The art of sex

Husky_Embrace

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I've written this story three times, never to my satisfaction.

The idea is simple. A student is a bit of a prude, making her sex life pretty tame in comparison to the other women.

At one point a friend tells her to let loose. Maybe she should go to someone she knows. He's studying photography and related arts. He can take a picture of her wild side, making her more at ease with her sexuality.

She agrees more out of curiosity. They make an appointment and meet. He makes her comfortable with some food and drinks. When she feels they'll start, he tells her that she doesn't seem to know what is supposed to happen.

He tells her that he does make professional erotic pictures, but most women know there's more to it for him.

Based on an argument he had with a teacher he told that he could cum on a woman and tell it's art. The teacher agreed to his ludicrous statement, which had sent him fuming. A friend convinced him to actually do it, so he could experience if it was art, or confront his teacher with it.

Now he's got quite a few erotic pictures of women with his cum. All can opt out at any moment as long as he hasn't published it yet. Like something as crass as a cumlendar, or a museum exhibition.

So he asks her to have an open mind. He'll make erotic pictures, and they'll see if there will be pictures for his collection as well.

They make plenty of pictures, slowly dressing down to more exciting images. Even though he undresses along with her, he feels like a professional.

After a series where they're fully naked he asks if she wants to join her project. She agrees, and he joins her on the couch.

After some steamy sex scenes he pulls out and cums on her pussy. Then he instructs her to several poses and makes pictures.

The woman gies to take a shower, where a thousand products are to clean herself. When she comes out he's finishing editing the pictures, already printing them out.

Then he asks a rather unprofessional question. He liked hanging out with her. Would she like having sex just this once for him, and not fir his project. She realises he feels alone, missing a connection with the women he sleeps with. She agrees on the condition she can make pictures of him afterwards.

They have sex, and to give him a new experience she lets him cum inside her. Something he likely didn't have for a long while. She makes a few pictures before getting dressed.

She leaves with a USB drive of her erotic side. A few physical pictures attest to the erotics she was capable of, as well as the memory of making pictures of him after draining him to the bone.
 
Well I can see why it's troublesome. There's a lot of there. The whole 'cum on a woman art shots' seems rather pointless and a quick way to get to the sex. Taking that out, the story is more streamlined.

A lonely woman and a lonely man meet.

So if it were me, I'd go this way.
A rather prudish wife is convinced by her best friend to have a series of boudoir photos done as a gift for her husband for their wedding anniversary. (My wife did it, it's pretty awesome.) She goes, has a great rapport with the photographer and manages to enjoy the experience.

But her anniversary never comes. A month before, her husband presents her with divorce papers.

She returns to the photographer and cancels the prints but she's still on the hook for the photography. As a way to even things up he asks her to assist him with the next shoot which is a couple. To her surprise, the couple are having sex on camera and she has to be there in the room.

What she sees shocks and arouses her like never before. It's wild and feral, two beautiful bodies rutting like animals.

What happens between the photographer and the woman? One thing is for sure, she finds her wild side and a whole new world opens up for her.
 
I can understand why you find it hard. The story outline goes multiple directions, and it is hard to get them to converge.
Sometimes less might be more.
Forget about the intercourse with the photographer. Focus on her.

I suggest you think backwards. What is your key message? I'd say her sexual liberation. You started with her desire to become more sexually open. This happens when she lets him cum on her and gets the pictures taken. For the story to have a closure, something has to happen with these pictures. If they just stay on the stick, it's a lot of labour lost.

Who does she show the pictures to? How do these people react? Showing it to her girl-friends is easy, but the emotional hurdle to show it to a man can be interesting.
Maybe she initially declines his wish to have her in his calendar/exhibition. Over time, she feels the desire to show the world her new, open self. So she agrees. She invites some friends to the opening of the exhibition, not telling them that her image is there as well. The photographer greets her with an intimate kiss and touch, making it obvious that they know each other. At some stage, she innocently asks her friends if they can guess which of the images is hers. Bämm! Some of the friends buy a calendar at the exhibition. Now her cum covered body hangs in a few college dorms.

This way, you have a good closure. Her wild side is now in the open. Mission achieved.

From there, you could go on. Having someone ejaculate on your body is a special, very porny kind of sex. She might get addicted to that... Or then and only then you pursue her liaison with the photographer.
 
Please keep posts to a reasonable length for an idea, not an outline!
 
To raise a less than serious point, this site no longer welcomes the words "art" and "sex" in the same sentence.
Just ask the gentle folk in the Visual forum.
 
For me, the disconnect comes when they have sex. If he's just making art, there is no reason they would do that - he could just masturbate and ejaculate on her. This would make it easier for him to get whatever visuals he's going for and it would be much easier for her to agree to as well
 
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