The bet.

[GinaTina]

So, I've been kicking around a new idea for a story since my other one has been so well-received.

I've only the basic synopsis so far; rivals (male/female) who, when tensions finally flare up too much, make a bet with each other. The loser has to be the other's slave for a month.

I wonder if anyone would be interested in reading such a thing? It's probably been done, but I'm going to put my own twist on it.

Thanks in advance,

Ginnnnnnnna!

 

[sirhugs]

mmmmmm.....


YUP

I'd read it... though only the first three paragraphs if it isn't well written.

 

[Carnevil9]

Will the story focus on the competition to win the bet? Or focus on the slavery afterwards? Because those seem like they would be very different stories.

 

[GinaTina]

I tend to get very involved when I write. It'll likely be a long tale with many layers. That was only a very basic plot outline.


But, yay! I think I'm going to give it a go!

 

[switch76]

I've got an interactive story that's based on this idea.

A Bet Leads To Domination In The Office

Choose a man's name as first name
Choose a woman's name as last name

I'd be happy if you would consider adding a thread or two to the story.

 

[HeyAll]

I certainly would.


How about this: The man and woman are co-workers with a flirtatious relationship. And like you've said, they're also rivals eyeing the same promotion or something. The guy is kind of sleezy and likes making sexually suggestive comments to her.

They make a bet, the guy losses, then the woman uses that opportunity to take advantage of him. Maybe during a break, she takes him to the supply room where she has him perform oral sex on her. Things like that.

best of luck

 

[roomfor1more]

It is a good idea. The one suggestion I would make is to put some information regarding the couple's relationship and how the reached that point. Depending on how the story is written and where you place it, if you start out with the bet then it could leave readers feeling as though the story is missing something. My advice would be to lay the basis for the bet before it happens.

 

[GinaTina]

Don't you fret; I'm a decent storyteller. Or so I've been told. Thank you for the input, everyone. I've already started typing an intro.

 

[sirhugs]

Don't you fret; I'm a decent storyteller. Or so I've been told. Thank you for the input, everyone. I've already started typing an intro.

well, I'm not big on non-human, so I must admit I haven't followed your stories.

 

[GinaTina]

well, I'm not big on non-human, so I must admit I haven't followed your stories.

You sir, have crushed me.


I'm only joking. Follow whatever stories catch your fancy.

 

[sirhugs]

You sir, have crushed me.


I'm only joking. Follow whatever stories catch your fancy.

I figured it to be a more gentle crushing than the implication that I thought you weren't a good writer... I can't read everyone

 

[FireyIce]

It sounds like a good idea. Hopefully the twist on it is very intriguing.

 

[LordofBlackbirds]

I'd definitely read that. I hope you do write it.

 

[KarlMartinK]

I've always liked the idea of stories where bets are made. It gives you the chance to write characters who end up doing things they wouldn't ordinarily do, which is often more interesting to me than people doing things without any inhibitions.

The stories of this type that are boring to me are the ones where they start out right away going to the extreme without any build-up whatsoever. If the guy loses the bet, for example, and the girl immediately tells him to take off his clothes, put on a pair of panties she bought knowing she was going to win the bet, and then makes him do demeaning things in front of her friends all day.