Miltone
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OCC: This is a closed thread written by the sensuous Captivate and yours truly. Of course you are all cordially invited to read along as we present for your entertainment the story of a charming shop owner and the mysterious gentleman who has come to rent the upstairs office from her. There is no telling what his law practice is truly all about. And please feel free to PM us with any comments regarding our little story. Now, let us begin.
Denton P. Willis is a lawyer. Perhaps late 40s, tall and slender with light blue eyes and a head full of bushy blond hair that always seems to be falling into his eyes. He has a perpetual lazy smile and an ambiance that perhaps could be termed as having a nouveau southern gentleman quality, yet he speaks in the dialect of a Midwesterner. His gestures are direct with little wasted motion so that when he does something, a scratch of his nose, a bow, or extending a compliment, it carries weight and has true meaning.
IC: The mid-morning sunshine glanced sharply off the window as I passed by the antique shop. At least it looked like an antique shop with scads of odds and ends arranged carefully in the large display window. There was a child’s sleigh in excellent condition complete with a large China doll dressed in vintage 1920’s children’s clothes atop it. To the side was a lovely old dresser that perhaps had seen better days, but which had been lovingly restored and was decorated with a painstaking floral design, obviously hand-painted by an artiste. On top were several choice ceramic and glass pieces including an oil lamp, certainly old and perhaps though not greatly valuable, object that could add a special decorative touch to a mantle or a curio cabinet display. There were other choice pieces placed carefully around which gave the impression that the decorator had too much time on their hands. But all of that didn’t concern me as I stood in the swelter of a hot early summer day, for what caught my attention was the plain sign with orange letters that announced and “Office For Rent”.
My light linen jacket pulled back on my shoulders, I looked up and down the quaint little main street in a town too self-consciously Victorian, too caught up in trying to establish an identity that would set it off from the surrounding sprawling suburbs to notice my setting up my practice. To my left was the town center marked off by an olde fashioned clock. To my right was the cinema converted to a live playhouse. Over my shoulder was the city park with a band shell. I pictured barbershop quartets harmonizing on lazy Friday evenings populated by yuppie and DINK couples strolling along with hand carved ice cream cones. I looked up at the hand painted sign overhead announcing “The Carousel Shoppe” in an old-fashioned script complete with a nouveau Victorian flourish. Not only did the proprietor have too much time on their hands, but also too much money to pay for such a simple but lovely sign. Perfect, I thought to myself. Just perfect.
Noting the door that lead to the upstairs office, the gold leaf lettering identifying an accounting firm still in place, I pressed through the door to the shop and entered, nearly laughing at the tinkle of an antique door ringer. The owner hadn’t missed a beat on creating this atmosphere. There was the decided scent of vanilla in the air and the sound of someone humming a show tune in the backroom. As the door closed behind me, the humming stopped and a woman came through the high arched doorway.
“Is there something I can help you with?” she asked in a low, husky sensual voice.
“Pardon me, but I saw the sign out front about the office to rent,” I remarked slowly, letting the syllables flow out gently. “Are you the one I should talk to in regards?”
She smiled warmly, her round cheeks creased with a pair of cute dimples. “Why, yes that would be me,” she said, her voice becoming animated and excited. Perhaps the office had been for rent for a long time and she would be only too happy to rent it at a more than reasonable rate. I ran my hand back over my forehead, combing my hair back so she could get a good look at me. Her face brightened and she ran her hand over her head self-consciously, as if to make sure every strand of her silky dark hair was in place.
“If possible, I’d like to have a look at it,” I said, again slowly. As my smile increased, I noticed so did hers with just a bit of blush to boot, and her eyes fell down and away coyly. “I’m looking for a place to set up my law practice. And this seems to be a wonderful town in which to do so.”
Denton P. Willis is a lawyer. Perhaps late 40s, tall and slender with light blue eyes and a head full of bushy blond hair that always seems to be falling into his eyes. He has a perpetual lazy smile and an ambiance that perhaps could be termed as having a nouveau southern gentleman quality, yet he speaks in the dialect of a Midwesterner. His gestures are direct with little wasted motion so that when he does something, a scratch of his nose, a bow, or extending a compliment, it carries weight and has true meaning.
IC: The mid-morning sunshine glanced sharply off the window as I passed by the antique shop. At least it looked like an antique shop with scads of odds and ends arranged carefully in the large display window. There was a child’s sleigh in excellent condition complete with a large China doll dressed in vintage 1920’s children’s clothes atop it. To the side was a lovely old dresser that perhaps had seen better days, but which had been lovingly restored and was decorated with a painstaking floral design, obviously hand-painted by an artiste. On top were several choice ceramic and glass pieces including an oil lamp, certainly old and perhaps though not greatly valuable, object that could add a special decorative touch to a mantle or a curio cabinet display. There were other choice pieces placed carefully around which gave the impression that the decorator had too much time on their hands. But all of that didn’t concern me as I stood in the swelter of a hot early summer day, for what caught my attention was the plain sign with orange letters that announced and “Office For Rent”.
My light linen jacket pulled back on my shoulders, I looked up and down the quaint little main street in a town too self-consciously Victorian, too caught up in trying to establish an identity that would set it off from the surrounding sprawling suburbs to notice my setting up my practice. To my left was the town center marked off by an olde fashioned clock. To my right was the cinema converted to a live playhouse. Over my shoulder was the city park with a band shell. I pictured barbershop quartets harmonizing on lazy Friday evenings populated by yuppie and DINK couples strolling along with hand carved ice cream cones. I looked up at the hand painted sign overhead announcing “The Carousel Shoppe” in an old-fashioned script complete with a nouveau Victorian flourish. Not only did the proprietor have too much time on their hands, but also too much money to pay for such a simple but lovely sign. Perfect, I thought to myself. Just perfect.
Noting the door that lead to the upstairs office, the gold leaf lettering identifying an accounting firm still in place, I pressed through the door to the shop and entered, nearly laughing at the tinkle of an antique door ringer. The owner hadn’t missed a beat on creating this atmosphere. There was the decided scent of vanilla in the air and the sound of someone humming a show tune in the backroom. As the door closed behind me, the humming stopped and a woman came through the high arched doorway.
“Is there something I can help you with?” she asked in a low, husky sensual voice.
“Pardon me, but I saw the sign out front about the office to rent,” I remarked slowly, letting the syllables flow out gently. “Are you the one I should talk to in regards?”
She smiled warmly, her round cheeks creased with a pair of cute dimples. “Why, yes that would be me,” she said, her voice becoming animated and excited. Perhaps the office had been for rent for a long time and she would be only too happy to rent it at a more than reasonable rate. I ran my hand back over my forehead, combing my hair back so she could get a good look at me. Her face brightened and she ran her hand over her head self-consciously, as if to make sure every strand of her silky dark hair was in place.
“If possible, I’d like to have a look at it,” I said, again slowly. As my smile increased, I noticed so did hers with just a bit of blush to boot, and her eyes fell down and away coyly. “I’m looking for a place to set up my law practice. And this seems to be a wonderful town in which to do so.”
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