at me, like I was looking at him yesterday. That was when I noticed through glazed eyes, that two of the blinds were bent slightly. It was hard to see anything because of the glare of the window from the light inside and the darkness outside, but I could still see his blinking eyes pressed against the window staring at me. His hands enveloped his face as he pressed it against the cold glass. I sat there frozen, but never did I once feel like covering myself. It just made my pussy tingle more. My heart was beating so fast I thought it would explode. I started to move my fingers inside me and I relished the immediate orgasm that warmed my whole body. I have never had such an easy orgasm since my very first. I lay there in a heap for a few seconds and look back at the window and disappointed to see that his eyes are gone. I am still horny so I imagine he is still staring at me and I play again. Somehow this just doesn’t do it for me, and I have an urge to go look at him. Well, next thing I know I am standing outside his apartment window, and I am now a full-fledged voyeur. He is stroking his cock, oblivious to my presence or is he? His cock is huge, at least 8 inches. My panties are wet and even in this cold, I feel warm all over. I put a hand on my clit and rubbed myself again. He suddenly stood up and began stroking his cock while standing, facing me the whole time. I had never really stared at a man masturbating before. Now with him standing before me, I was mesmerized by how his cock moved in his hand and how his balls were shrunken at the back of his staff. I watched how his hands moved along the slick surface. I saw the pre-cum at the tip and I could practically taste it. I don’t think I was ever so horny, even during sex. I wanted to taste him. I wanted his cock inside me so bad. He just kept stroking his cock, never looking up at the window at me. He just went on and on and I watched the whole time, playing with my pussy. Then I had an orgasm spread through me and I fell against the window for support. I couldn’t help it, but he never stopped and looked up. Instead, a jet of sperm shot out of his cock and went splat against the window. I scuffled off back to my apartment and here I am. I am still wet and in a need of a shower. I will right the normal part of my day tomorrow, or shall I say today, Christmas day. I hope he comes back tomorrow. Maybe I will leave the door open next time. Hehe…
BTW...Happy Holidays to all!!!
Dingus Guy
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Next Challenge Due 1-2-04
The next person who wants to post a challenge...tulip2lipservice, you up for it? Since you posted the first story. Must be more than 1,000 words, beyond that, it's up to you.
Happy Holidays!
The next person who wants to post a challenge...tulip2lipservice, you up for it? Since you posted the first story. Must be more than 1,000 words, beyond that, it's up to you.
Happy Holidays!
Black Tulip
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Dingus,
Why would it not qualify? Only thing I missed was the red lacquer.
Nice story. Too short as far as I'm concerned. I was just getting interested in the rest of it.
Why would it not qualify? Only thing I missed was the red lacquer.
Nice story. Too short as far as I'm concerned. I was just getting interested in the rest of it.
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Star Wars figurine
First day, it was the pewter figurine with red laquer stand.
Thanks for the compliment. I had to wrap it in time for today or else I might have gone further.
First day, it was the pewter figurine with red laquer stand.
Thanks for the compliment. I had to wrap it in time for today or else I might have gone further.
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Damn, it was.
Shouldn't have taken that last coffee with brandy after all.
Shouldn't have taken that last coffee with brandy after all.
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Caffeine and Alcohol always a winning combo
I am still waiting on my first challenge story to be accepeted. They rejected it last week because I put imaginery links in the story. I told them that the links were all made up, but they never responded to me, so I had to just repost it. I will post it here and the other original post we started as soon as it is accepted. I really think it is a good short story, and should do well. I wasn't so proud of this Dear Diary one, but I am happy you at least enjoyed it.
I can't wait for the next challenge.
I am still waiting on my first challenge story to be accepeted. They rejected it last week because I put imaginery links in the story. I told them that the links were all made up, but they never responded to me, so I had to just repost it. I will post it here and the other original post we started as soon as it is accepted. I really think it is a good short story, and should do well. I wasn't so proud of this Dear Diary one, but I am happy you at least enjoyed it.
I can't wait for the next challenge.
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Ocean
Sensual - sexual - strong - slippery and sooo soulful!
what an erotic picture you paint with your words!
I love it!
Kisses to you - and more to quence that need that erupts in you from time to time.
suckle and kisses - and more
John
Sensual - sexual - strong - slippery and sooo soulful!
what an erotic picture you paint with your words!
I love it!
Kisses to you - and more to quence that need that erupts in you from time to time.
suckle and kisses - and more
John
Originally posted by Black Tulip
Well, what do you know. I suddenly got a bout of inspiration, due to a picture on another thread.
Thank you 39_ Keeper!
1800 words
Enjoy the reading and let me know your opinion.
He chuckles. Nobody can resist the call of an ocean spirit forever. I know I can't. His hands are caressing my body and take my desire to new, unimaginable heights. His fingers, his lips, his tongue are all making me want one thing: to be filled by his cock. I live the image and feel the most wanted woman on earth. I cry out again and beg him to take me. I see the grin on his face turn into something not completely human but I do not care. All I want is his beautiful cock inside me, all I want is to cum, and to cum and to cum again.
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Black Tulip
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John,
It's always nice to hear praises.
But keep your voice down a bit young man.
We don't want you to get carried away too much.
It's always nice to hear praises.
But keep your voice down a bit young man.
We don't want you to get carried away too much.
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We have no challenges this week
Well maybe we can stir things up after the holidays are officially over.
Well maybe we can stir things up after the holidays are officially over.
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I wouldn't want to spoil the fun.
Fine by me to wait.
Maybe we will have more people as well. Lou and CrimsonMaiden perhaps?
And what happened to the other Tulip and Bardslady?
Fine by me to wait.
Maybe we will have more people as well. Lou and CrimsonMaiden perhaps?
And what happened to the other Tulip and Bardslady?
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Wills said:
No, I didn't so I ran over to have a look.
Grinning from ear to ear now, because the comments have multiplied like rabbits. Great.
And thanks for the encouragement.
Yes, there is another - tulip2lipservice: posted after the first challenge. Very nice too.
Have a look at the whole picture in my profile, ssst.
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Yeah, I had the makings of a story all worked out for this challenge, but due to the holidays, I never got to finish it. I should be able to do the next one if we wait until after New years.
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Well...
You will just have to do double the portion next time.
You will just have to do double the portion next time.
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Okay now...
Happy New Year and all! We need to jump start this club with a new challenge. Who would like to step up and present a new challenge for 2004? Someone who has not challenged yet and someone who is interested taking part in the writing as well. Don't be shy now!
Happy New Year and all! We need to jump start this club with a new challenge. Who would like to step up and present a new challenge for 2004? Someone who has not challenged yet and someone who is interested taking part in the writing as well. Don't be shy now!
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*cough* *ehrm* er...hello...my name is Bob...er... *cough* ...er... *cough* *hrugh* ...er...my name...name is Bob...and...er... *gulp* ...I'm shy.
*clap clap clap* Welcome to Reticent Neurotics Anonymous Bob!
OK - I'm not Bob. But I might have a challenge.
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Story
1000 words
an unexpected twist
third person p.o.v.
a mythological beast (not a vampire or anything like that, so it won't be too easy)
the following words:
coffin
steering wheel
bitter chocolate
ash
glass
dreamtime
By January the 8th (one week)
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*clap clap clap* Welcome to Reticent Neurotics Anonymous Bob!
OK - I'm not Bob. But I might have a challenge.
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Story
1000 words
an unexpected twist
third person p.o.v.
a mythological beast (not a vampire or anything like that, so it won't be too easy)
the following words:
coffin
steering wheel
bitter chocolate
ash
glass
dreamtime
By January the 8th (one week)
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Welcome to the group SummerMorning
That seems to be a bit of a doosy of a challenge, but will shake the holiday cobwebs off and have it done by next Thursday. Thanks for the challenge. One question, mythological creature like a unicorn, goblin and/or BigFoot(although I saw him dining with Elvis at a McDonalds last month)?
That seems to be a bit of a doosy of a challenge, but will shake the holiday cobwebs off and have it done by next Thursday. Thanks for the challenge. One question, mythological creature like a unicorn, goblin and/or BigFoot(although I saw him dining with Elvis at a McDonalds last month)?
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Hi SummerMorning,
Welcome and thanks for posting a challenge.
Dingus,
What does "doosy" means? Easy? Not to my bubbly filled brain.
Oh, yes, Happy New Year.
Welcome and thanks for posting a challenge.
Dingus,
What does "doosy" means? Easy? Not to my bubbly filled brain.
Oh, yes, Happy New Year.
SummerMorning
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Ah... mythology is a wide ranging subject - be creative! Although I was thinking of taking a look at some Babylonian and Egyptian myths, I think goblins and bigfoot are part of our modern mythology.
Hehe...if you took political mythology, you could probably argue that Mao or GWB are also mythical figures
Hehe...if you took political mythology, you could probably argue that Mao or GWB are also mythical figures
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Hi Black Tulip! Thank you for the welcome, and you're welcome to the challenge .
Is it doosy or doozie? I always thought things were doozier than doosy, tho' it might have been just me making people dozy
.Is it doosy or doozie? I always thought things were doozier than doosy, tho' it might have been just me making people dozy
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SummerMorning said:
Hehe...if you took political mythology, you could probably argue that Mao or GWB are also mythical figures
Are you aiming at horror then?
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