The Battle of the Sexes

[thrillerauthor]

When a down-and-out golfer winds up playing on the women's tour, the Battle of the Sexes will never be the same. Even if you don't like golf, for a different kind of love story read "Missing the Cut", just released on Literotica.


Click here to read Missing the Cut

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[Le Jacquelope]

I'm not an experienced critic, but I did dig the nice back story, and though I'm not into feminization (which this appears to be), you sure did it well.

I just wish I knew more about golf and the LPGA to comment on that part, since it was the major theme of the story (aside from the sex).

 

[thrillerauthor]

Missing the Cut

Thanks for the nice critique of Missing the Cut.

The story is not really about feminization per se...Denny's masquerade was only to fool the LPGA officials. The lesbian love scene between a guy and a girl was fun to write, and added a bit of spice to the story.

Thanks again for taking the time.

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[Call Me Kevin 2]

Seems so.

That's what I think too.