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The Big Payback

Thread starter hitemrealhard
Start date Sep 5, 2005

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hitemrealhard

Virgin

Sep 5, 2005

#1

I am looking for feedback for my stroy about a snobby black stripper being repaid for her bad attitude. Thanks!

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oOScarletWingsOo

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Sep 8, 2005

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Ask and you shall receive

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