The Break Down: Open for one male or female

[xelysex]

IC:
Elyse watched the smoke pour out of the front end of the rental car she had been driving from Los Angeles to Olympia. She sighed, defeated. She had been standing in the middle of nowhere for the past ten minutes and nothing she had tried worked. Granted, all she had tried was cursing the car out at the top of her lungs and kicking the tires repeatedly, which was not a great idea as she was wearing flip flops. Now all she had was a headache, a sore foot, and no idea where she was.

She was 22 years old, had no sense of direction, and the only thing she knew about cars was how to drive one. Elyse pushed her dark hair out of her eyes and looked around, squinting against the sun. The closest building was a ways away and looked pretty much deserted. "Damn it. This is the part in the fucking movie where I go in and look around, then get my damn head chopped off." Elyse muttered to herself as she started towards the building.

OOC:
Well, there's the start- I've really got no definite plans as to where this will go. I will develop/describe Elyse more as the story moves along. I'm open for a guy or a girl to join in as the character who lives in the building Elyse is headed towards- PM me with a short character description, first, though, please! Thanks, much.

 

[rafey]

IC:
Elyse watched the smoke pour out of the front end of the rental car she had been driving from Los Angeles to Olympia. She sighed, defeated. She had been standing in the middle of nowhere for the past ten minutes and nothing she had tried worked. Granted, all she had tried was cursing the car out at the top of her lungs and kicking the tires repeatedly, which was not a great idea as she was wearing flip flops. Now all she had was a headache, a sore foot, and no idea where she was.

She was 22 years old, had no sense of direction, and the only thing she knew about cars was how to drive one. Elyse pushed her dark hair out of her eyes and looked around, squinting against the sun. The closest building was a ways away and looked pretty much deserted. "Damn it. This is the part in the fucking movie where I go in and look around, then get my damn head chopped off." Elyse muttered to herself as she started towards the building.

OOC:
Well, there's the start- I've really got no definite plans as to where this will go. I will develop/describe Elyse more as the story moves along. I'm open for a guy or a girl to join in as the character who lives in the building Elyse is headed towards- PM me with a short character description, first, though, please! Thanks, much.

Luke saw the car ahead of him pulled over off the road with a whiff of smoke coming from the bonnet. He was undecided whether to stop or not until he got closer. The girl looked harmless enough & the car was in an even worse state than his own. He looked in the rear view mirror, there wasn't another car to be seem on the road.
He stopped beside the car & looked at the girl, "Do you need any help?

 

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Elyse

"Do you need any help?"

Elyse laughed harshly. "Nope, none at all. I absolutely love being stuck in the middle of nowhere with smoke pouring out of the front of my car. I do it for fun." She closed her eyes, mentally kicking herself for being such a bitch. She turned and looked at the man who stood there, speechless.

"Sorry," she muttered. "I'm just...not in the greatest of moods right now. I'm not used to being helpless...which is pretty much what I am right now. And yes, I need help. I just don't know what kind. We're miles away from any sort of tow truck company, so I really don't know what to do with this hunk of junk." she motioned pathetically towards the still-smoking car and sighed. "I'm Elyse, by the way," she stuck out her hand toward the man who, now that she was calm enough to really look, was very attractive.

 

[rafey]

"I'm Elyse, by the way," she stuck out her hand toward the man who, now that she was calm enough to really look, was very attractive.[/QUOTE]

He took her hand & shook it firmly. "I'm Luke."
He pushed his sunglasses up over his forehead, taking away the hair from his eyes. He wasn't sure of what to make of her, rescueing damsals in distress wasn't really his thing. He'd been alone & bitter by himself for too long to be able to share another persons life.
"I'm afraid I can't help you much with the car, it looks like a right off but if you want you can have a lift with me to the next town or a petrol station. I don't come from around here so I don't know exactly where it would be."
He looked at her car again & then returned his gaze at Elyse. Despite the first outburst she looked kind of vunerable.
"If you want you can put any stuff in my car that you need & I'll take you where you want to go."
He saw she was looking at his own car, it was a few years older than her own smouldering wreck, & didn't look in much better condition. The windows were down & they could here his CD playing Queens greatest hits.
He waited for her response.

 

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Elyse folded her arms over her chest and eyed the man somewhat suspiciously. "I can't believe I'm doing this..." she muttered under her breath as she grabbed her one suitcase out of her car and tossed it into his back seat. "I wouldn't normally take a ride from a stranger," she said as they got into the car. "but seeing as how my current situation has left me quite pathetic and you seem to have good taste in music, I'll just go with it for now." She leaned her head back against the seat and turned to look at him.

"You just have to answer two questions for me- where are you headed, and have you ever killed anyone?"

 

[rafey]

"You just have to answer two questions for me- where are you headed, and have you ever killed anyone?"[/QUOTE]

He slumped into the seat. Not yet thought, but I can't promise anything.
"Don't worry, somebody who knows the lyrics of "Bohemian Rhapsady" off by heart couldn't be a serial killer. The second answer is I'm just following the road. If it's in your direction more or less that's ok with me."
Her looked at her; young, good looking, lovely body with great tits. Probably some middle class WASP student going home for the hols. Her car was still emitting wisps of smoke, maybe not he thought.
"Where are you going?

 

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"That's true." Elyse said, smiling. She felt his eyes travelling the length of her body and, while any other guy would have gotten slapped for it, she didn't mind Luke looking at her.

"As for where I'm going, I was headed for Olympia, but I don't really have any plans. I'm not too worried about getting anywhere in specific at any particular time. So I guess I'll just stick with you for as long as you can stand me being around. I've got money- I can pitch in with food and gas and motels, or whatever. I'll drive if you need me to. It doesn't really matter to me." She allowed her eyes to travel down his body- he was extremely sexy. Nice, muscled arms, toned body from what she could see- Elyse wondered vaguely if she wasn't getting more out of this trip than she bargained for.

 

[rafey]

Elyse wondered vaguely if she wasn't getting more out of this trip than she bargained for.[/QUOTE]

He turned the ignition key & roared the engine, giving himself a little time to think. He didn't understand her at all. Well, he'd never been able to understand women, but he wasn't really sure of what she was offering.
"You must have been coming from somewhere. Isn't there anybody expecting you back?"

 

[xelysex]

"Well, no, actually...I don't have anyone expecting me." Elyse said as the car started moving. "I was an only child- my mother died when I was three and my father just passed away. He pretty much drank himself to death." Elyse turned and looked out the window. "I was just headed up to Olympia because it's far away from my home and I wanted somewhere where nobody knows me and I can just...start over." Elyse turned and smiled at him sadly. "Sorry to bring you down right away- I don't want pity or anything...I just wanted you to know, so you didn't think I was running from trouble or anything like that."

Elyse looked at him, unable to determine what he was thinking. She couldn't tell if he thought she was crazy or if he was just feeling sorry for her, neither of which she wanted. "So..." she said, trying to change the subject. "What's your story?"

 

[rafey]

Elyse looked at him, unable to determine what he was thinking. She couldn't tell if he thought she was crazy or if he was just feeling sorry for her, neither of which she wanted. "So..." she said, trying to change the subject. "What's your story?"[/QUOTE]

He thought for a moment. Two hours ago he was driving down a road somewhere in California with no plan or direction. Now he was sharing his car with a girl that had just made him an offer he couldn't refuse.
"I'm sorry to hear that" he said sincerely. "I know the feeling. A year ago I lost my job, my marriage & my old life. I also looked for some place where nobody knew me. It's lucky America is such a big place."
He looked at her & smiled, unconciously he let his eyes wander from her face, over her breasts & down her body.
"All I have is this car, a few CD's & books & a bit of petrol money. Stay as long as you like with no strings attached."

 

[xelysex]

"Stay as long as you like with no strings attatched."

Elyse smiled at him, pushing her hair back out of her eyes. "I like the sound of that. I have plenty of money to help out with whatever, so I guess I'll just stick around until you can't stand me any more."

They drove in silence most of the way, until it started to get dark as they entered a small town. "You wanna grab a motel or something?" Elyse asked, pointing straight ahead to a bright neon MOTEL sign.

 

[rafey]

"You wanna grab a motel or something?" Elyse asked, pointing straight ahead to a bright neon MOTEL sign.[/QUOTE]

He smiled, she talked like they were Bonnie & Clyde. He liked having somebody next to him in the car, talking about small things like the music they listened too, singing along with Freddie Murcury.
"Ok", he said simply & pulled over into the empty parking. "Reminds me of a Hitchcocck film". He looked at her, "probably before your time".

They got out the car. "I'll take your case" he said reaching over to get it.
He put his arm around her shoulder as they walked towards the sign that said "reception"

 

[xelysex]

"Are you kidding? I adore Hitchcock. Psycho is my all-time favorite movie." Elyse said as they walked together towards the reception desk. She smiled, liking the feeling of his arm around her and as he talked business with the motel clerk, she felt herself nestling lightly into the crook of his arm and resting her head on his chest.

"Do you want a double room or a single?" The clerk asked.

Elyse looked up at Luke and answered for them. "Single, please." she smiled, lacing her fingers in his.

 

[rafey]

Elyse looked up at Luke and answered for them. "Single, please." she smiled, lacing her fingers in his.[/QUOTE]

Single???? Ouch!!!! Luke thought, 2 singles?? He wasn't too sure what Elyse had in mind. To be honest he wasn't even sure what he had in mind, but he had said no strings so he waited silently for her to sort the details out with the reptionist.
It was only really now; with her next to him; holding his hand; did he realise that he wanted her.
He looked at her face, her smile & felt his cock growing.
He stood silently next to them while the discussed the arrangements

 

[xelysex]

The clerk handed Elyse the room key after she had paid and pointed. "Right down this hall, room number 7." Elyse thanked the clerk and led Luke to the room.

They opened the door to reveal a bed, bedside tables with lamps, a bathroom, and a small TV. Elyse sat down on the bed and looked at Luke. "I hope you don't mind sharing the bed- single rooms are so much cheaper than doubles." She patted the space on the bed next to her, signaling for him to come sit down.

 

[rafey]

She patted the space on the bed next to her, signaling for him to come sit down.[/QUOTE]

Luke smiled as he sat down beside her, "from now on I'll leave all the financial arrangements to you".
He bounced up & down on the bed, Elyse' body bounced toom, bumping into his. She put a hand on his thigh to steady herself.
They looked into each others eyes for a long moment before Luke leaned over to kiss her.

 

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Elyse melted into the kiss. It was so warm and soft and...perfect. One of her arms wrapped around his neck and her fingers tangled into his hair as she moved her body, adjusting her legs so she was sitting on his lap, straddling him. Her other hand moved up the length of his arm, resting lightly on his shoulder. She deepened the kiss, sliding her tongue out and gently along his lower lip before he opened his mouth to her, allowing her tongue entrance.

 

[rafey]

She deepened the kiss, sliding her tongue out and gently along his lower lip before he opened his mouth to her, allowing her tongue entrance.[/QUOTE]

Luke was taken aback by her boldness. Her kiss & tongue aroused him. Her body was tight against his, he felt his cock grow inside his trousers.
After a minutes hesitation he put his arms around her waist & allowed himself to drown in her wonderful kiss.
He moved his hands up her back, feeling the bumps along her spine, he let his fingers trace the lines of her bra strap under her clothes.