That Loving Wives story I was telling you guys about

[mikey2much]

I just submited the story. I think I fixed the problems but would like to hear your opinion when it post. The title is 'The Last Hitchhiker' and I am trying to post it in loving wives.

I will let you know when it post and will provide a link.

 

[nakdsub]

give us a hint

Is it a cuckold, ie: I saw my wife screwing another man and my dick got hard, or
is it kick her to the curb, ie: I shot them both, or
somewhere in the middle?

 

[mikey2much]

Its a bit of both

I tried to tell a story that would be sexy but at the same time have a brooding feel about it like you just know something bad is about to happen. I hope that I got it right.