The Cabin Part 2

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

I have just had my newest story submitted in this awesome site. The Cabin Part Two, is finally here. Dezerae Remembers incredible moments with Ante in the cabin and relives them through her dreams. When reality plays into the story, the tension mounts for both of them. A wonderful dream, suddenly becomes so much more... The Cabin Part One is a great read also, for those who have not yet read it. I would love to hear some feedback from any readers or authors out there. Romance can be very exciting, as you may well find out. Thanks Kat

 

[Mrhappy]

Yessss....verrryyy exxciiitiinggggg! Ahhh, oohhhh shhiiittt....yesss! gawd that was good!
Whew! 'scuse me, but I've become a fan of Katarina's oral sex scenarios.
Great stories...verryy descriptive!

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[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Thanks so much MrHappy...I do appreaciate your overwhelming response. I promise I will keep trying to make all my readers happy, just like you. Have a great day, and keep on

Kat

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[PHANTOM5875]

katerina, I recently read your latest story,"The Cabin-Part II" and thought it was terrific! I was not much of a romance fantasy addict until I just happened to read one of your postings a while back asking for some feedback. Well, I checked out your earlier story and was hooked! It really surprised me. The way you paint your imagery is very interesting and arousing. I liked your last story the best of all. I would recommend it to all of the Literotica readers as a nice change of pace and it is very arousing and yet romantic at the same time. Keep 'em coming (pun definitely intended!) You are wonderful!

PHANTOM

 

[Guest]

Katerina,

I said it before, but it bears repeating, youor stories are wonderful. Thank you for reminding all Literotica readers how sexy romance is.

Ludo

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Thanks to all of you, for your wonderful feedback. I am so glad you enjoyed both stories. I am currently working on another one, and I do hope it meets your satisfaction. Hopefully All In A Summers Day, will be done soon. It is taking longer then I expected, but then hard work, never comes easy. In the meantime, happy reading.

Kat

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

A very personal thanks to Ludo and Phantom

Hugs to you both, Katerina

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[Havocman]

Well, Katerina, I promised you some feedback and here it is:

*Standing and Applauding* Author, Author

You've definitely hooked another fan. Like some of the others before me I hadn't really read too much in the Romance section, but I vow to keep an eye on that area as well from now on

What can I say that hasn't already been said? Your descriptive powers are keen, and the way you paint a scene makes it so easy to visualize everything, from the rug in front of the fireplace to the wrought iron bed with restraints waiting to be filled. Incidentally, I particularly enjoyed the atmosphere of light but playful bondage, something I hadn't really thought of in context with a romantic story

And as Mr. Happy so aptly hit the nail on the proverbial head, your descriptions of oral sex are a thing of beauty...great eye for detail

One of the most interesting things I found in both stories was the way you let the reader into the minds of the characters, sharing not only their actions with us, but also the emotions their actions produce...great voicing of emotion. And the way the flashback sequences in pt. 2 lead us eventually to present activities was masterfully done.

All in all, 2 very high quality pieces of work luv, keep up the good work....Now if you'll excuse me, I feel a pressing need to start on that other preview piece I received...

Keep it coming,
Havoc

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Thanks so much for your high praise Havoc. I am so glad you enjoyed both stories. How's that third one coming by the way?

It's great hearing from my readers and I appreaciate the time taken to respond to my postings. Feedback chases away any doubts I have about my writing abilities and I find myself wanting to try even harder. Writing a good story takes alot of hard work though, and I find it to be quite a challenge. In the end it is always worth the hard effort you put into them. The feeling of satisfaction you get from creating something of your own is incredible. I always strive to do better and keep my readers happy. Thanks again to all who posted a response. Hugs Katerina

 

[Wordmage]

Two of the best pieces of erotica I've ever read. Literate, well-developed characters, imagery, description and pacing were all pro level. You've put the literature in literotica.

Bravo!

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Hi Wordmage. Wow! Two of the best? Thanks for that hon, I appreaciate your praise once again. I do put my heart and soul into my writing, and give it my best. It's hard to think of myself on a pro level as you say, when I am really only a beginner. But, since my first story I have come alot farther I think. I Must keep my readers happy, so I promise any future stories will get even better. 4th one coming soon! Thanks again! Katerina