Thanks from first time writer

[krazy_karen_uk]

Hi,
Just a quick thank you, finally after what seems like ages, I stopped reading and started writing. Just had my first story accepted 2 days ago and it has already been read over 12,000 times (Just how many people visit this place?)

Any way, thanks for the comments (good and bad, I need help) and the emails, I'm grateful for all the requests of hot dates and steamy sex ;-)

Well, better put pen to paper and try for my next one.

Thanks again
Krazy_Karen_uk (Yes I'm British)

 

[WhiteKnight]

Emma's Growing Pains

Hi Karen,

Just read Emma's Growing Pains. Good story and certainly felt the old trouser snake expanding as I read. Nice One, oh and well done for only giving David an average sized cock.

I've tried to put a link to your story so hopefully others will read too



http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=140185

 

[Guest]

Em...

Is it only me who can't get to the story due to Mirosoft's 'cannot display' problem?

Or is there anything wrong with the link provided?

Perhaps, I got the bug?

Hummm...

Anyway, I gotta pee.

Bye.

 

[WhiteKnight]

No happened to me as well, though pasting the url works

 

[Guest]

OK, K_K_uK. Wow, 3 Ks.

Five for your effort.

Minus one for not checking spelling.

Minus one for writing line like:

"I look very sexy tonight!" she said, cupping her breasts and giving them a slight squeeze.

That's Three points left, so I stopped.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Welcome to Lit, Karen. That was a very nice first story. Here’s a link by the way:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=140185

Nice, but really odd. I’ve never heard of that fantasy before, about being seduced while pretending to be asleep. But I noticed that once she opened her eyes, the sex lost something. It became just plain sex. You could feel the heat while she was pretending to be asleep. Once she opened her eyes, that specialness was gone.

I read the comments too, and I saw where someone took you to task for not going into her feelings about what was happening and their significance. I felt that too. I wouldn’t have hurt to get a little deeper into what she was thinking and feeling while this was going on. I’ll bet there’s some more sexy stuff in there; her enjoyment at being so passive. It made me curious.

---dr.M..

 

[cookiejar]

Heck dr_m, I have dreamed about being seduced while pretending to be asleep. Sure it's implausible and maybe even silly, but it was one of my fantasies too. Karen was dead-on making it her first time. As a virgin I had fantasies of a man taking me that way, there was something very erotic about it. It might have worked better if he had known she was faking, think of the possibilities!

"I look very sexy tonight!" she said, cupping her breasts and giving them a slight squeeze. CV, Emma is 18 years old and yes teenage girls actually do and say things like this. We're talking about an immature, young girl.


Karen, next time make sure you use a spellchecker and don't let the public comments get to you.


Cookie

 

[Guest]

"I look very sexy tonight!" she said, cupping her breasts and giving them a slight squeeze. CV, Emma is 18 years old and yes teenage girls actually do and say things like this. We're talking about an immature, young girl.

Well, I'm an 18 year old girl and I don't say shit like that out loud!

 

[cookiejar]

Well, I'm an 18 year old girl and I don't say shit like that out loud!

I suppose you have fantasies of being seduced as you pretend to be asleep too?

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Heck dr_m, I have dreamed about being seduced while pretending to be asleep. Sure it's implausible and maybe even silly, but it was one of my fantasies too. Karen was dead-on making it her first time. As a virgin I had fantasies of a man taking me that way, there was something very erotic about it. It might have worked better if he had known she was faking, think of the possibilities!

I didn't mean to sound like I was criticizing her for it. Far from it. I thought it was very unusual and I would have liked to know more about it. It's kind of like the flip side of the 'chloroform' fantasy men have of taking advantage of an unconscious woman, and I find that fascinating. I wasn't aware that there was a female version of being taken while you were pretending to be unconscious.

That's why I wish that Karen had gone into more detail about what the girl was thinking. What's the attraction? Is it just that it absolves you from guilt and responsibility for what happens? Or is there some 'sleeping beauty' angle to it. Something about being so attractive that a man has to have you even if you're not participating?

No, it's rare that you see something new on Literotica: a new fantasy or fetish or anything, and I commend Karen. I just wanted to know more about it.

---dr.M.

 

[cookiejar]

I didn't mean to sound like I was criticizing her for it. Far from it. I thought it was very unusual and I would have liked to know more about it. It's kind of like the flip side of the 'chloroform' fantasy men have of taking advantage of an unconscious woman, and I find that fascinating. I wasn't aware that there was a female version of being taken while you were pretending to be unconscious.

That's why I wish that Karen had gone into more detail about what the girl was thinking. What's the attraction? Is it just that it absolves you from guilt and responsibility for what happens? Or is there some 'sleeping beauty' angle to it. Something about being so attractive that a man has to have you even if you're not participating?

No, it's rare that you see something new on Literotica: a new fantasy or fetish or anything, and I commend Karen. I just wanted to know more about it.

---dr.M.

I never thought you were criticizing her, I agree it's a good angle. As a teenager I was shy, unsure of myself and my body. I certainly never thought of myself as a "Sleeping Beauty." I think you hit the nail on the head with the idea of absolving myself from guilt and responsibility.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

This reminds me of some stories I once saw on the some "Erotic Mind Control Story" site. Yes, there is such a place, and they have all thes emind-control stories, but the category I thought was the oddest were the stories written from the point of view of the victim. That is, the fantasy usually used hypnosis and involved being controlled and made to do things

I always thought that the attraction of the hypnosis fantasy was the power you'd have over your hypnotized victim. It never occurred to me that some people might find the idea of being hypnotized themselves erotic as well, but I guess I can understand it. You're forced to do all these really fun and nasty things, but you're not responsible for what you do.

How 'bout it, Cookie? Do I have a story here or what?

---dr.M.

 

[cookiejar]

This reminds me of some stories I once saw on the some "Erotic Mind Control Story" site. Yes, there is such a place, and they have all thes emind-control stories, but the category I thought was the oddest were the stories written from the point of view of the victim. That is, the fantasy usually used hypnosis and involved being controlled and made to do things

I always thought that the attraction of the hypnosis fantasy was the power you'd have over your hypnotized victim. It never occurred to me that some people might find the idea of being hypnotized themselves erotic as well, but I guess I can understand it. You're forced to do all these really fun and nasty things, but you're not responsible for what you do.

How 'bout it, Cookie? Do I have a story here or what?

---dr.M.

As long as I am the victim Seriously go for it...I have had that fantasy too. A man using me any way he wants, oh I get chills.

 

[krazy_karen_uk]

More about Emma

Hi everyone,

Well I have been reading all your comments, and taking notes. You may be pleased to know, I have been very busy lately. Emma is about to star in another 5 stories.

Yep, 5, all have been written, and submitted my second last week (It was rejected though, I'm a crap spelling, and my gramma isn't to hot either).

Anyway, 5 new stories, each one is quite different, so I hope you all aren't offended to easy, she is in for a wild time (Which she loves mind)

So take it easy, watch out for more stories (as they get accepted) over the coming weeks.

Karen