Thanks for the positive Feedback on the stories

[sethp]

Hi, I just had my first two stories posted. Mandy and Maureen both in the incest catagory. I know they are both similar. My next venture will be different. Thank you to all who read, voted or commented. I would appreciate any feedback. I don't think I have a mastery of quotations and characters talking to each other yet. Maybe longer stories.. I think my plot development is ok for just starting. but hey! Please any feedback negative or positive would be appreciated. I'll take it for what it's worth. If there's enough feedback I'll add part twos to both! Thanks again!

Sethp

 

[Black Tulip]

Hi Sethp,

Welcome to the AH (Author's Hangout).
This place can be rather bewildering, so I'll give you some pointers.

The Story Discussion Circle is a two-way street. If you're looking for serious critiques on your stories, you're welcome to give two before you can get one.

If, on the other hand, you're looking for simple feedback you can go here:

https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=181349

Any questions you might have, feel free to PM me or take a look at the Newbie Support Forum. The link is in my sig.

Have fun!

 

[sethp]

Thanks for the advice. I really really appreciate it!