The Bachelorette Party

[alias_amy]

The Bachelorette Party (Closed)

This Thread is about a Girl who is going to get Married and is going on her pre-wedding Bacheloretteto a night club, there she gets drunk and flirts with one of the bouncers and things continue on from there, the Thread will continue onto the next day (the wedding day) where she feels guilty, so for the thread i will need A) The Bouncer B) The Husband to be.

My Character:
Name: Amy Raven
Age: 24
Job: Beauty Model
Height: 5'6'
Hair Colour: Blonde with Brunette highlights
Hair Length: Down to Shoulders.
Hair Style: Straight till Curly at the bottom.
Clothes for Bachelorette Party

IS:
The Black Stretch Limo pulled up outside the Night Club, THe Limo driver stepped out of the drivers seat and opened the back door of the Limo, Rachel, Cacey, Hannah and Then Amy stepped out of the Black Limo and onto the pavement, they walked upto the entrance of the night club having a girls talk on their way, They would be immediately accepted into the Night Club, Amy's husband to be was young, popular with the public and very rich he had already told the Night Club to allow her in, Amy went ahead of the group and approached the good looking Bouncer and said "Hi, My name is Amy Raven, i should be on the special people list."

Thanks for joining if you do

 

[champ_jp]

OCC:

Dan Ford
27
Bouncer
6'2
Althelic Build
Short Brown Hair, Brown Eyes

IC:

Dan was doing his usual rounds as it was and he stood watching as group of girls approached, one very sexy looking one who introduced herself to him. He smiled "welcome Ladies, and yes here you are Ms Raven, for the last night Ms Revan." He stood to the side letting them through and taking a good look at Amy, she had a perfect body. He quickly shook it off knowing it was wrong as he waited for them to enter

 

[alias_amy]

IC:

Dan was doing his usual rounds as it was and he stood watching as group of girls approached, one very sexy looking one who introduced herself to him. He smiled
"welcome Ladies, and yes here you are Ms Raven, for the last night Ms Revan."

"Thankyou" Said Amy, she went past the Bouncer first with her friends following suit, they made their way over to the bar, Hannah had ordered the first round of shots before Rachel said "oh that Bouncer wasn't half nice" amy smirked and nodded ordering another round of shots before saying "hmmm yeah he was fit" she drank the shot down...

 

[catlover]

Frank (bridegroom)

The wedding was to be tomorrow. All the wedding party was assembled for the rehearsal which went quite nicely. The bridesmaids had planned a bachelorette party tonight, and of course I was not included so the ushers and best man and I went out on the town by ourselves for my last night before becoming attached.

The future father-in-law was there too so our behavior was under scrutiny, but the best man took us to a strip club on the outskirts of town, and led us in the door. We each paid our cover charge and found a big table right in front of the stage, and as our first drinks were served by skimpily clad waitress, our attention was drawn to the stage where a naked female was cavorting up and down a brass pole upside down.

All the men were whooping it up and we learned that she had been at the top of the pole when she gripped it with her knees and stripped off her bra, and then with one arm as she pushed down her panties and took them off. That must have been quite a show and we awaited her next turn so we could see it in entirety.

Back down on the stage she laid on her back with her legs spread showing us everything including a big grin, and made eyes at us getting us ready for some table dances I assumed.

When the song ended she left the stage and was replaced with a tall buxom blonde that didnt turn me on, and we all sucked our beers until Patty showed up and sat on the lap of my future father in law and asked him if we wanted a table dance.

 

[alias_amy]

THanks for Joining both of you

 

[catlover]

Frank

Mr Raven couldnt have answered if he had wanted to. Patty's lips were on his and her tongue in his mouth as she squirmed on his lap.

Then she invited him into the VIP room for some serious dancing, and quite wisely he replied. "yes, we'll all come"

I wondered if he knew what he had said, because he was probably totally correct.

We each chipped in for the special fee, and she started to dance for us. In a private room there were relaxed rules about total nudity, and she put the rules to a test as she stripped and started unbuttoning his shirt, as his hands roamed all over her ass.

I wondered how Amy's mom would react if she saw him now.

 

[alias_amy]

SouthernWife has asked to be joined to the thread and she has SO another addition to the Thread, Now that we have 4 people posting the thread is now closed.

Welcome SouthernWife

 

[southernwife]

OOC: Thanks for the warm welcome amy,,,

Sandy Greene
age: 34
hair color: black very curly below the shoulders
Height: 5'10 with long curvy legs
Weight: An athletic 130lbs
Breasts:36d
IC:
Sandy was a single woman with no children. Her parents had ben extremely wealthy which allowed her to live the lifestyle she preferred quick and risky. She could rub elbows with the rich in famous totally at home in an evening gown or she could hang out shooting pool in the wildest biker bar in town. She lived in a beach side condo where she worked on her tan or worked out in the in house gym. Sandy ran each morning along the beach keeping her taut body looking good and fit. She also wasn't scared of anyone or anything speaking her mind freely and taking what she wanted when she wanted it. Sandy was not always the best looking woman in a bar as the bleach blonde swimsuit model types with the shy little giggle's often attracted the attention of men over her. But she had a look that said I will fuck your brains out and leave you begging for more. It was a pure look of seduction and wild sex. She refused to be tied to one man picking and choosing her sex partners as her moods took her. She would sit quietly stalking her next victim so to speak without them ever knowing it. She was also not one to turn down a roll in the hay with another lady though she was not into the butch type female lesbians. She often enjoyed preying on bachelor and bachlorette party's which she was often tipped off to by a close fuck friend of hers that worked as a bouncer in a local venue.
She saw them the moment they got out of the limo the little bachelorette party was so cute she thought. She sat at the end of the bar sipping her gin and tonic. She picked the bride to be from the start and began to size her up. The next question was where might her future husband be partying. It had long been a deisre of hers to not only bed the groom or the bride just before the wedding but to bed the both of them. She looked over at Dan remembering a few nights ago when she had rode him hard and long. She scanned the group once more and noticed Dan's little attempts to be charming with the girls.

 

[champ_jp]

Dan was scoping the room, looking for someone that caught his eyes. He usual liked to hook up with someone and see where it went. He glanced over noticing Sandy, she was so sexy, and a few nights ago, she rode him so he wasn't sure if she wanted a repeat.

His eyes had caught the attention of Amy, the bride to be. She looked stunning, her dress was so revealing and her body looked great from where he was standing. He wouldn't mind showing her a good time on her last night before marriage. He had to fight the urge to head over and unlease his charms on her.

 

[alias_amy]

Amy was having a great time, by now she had drunk a fair amount of alcohol and had become tipsy, still laughing along with her friends, a man came up to her and introduced himself as "Samuel" she miled at Samuel and introduced herself back, soon enough Samuel had taken her hand and had led her to the dance floor, AMy looked around the club as she and the man slow danced, she saw the Bouncer that she and her friends had noted as "sexy looking and fit" earlier, she smiled at him before turning back to the man she was dancing with, only then did she notice that his hands had move down the back of her dress and were now placed on her ass, she stopped dancing and put her hands over his, moved them off and said

"Woah there what you doing"

THe man stood back puzzled, confused and obviously annoyed

"Im just getting myself some sweet ass honey" said the man, he grabbed AMy again forcing her to dance and moved his hands back down to her ass

She pushed Samuel away and said "Don't touch me" he tried to grab her again, she pushed him away harder then before causing him to fall over, he got up even more annoyed now that he had been pushed over and that some Barcadi breezers had fallen and had splt their contents onto his top

"look what you did u little bitch" he said before slapping Amy around the face.

 

[champ_jp]

Dan noticed Amy's smile at him, he smiled back before she returned to dancing with a guy. He walked around slowly, keeping his eyes on Amy as he noticed the man placing his hands on her ass.

He also noticed Amy trying to remove them but he started to force them back on. Amy pushed him away, still he came back for more. Amy's voice rose telling him not to touch her, that's when Dan started across the dance floor, pushing past the couples dancing to get to Amy. She pushed him to the ground and he got up a slapped her on the face and was about to do it again when Dan grabbed the guys arm, squeezing it tight "now thats out of line" he said turning to one of the other bouncer's "take him out and make sure he doesn't get back in" he said before letting go of the guys wrist as he was escorted out.

He turned to Amy "are you alright?" he asked trying to get a look at her face. "I'm sorry about that, you mind if I take a look, I promise I won't hurt you" he said slowly raising a hand towards her face to see if there was any swelling or bruising. He stopped his hand short of her face waiting to see if she was alright with him touching her.

 

[alias_amy]

Samuel was about to slap Amy across the face again before the bouncer she had smiled at earlier grabbed the guys arm and said

"now thats out of line" he turned to one of the other bouncer's

"take him out and make sure he doesn't get back in" he said letting Samuel go so he could be escorted out of the club.

Amy had her hands over the side of her face that Samuel had slapped
"are you alright?" she heard the bouncer ask, he was trying to get a look at her face.

"I'm sorry about that, you mind if I take a look, I promise I won't hurt you" he said before raising a hand towards her face. He stopped his hand short of her face as if waiting to see if it was okay for him to touch her, Amy moved her hand away from her face showing that she was fine with it, a couple of tears had slid down her cheek...

 

[catlover]

Frank

Patty laughed and danced away from him and started to make the rounds among thenother guys. She danced up to me and said "Hi Big Boy, and struck her tits in my face.

I couldnt resist, and sucked and licked one of them while i ran a hand up and down her naked thigh.

She spread her legs a little and asked me very quietly if I wanted to fuck her.

Then Mr Raven stood behind her cupping her very nice breasts in his hands as he kissed the back of her neck, and asked her if she did extra favors for tips.

I wondered what kind of family I was marrying into, but at least Amy had the right kind of genes, provided of course that he was actually her biological father.

 

[champ_jp]

Dan smiled "you'll be fine, probably be sore for a while" he said touching her cheek and wiping the tears of her gently before moving his hand off again "you still look great" he smiled stepping back slightly.

"I'm sure you'll look great for you wedding" he nodded as his hand returned to his side

 

[catlover]

Frank

Patty turned and said "of course I do, but I dont have time for all of you because I have to go back on stage after this song. For #200 I'll do a quickie but he gets me first since he is getting married tomorrow"

I certainly didnt want a fight with the futur e father-in-law, and I didnt really want a quickie. I'd rather take my time as long as Amy was out partying and I wouldne see her again until she came down the aisle in her wedding dress, on her father's arm to give her away to me.

So, I told him to go ahead and I would see her later after her stint on the main stage, which I wanted to watch.

 

[alias_amy]

The Bouncer smiled at her

"you'll be fine, probably be sore for a while"

he said wiping her tears away gently before moving his hand off again "you still look great" said the bouncer smiling, stepping back slightly.

"I'm sure you'll look great for you wedding" he said as his hand returned to his side..."Thanks" said Amy smiling, she quickly darted her hand down to his hand and grabbed it before turning around and walking towards the bar pulling him along behind her "I think i should buy you a drink" she said before stopping at the bar, ordering two drinks she turned to the bouncer and said

"so...urm, whats your name"

 

[catlover]

Frank

Mr Raven pulled out his wallet and out two #100 dollar bills. Patty took a condom out of as little drawer and put it i her mouth, and then went to her knees and started to undo his belt and unzip his pants. He just stood there with the bills in his hand until she took out his now semi-hard cock and started to suck him.

When she removed him from her mouth he was wearing the condom and his pants were down around his knees.

With his cock in her hand, she laid back on the carpet and pulled him to her. As he enteed her she took the bills from his hand, and said "hurry. The song is about to end"

A few pumps and she said "thats all. I have to get on stage now", as we heard the DJ say "And now, we have the fabulous Patty with her famous pole dance", as she jumped up and put on her costume and headed for the stage.

We all went out in the regular lounge and watched her work over the male audience and then climb the pole. All the guys were turned on as hell, and as the song played shwe turned herself upside down, with her long hair hanging below her, she started to remove her bra.

 

[champ_jp]

Dan felt Amy's soft hands take his and pull him along to the bar and offering to buy him a drink. "You don't have to buy me a drink, I was only doing my job" he smiled "besides I coudn't let him hurt a beautiful lady" he said turning on the charm.

He placed an elbow on the bar "I'm Dan Ford" he said introducting himself, no one really cared for his name before, just called him bouncer. He stared into her eyes a moment, almost gazing at them. She was so attractive and he couldn't help but admire.

 

[alias_amy]

"You don't have to buy me a drink, I was only doing my job, besides I coudn't let him hurt a beautiful lady" said the bouncer before placing his elbow on the bar and introducing himself "I'm Dan Ford".

"Well Dan, i think i do have to buy you a drink and theres nothing you can do or say from stopping me from buying you one" she said with a cute grin on her face "and anyway it was my fault really, my agent usually has an army of mean, unsocial, rough bodyguards following me about everywhere, i can see why he wants them around me now, so he keeps earning a profit"

Just then the Bartender showed up with the drinks Amy had ordered, he handed one to Amy and the other to Dan, the bartender looked at Dan confused and said

"Dan shouldn't you be like well doing what you do best...bouncing" the bartender grinned and sniggered as if what he had said had been hilarious

"no no no no" said Amy "Tell your boss that Dan has the night off but is to still be paid" she turned back to Dan and said smiling "don't worry, my soon to be husbands reputation will make sure that you can spend the rest of the evening with me and my gals, we need some male company anyway"

 

[champ_jp]

Dan looked at the bartender, his expression telling the bartender to shutup. He then heard Amy tell him that he had the night off and was to be paid for it. He smiled taking the drink off her, the prospect of spending the night with Amy and her female friends was inviting and exciting and he could barely control himself.

"Thank you Amy, your very kind" he smiled, fighting the urge to take her.

 

[alias_amy]

"Thank you Amy, your very kind" said Dan

"Thats okay, now, most of my girlfriends will try and flirt with you and i can't blame them" said Amy drinking some more of her drink, by now she was more then tipsy...

"come on, come and meet them" she said quickly grabbing his hand again and walking beside him to a group of black padded chairs by the side of the wall "girls, this is dan" Amy hiccupped and then continued "be nice now..."

 

[champ_jp]

Dan raised his hand "hey girls" he said introducing himself to the girls. They were all attractive but he had his eye on Amy tonight. He looked down and noticed his hand in her's, and he wondered if she realised she was still holding his hand. He wasn't going to say anything.

 

[alias_amy]

"hey girls" said Dan introducing himself to the girls.

"Dans going to be spending the night with us..." Amy stopped talking then turned to Dan "You are going to stay with us aren't you, you haven't got somewhere to go have you like to your girlfriend or something, I would....I mean we would really like you to stay, she stared up into his eyes, she knew her hand was still holding his hand but she didn't mind...she liked it.

 

[champ_jp]

Dan looked into her eyes and smiled "No I don't have a girlfriend and definately nowhere else to be" he answered not going to leave her and her friends.

He smiled gently squeezing her hand hoping she didn't mind. She was so sexy he could barely control himself. He wanted to just rip her clothes off right but he wanted to see if she wanted him first.

 

[catlover]

Frank

Off came her bra and as she hung from the pole being gripped by her knees, she waved it around with a big smile and tossed it to the stage.

Her breasts were taut and luscious as she let herself hang straight down, and they didnt even sag down toward her chin .

Then she swung around a few times and grippong the pole with one leg and one arm, she slipped her panty down a little on her legs, and then switched legs on the pole to push it down the other. She alternated until it got to her knees, when she was able to remove it completely and twirl it around advertising her charms (read that as her neatly trimmed pussy), and then tossed it to the stage as well.

Letting herself slide down the pole to the stage, she laid there with her legs spread showing us her beautiful pussy, and I imagined the cum oozing out of it until I remembered that he had to wear a condom which he still had on when he pulled out of her in the VIP room.

The crowd roared its approval with cheers and bills flooded the stage as tips,which she retrieved bending over giving us all a good look at her pussy and anus, and left the stage.

The guys all talked about crashing the girls bachlorette party. One of them was the boyfriend of one of the bridesmaids, and she had told him where it would be.

They laughed and agreed it was a good idea, and they all left, but being the groom I didnt dare to offend Amy, and just stayed at the gentlemen's club alone.

Patty worked her way back to our table stopping for pats on the ass along the way, coping with requests fior table dances.

When she arrived she told me she would be through at 2 AM and it was now after midnight. We agreed that I would wait for her but I watched as she did her table dances and collected a handful of bills as tips, until they announced it was the last dance and she went into the dressing room to don her street clothes.

All the time I thought of that lovely body lying there beneath me on the bed, as Amy kept leaving me with blue balls saying "after we are married"

Amy let me eat her pussy for hours, but never gave me a handjob a blowjob or a fuck, saying she was saving herself for marriage.

I was concerned about her sexuality, but her dad was loaded and promised to
take me into his business and the opportunity was too tempting to turn down when Amy agreed to marry me. I had really only asked trying to break down the barriers and get into her, but it got out iof hand and here we were on the brink of marriage with me lusting after Patty.