Thanks Penelope Street, sensorotika... and more

[Darkniciad]

I just wanted to offer up a little thanks for the feedback from sensorotika and Penelope Street on my first story submission. Their critique is proving valuable to improving my writing, and "King Thakkorias" is the result

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=246807

I felt like writing something a little less dark a while back, and tried to begin utilizing their advice in this short side story. It certainly appears to be working considering the quick launch and rapid rise in Thakkor's rating within a niche catagory.

I still have a ways to go, but I think I'm starting to get there.

Thanks again to laz and KewlBlueTiger for their praise of my stories as well, encouragement is as important as critique.

I may just have to go back and re-write Danica utilizing this advice as well, because I'm *really* fond of Danica's story and I want it to be as good as it can possibly be.

 

[Penelope Street]

You're welcome

I'm happy you found our brief exchange useful.