astuffedshirt_perv
Literotica Guru
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something, something, picture of B-17 with red dots...But then both sailed through without a hiccup. Each contained very little dialogue and were relatively short @ 750 words each, but I didn't change anything in my writing style to increase the chances of avoiding rejection.
Best advice I can give is to focus on flow, trying to inject an organic element and connect on an emotional level. Add some awkward, some hesitation, connection and tumbling relief to your story.