The Call Girl by Kenneth Auslandur

[Hullo_nurse]

Fabulous story. Only a couple misuses of words, and one unfinished sentance that was missing a verb.

I liked how realistic it was and was impressed to see the use of condoms - safe sex, the way to stay alive!! I would love to see a sequel to this - I can imagine the main guy falling in love with Terese & vice-versa.....

Read it here: http://www.literotica.com/storyxs/stories/tcg_g_1061_f0.shtml

 

[X-RAY]

many of my yuppie friends would relate to this one. i found it to be a good attention getter lacked a litle in action.

 

[AnonOne]

Why thank you!

That was very kind of you. Perhaps something will come to me while on the beach. Would it be too hackneyed to do the old "would you put some sunscreen on my back," story? The reason I ask is there is this really cute brunette that has been at the beach here the last few days and well. . .

 

[Whispersecret]

YES! Just Say No To the Sunscreen Plot Device! <laughs> You know that silly "It was a dark, stormy night..." cliche beginning? "I saw her reclining on the chaise lounge struggling to rub sunscreen on her back..." is starting to be that same thing in erotic fiction. Stretch that imagination! <winks>

 

[~justin]

not only is The Call Girl excellent, but so is The Cabin. Kenneth, you've got the skills.

 

[AnonOne]

Well,

I just got back from Walker's Cay in the Bahamas. I want to thank all of you for your kind comments. I am sorry that I didn't write much while at the beach, I was busy putting suntan oil on that wonderful brunette. We did eventually fuck (and given the tempest of our union that is the best word for what we did), but since Whisper has deemed the plot hackneyed, I won't write about it. Ahh, the memories are intense though. I do have some cool shark dive pictures if anyone would like them, so email me if you want a copy. I did just manage to do the second chapter of PINK, look for it to be posted soon.

--AUS

 

[ANiceGuy]

Wow it pays to read some slightly older posts.

I was just browsing when I came upon this post and read The Call Girl. WoW I could relate to this story. I did somthing close with two dancers once! Umm Maybe I should look Carol and Misty up. hehehe Check it out it will be worth your time!! (and a lot cheaper thatn the fee the writer paid!!!)