The begging of The Long Goodbye.....

Sparky Kronkite

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The Long Goodbye

No “promise”
No “future”
No “yet to come”
No “arrival”

His voice tears
Over sinful street noise
Whispering a confidence
Giving a speech
His eyes never leave yours

He asks you to his parlor - you decline, then follow

Then…..

In his crooked walk
You both disappear into his little old house
But no one cares
No one cares

He’s such an odd old man
Drinking away his days
Days, like bottles
Broken and discarded

No “promise”
No “future”
No “yet to come”
No “arrival”

He says life is a crawl
Through bad knock-knock jokes
And missing prodigal sons

Life is sour and it most often stings

He says all things…..

Come with deliberate speed
Toward a certain, perfect end

He says all things…..
Are for sale at a reduced price

And all there is to really do
Is to mutter about what you hate
Even when you know it’s all way too late
For a prophet - such as you might have been

No “promise”
No “future”
No “yet to come”
No “arrival”

He claims to have wanted…..

To teach peace to the conquered and to tame the too proud

But now…..

That will have to be left for better men
Better mystics
Better legends
And left for those with a better sense of life

Because this old man
Is all used up

Yet he finds a smile….. and says…..

How bittersweet it is
To relax in ones own exile
Bottle by bottle
Bottle by bottle
Bottle by bottle

And this is his long goodbye
 
I liked it...

Sometimes I dont know beckbabe... its almost like you are older than me or something
 
A lyric for a new tune? I like it, no matter what it becomes. But I think it should be a song about Draino and squirt guns.
 
ahhhhhhh Spark ...

... you can't light a fire without a Spark ...

and ummmmm i see that is still true ... :)

luv your artsy av, baby ... it is soooooo you .... <hugs>

oh also i want to say that for one who mocks Dylan so much, your poem was quite Dylanesque to moi ... but then again ... what would i know?
 
Isa'T? Dylan?

Yes. You win the cake.

This spewed/spurned and spit - from article I read about his new album out this week.

I do love Bob - but he is a great huckster - and artist.
 
I wanna be Bobby's girl ...

yipee skipee .... i win ... i win ...

ohhhh ok ... there's cake? wow ...

you mean like beefcake?

are you going to send me another nudie, Spark? ;)
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Well, they'll stone you and say that it's the end ...
then they'll stone you and then they'll come back again ...
They'll stone you when you're riding in your car ...
They'll stone you when you're playing your guitar ...
Yes, but I would not feel so all alone ...
Everybody must get stoned.
 
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